ARRANGED LOVE MARRIAGE ( IMP note on pg 2 ) (updated pg 30) - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: flowers321

Nice teaser
Update soon

Thank you. I will be updating after 10-15 days.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Ria246

Waiting desperately update soon yaar waiting eagerly for next update 😉

I guess your name is ria. And today is my flight so you will get the update after I am back as there is no network in Karnataka.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Amazing teaser. Dono mana Kar ke bhi shadi Kar lenge . I guess.But mana kyon Kar Rahe Hain.
Update soon Ketaki.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolmeet

Amazing teaser. Dono mana Kar ke bhi shadi Kar lenge . I guess.But mana kyon Kar Rahe Hain.

Update soon Ketaki.

Dono ek dusre ko pasand nahi karte because of their past.
I Will be able to give u update after 2 weeks
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
interesting teaser
plz update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona_naksh

interesting teaser
plz update soon
thanks for pm

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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Interesting... Plz update soon.. n pm me please
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Originally posted by: write2neetha

Interesting... Plz update soon.. n pm me please

I guess your name is Neeta and thank you and plz buddy me if u wish to receive pms😊

~KET@K!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello devakshians Ketaki here, I know I am very very late but what to do time hi nahi Mila par ab yeh chapter pehle wale se thoda bada hai toh likhne ke liye time toh lagega hi na. Chalo now it reading time.



CHAPTER TWO

The next day Sona woke up early and was getting ready to go to the hospital when her mother came to her room. She said " Shona...". " Arey maa good morning". " Shona tu na aaj shaam ko jaldi aaja ghar aur haan maine tere liye kuch kapade select kar rakhe hai woh ek baar dekh le." " maa woh log toh mujhe dekhne aane waale haina toh yeh sajna sawarna mujhse nahi hoga" Sona exclaimed. To which Asha said " Arey beta yeh toh mujhe bhi pata hai par formalities ke liye karna padata hai" " Par maa jin logon se humara rishta judnewala ho unke sath kaisi formalities ?" " Chod tujhse toh mein kabhi jeet nahi paungi. Chal ab tujhe office ke liye nikalana chahiye". " Ok maa bye. Mein shaam ko 7 baje paunch jaungi." " Haan beta bye." Then she went towards her scooty after seeking blesings of her maa-baba and zoomed to the hospital.


She reached to the hospital earliar than her regular time as she will be going to her home early today. Soon the day passed and it was 6:30 in the evening. Sona saw the time and quickly packed her stuff and reached her home at quarter to 7. She agreed to change her clothes to the ones given by her mom, not for the visitors but for her mom as it will make her happy. By 7 she had freshened up and was having some snacks as today all of them would have their dinner late.


After snacks Asha took Sona to sona's room to make her ready as it was 7:30 and the guest were arriving at 8. Sona changed into a beautiful navy blue long gown with golden embroidery.


Sona's dress


And applied a little lip gloss and a layer of mascara on insistance of Elena who was ready to give sona a bridal makeup. Seeing Elena's enthusiasm sona said " Teri excitement dekh ke toh lagta hai ki ladke wale mujhe nahi tujhe dehkne aa rahe hai." " Tere liye mein itni excited hoon aur tu kaise murjhayi hui bethi hai" " Arey woh toh bohut thak gayi hu isliye" "Chal mein chalti hu tu tayar hoja" then elena went down to help her mashi.

After it was 7:55 pm, the guest arrived, Elena came in sona's room

"SONA! SONA! SONA!"

"Kya hua eli itna kyu chilla Rahi hai."

"Arey Sona woh log aagaye jaldi chal mesho tujhe bhula rahe hai."

"Kya !!! aagaye? itne jaldi,mein abhi tak puri tayyar nahi hu!"


Now Sona was nervous,

"Koi baat nahi.tu tension mat le, jab Elena hai sath to darne ki kya baat. Mein tuze tayyar kar deti hu."


Elena was trying to console Sona by being filmy.


" Oye dramebaaz ab drama band kar aur mujhe tayyar kar."

After Elena made sona ready, they both went down and when sona saw the ladka' she was dumbstruck. She couldn't understand what to do? She did not wanted to face dev again and she couldn't even avoid facing him. She was brought back from her reverie by Elena "Haye sona kitna HOT ladka hai" "chup kar badtameez" saying so sona hit her playfully on her back.



Dev was the boy who has came to see Sona. Though Dev had seen Sona many a times but the way she was dressed today he was too stunned to see her. This time Ishwari spoke up breaking Dev's reverie, " Arey wah Bijoy bhai Sahab aapki beti toh bohot Sundar hai

" Sona beta jao Jara Dev ko apna Kamra dikhao" saying so Bijoy sent Dev and Sona into Sona's room.


Both Dev-Sona entered Sona's room and there was an uncomfortable silence between them, they both couldn't understand what to say or do so both of them kept mum.

Finally breaking the ice sona spoke up"Dev see listen to me, mujhe to pata bhi nahi tha ki meri shaadi tumse tey ho rahi hai aur tumhi yeh baat achhe se jante ho ki""

Dev cut her off in mid-sentence

"ki mein tumse shaadi nahi kar Sakti. Right?"

"exactly"

"Toh ab madam ka kehna hai ki meri maa jo bohot dino se mere liye ladki dhoond rahi hai unhe mein jaake shaadi ke liye na boldu?"

" of course. Tumhara kya mere saath shaadi karne ka vichar hai kya?"

"Oh hello mujhe koi pagal kutte ne nahi kaata hai jo mein tumse shaadi karne ke liye maan jau."

"Toh phir tum chahate kya ho!"

Sona exclaimed frustrated.

"Yahi ki meri jagah tum na boldo."

"Kya?!!! Mein na bolu par mein toh pehle se hi haan kar chunki hu kyunki mera manana yeh hai ki mere Maa-Baba mere liye accha ladka hi dhoondenge."

" So you mean mein ek accha ladka hu haina?"

"Of course not. Ab tumhe hi naa bolna padega"

"Dekho mein apni maa ki naa nahi bol Sakta, par mere paas ek idea hai agar hum ek sath naa bole toh"

"thik hai"

As soon as she said that her phone rang and after recieving it, tension was clearly visible on her face. She quickly ran to her mother who was in the kitchen, leaving a confused Dev behind, to tell her that she had some very important work to take care of. Finally bidding bye to bijoy she ran out of the house quickly, but bijoy didn't agreed to let her go but sensing that there was an emergency he sent dev with her. Reluctantly she took dev with her and reached her bestie's house, Tina. Tina's father had a heart attack and she had called sonakshi as she(sona) is a docter and can do some basic treatments and she(tina) was not even getting

any cab to go to the hospital. After reaching there sona quickly checked tina's father's pulse and was trying some basic treatments (i don't know what to do in a heart attack so just written basic treatments) while they were heading to the hospital and dev leading and clearing their way. But while they were on their way they faced a traffic jam as there was an accident there and crowd had gathered there, finally moving through the traffic they reached the hospital and as soon as the staff took tina's father inside sona drove to where they had seen the crowd to help the injured and brought the man who was injured with his mom who was having light scratches to the same hospital where she had admitted tina's dad. The woman thanked sona for helping them and then went to the OT for her son. Then sona went to tina and her family to console them while Dev was just looking at how sona was helping tina. He even knew that sona had also helped the the person injured in the accident that they saw while bringing tina's dad to the hospital. This action of sona had caused dev to change the earlier image of sona he had in his mind, he thought that Sona always showed attitude but today his misunderstandings got cleared and now was regretting the way he behaved with her earlier.


After tina had calmed down a little bit sona decided to take their leave and when she was moving to the exit she saw the same woman from the accident saying something to the receptionist " Dekhiye aap meri baat samajhne ki koshish kijiye mere bete ko ilaaz ki sakt jaroorat hai par abhi iss wakt mere paas paise nahi hai. Aap uska ilaaz shuru kijiye mein aapko 1 ghante mein paise laakar deti hoon" she pleaded to the receptionist. Seeing this sona asked the receptionist " arey kya hua-" but before she could complete the receptionist said " arey DR bose aap yahaan, aapka toh aaj half day tha na?" To this sona replied "haan woh thodi emergency thi, woh chodo tum mujhe yeh bataao inke(pointing towards the woman) bete ka ilaaz kyu nahi kar rahe" "kyunki inke paas fees nahi hai" "par yeh bol toh rahi haina ki yeh baadme Laakar dengi ton phir..." " Par hum atleast advance liye bina toh ilaaz shuru nahi kar sakte na"

" Achha ek kaam karo inka advance mere account mein likh dena" " par..." " maine kaha na". " Thik hai".

After moving a bit aside from the counter the woman thanked Sona and also promised to repay the amount. All this was witnessed by Dev who was now helping Sona by dropping her home as she was very tired and didn't had energy to drive.


When the car screeched in front of sona's house, Dev helped sona come out of the car as by now she was feeling very dizzy and can faint any time. When they reached the entrance there stood Bijoy, Asha,Ishwari and Elena all worried as sona was covered with blood and they started questioning both of them. Dev then explained what all happened and just when he was finished with his explanation Sona fainted but she was saved by a strong pair of arms.


Aaj keliye itna hi abhi aage Sona ke saath kya Hoga? Dev ka reaction kya rahega Sona ke faint hone par ? Yeh sab jaan ne keliye padhiye agla part. And to receive PM's plz buddy me and leave ur comments.


Teaser for chapter 3 pg 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/142159444

Chapter 3 pg 14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/142390228


Love,

Ketaki

Edited by CUTE_K2 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Res.
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Yayyy! First to reply!
Bata de K2 aisa kya hua past main jo dono no no for marriage!
Then Sona helping everyone & Dev ka achanak se hriday Parivartan ho Gaya!😆 Aisa konsa jaane kardiya apni Sona ke saath ki lo hogaya Kalyan, hmm?
Chalo ab dekhte Mr. Dev kaise pyar main padte hai? Waiting to see!

Update soon!

Love,
Anushka

P.S. tution main aaj chodongi nahi tujhe, pata Laga ke rahungi ki kya hua hai dono ke saath, like tit for tat!!!😛
Edited by LoveAnushka - 8 years ago

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