DevAkshi OS||My Choice Is You... Not Fifty Shades (21/04)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Wonderful OS👏 Beautifully written...

Loved it...

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ketaki narkhede

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

God Anu,

Tune mujse discuss Kiya aur likh bhi daala but u told me only half anyways I read it now.

But seriously I am in love with Ur writing.

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Sneha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Waise I read it yesterday but didn't comment...
Lazy me 😆
Let me tell u
I loved this new Grey Dixit
I wish he can be Christian Grey too 😉
Anyhow beautifully written...
Loved it...

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Anushka

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Sharica
I forgot that I am yet to comment on this OS..😉
It was beautiful Anu..Loved it...

It was romantic and emotional...The way Dev was teasing and flirting with Sona with context of FSOG was awesome...I so wanted CV's to touch base this again but the didn't...Glad you wrote something on that context..

I liked Devakshi conversation in the end...😊

I hope your father is recovering fast...you take care of your ankle...

Thank You so much!

I'm really glad you liked it!

Yes! Even I wanted the same that once again on the thing FSOG!

My pleasure...

Hmmm... I just wanted some mixed feelings & then stir clear of future they get...

Yes that he is! He has recovered his best in just a month's time! Yup! main toh ekdom fit hoon ab!

Thanks for your lovely concern as well!

Love,

Anushka

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Anushka

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Achha sunn na.. Ek kaam karegi??? Mujhe apne saare stories ka link degi??? Pm karke ya yaha pe?? Ya ek aur kaam kar sakti hai.. Ek alag link banake apne saare works ko waha daal de taki woh link open kare toh sab ek saath mil jaye.. Samjhi...

Pm bhi kar sakti hai...

Ahaaan! Yes I was thinking about it!

Main apna creative index kholne waali hoon... Just in some time more to come...

I'll put all my works there!

Tujh se pehle hi socha tha but now that you have said I'll do it!

Love,

Anushka

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Anushka

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: dakshasharma
Nice os Anushka... Really I wanted something like this as per current story line in show... CVS to Kuch Acha dikhane se rahe...your os give us a new thought so thanks for writing such a beautiful and intimate os..
Thanks for pm dear

Thank You Daksha!

Hmm... CV's bohot sanskaari hai! Itne ki DevAkshi ko pass bhi nahi aane de rahe!

Ohh... My pleasure dear!

I'm glad you liked it!

Welcome😊

Love,

Anushka

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Anushka

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy
Okies

Here I come
Sabse pehle yeh batao ki hows ur dad doing now
Aur haan pair theek haina tera?????

Chalo ab baat karte hai os ki
Padha to maine kal raat hi tha par comment ab karungi

Anush I must say passionate os likhne mein badi hoshiyar hogayi ho tum
To finally Dev ko 50 shades ka sach pata chal hi gaya
Humein laga tha ki banda abhi bhi use color schemes ki book manta hai 😉

So dev has read only 2 editions
Teesri abhi baaki hai 😳
Kyun na dev yeh waali book sona ke saath padhle 😉

Well yeh waala jitna bhi tha i must admit ki i enjoyed reading it
Haan aur mere waale pe jo comment ka reply maine nahi kiya woh issliye coz i will reply to all ur comments together
Chalega na
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Thank you Gayu Di for your concern!

Dad is at its best in recovering!

And mera ankle toh theek bhi ho gaya!

Aisi baat nahi hai Di! You know you are better in writing more passionate stuffs!

Haan! Bhai Sona ke influence main padh liya aur ab teesri dono saath main padhenge😉

Yup even I was thinking same! *hifi*

Glad you enjoyed & liked it!

Aree haan even I have to comment on! there... I just res. my comments!

Will comment soon! Thank god you remembered me!

Love,

Anushka.

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Anushka

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
nice
thanks for pm

Thank you Sona Di!

I'm glad you liked it!

Welocme😊

Love,

Anushka

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Anushka

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: moni160282
That was an fantabulous os. I always hoped they show again a scene related with fifty shades. But chalo atleast u wrote an os on it. Thanks for the wonderful piece of writing.

Thank you so much!

Hmmm... many of us hoped for it! the scene on FSOG again!

Glad you liked it Moni!

LOve,

Anushka