Devakshi FF - When Life Has Other Plans For You(New Thread)~ Ch30 Pg79

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JessyJane

@JessyJane

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Posted: 8 years ago

#421

Loved this part sooo much! Waiting for more steamy moments in the next chapter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#422

Oh god..!!

It was really awesome di... Loved it..

And yeh message waala twist basha interesting lagta hain...😊😛

Waiting for next update..

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sarica_sefa

@sarica_sefa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#423

each & every part of this story is interesting bt I really really love this part... lots of musty passion love. Really enjoy it.

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write2neetha

@write2neetha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#424

Wow very nice update.. so finally both have fallen in love.. 😳 but what is that msg which can change their life..? 😕 Tina is so bechari.. how Superbly dev tricked her.. 😛 so what punishment the lovebirds r gonna get.. 😕 update soon..

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sjain

@sjain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#425

I feel like having update everyday here

HAHA ..Enjoying this story

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Kuku_92

@Kuku_92

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#426

Hey gayatri di...

Amazing, hilarious n hot chapter...😃

Finally sona came to know about the truth. They r literally becoming uncontrollable n desperate day by day...😳🤣 pls di hmare despo devakshi ko jaldi se ek krdena warna pta ni kya kya karenge 😆.

Oh waaoo... New suspense in your ff...Very excited 😃

Poor Tina 😆 they r making fun of her ...

Waiting for your update

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Hana

@maasha

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#427

Superb dear

Poor Tina, this couple become so naughty.

Waiting to see jay's reaction

Update soon

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@Iqqa

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#428

Ok ao I was busy with the Ramazan and then Eid tou couldn't got the time to read your updates (though I was dying for those) but now read it; the last 3 updates...and believe me maza agaya yaar!!! I love tjeor innocence, their teasings, their small make outs 😆😆😃 those are really cute. Its high time for them to *you know* 😛😛

And hey what was that message?? Yar bas happy happy rakhna please 😲😲 and do update soon !! Cant wait at all !!

And btw belated Eid Mubarak to all of you 😳😳

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#429

Commenting for Chapter-21.

Wowowow.

So the date has been decided to shopping. Wait shopping for material stuff or it is shopping for peace of mind.

Both were a bit free in expressing their wants. Their wishes.

God I can visualize the scene.

Dev getting romantic n Sona ka to sanskari wale level pe evergreen tag hai. Is ladki ka Kya hoga.

N her excitement n want to buy a teddy. N Dev all set to express her that she can make him feel her Bunny.

N the movie was amazingly loving.

How cute they must b looking. Wish show mein aisa kuch dikhate.

N then his wishful dress to b revealed. N Sona all red red.

Then he every time lightens the convo n brings it to normal level. N alas comes the point to b cleared n solved. Bijoy the constipation wala banda.

N their next date talks. Makes me go mad all the way more.

Yaar Sona why did U even have pillow in Ur room. Wish I could steal all.

Gayu ab to kuch romantic bana Sona ko. Dev ka passion n desire aise waste hote nahi dekha jaata.

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#430

Commenting for Chapter-22.

OMG. The first letter of the update itself scared hell out of me.

I jus dreaded the worse n was scared to read further. But alas the author is trust worthy n lovely hence took it in a lovely way.

Bijoy's anger was fine, but Sona's burst was also totally valid.

Wish Bijoy could understand. But good he didn't. Else how would we get chup chup k office mein romance, secret meetings n dates n longing n their golden Courtship period to enjoy n cherish.

Loved how Sona realize her feelings for being apart from Dev n how he made her understand that if this was not done n cleared she would b away from her own loved father, he would continue to live his guilt inspite of wooing her back, Asha being all scared to keep the secret n doubt n Bijoy living in his own bubble far from fact n reality.

N Dev has always repeatedly kept asking n mean his sorry. N I love this abt Dev. He has always been the one to keep the atmosphere between them comfy n light even in post marriage period when he was hell bent for torturing Sona to realizing to admitting to Being friendly to understanding to intense romantic moment to such serious moments.

Chalo aage k moments liye m too much lost in the scene to elaborate. 😉 😳