To Love You Back : A Devakshi ff IMP *A/N at pg 24*

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

loving d way story is progressing
update soon
thanks for pm

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kitty1995

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Wowww Woww Wowww..what an update!!! Just wonderful dear

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dakshasharma

@dakshasharma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Wow... Nice update...

I like your writing and the way you described the feeling of Dev n sons.

Thanks for pm dear..

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Hana

@maasha

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Nice update. Sona s nice to everyone. Dev s understanding her slowly. Vicky s good here. Throw gkb out.

Waiting Eagerly.

Update soon.

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saumiee

@saumiee

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Arpi, It is so beautiful❤️

I wait for your updates eagerly and every single update of yours leaves me excited. The last bit was so heartwarming

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Ria.C

@Ria.C

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Luved the update..so beautiful 😊
Waiting eagerly for next part

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Shivangi

@Annei123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Amazing update 😛

Please give the next part

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#138

What an update!!!

I read and reread the update.

Can understand Dev's anguish regarding Neha's failed marriage.

Though he accepted his mother's selection of a bride he is not sure of Sonakshi's intentions.

Once bitten twice shy.

Over and above another bolt from the blue...Vicky and Elina's marriage.

Sonakshi could convince Dev that people are responsible for their decisions and he should not feel guilty and Dev is slowly accepting her in his life.

Dev coming closer to Sona is endearing and we wish to see his reaction in the morning.

I used the word see as this is better than the visuals of Sony.

Please update.

Edited by jayasree.rao - 8 years ago

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PY18

@PY18

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#139

When two worlds meet, sparks r bound to fly. I can feel the chemistry oozing as I picture DevAkshi in ur story. It's that enrapturing. I love the fact that u kept their characters very much similar to wht they are in the show except for a few delightful improvisations like that of ishwari's. Sona seems like the same stubborn adult while Dev is the same sorry head like they used to be initially in krpkab. Surely a wonderful read. Can u PM me next time so i dnt miss. Ty *runs*