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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys I am back with another OS and yet again this is not proof read.
Will be waiting for your valuable comments.Criticism is also most welcomed.



"Sona, come on, we're getting late!", said a highly irritated Dev

Why in the world did his wife waste so much time on getting ready?She was already the most beautiful woman in this universe for him. He thought sighing deeply, smiling.

"Only 2 more minutes, Dev", Sonakshi said while applying lipstick, looking at Dev's reflection through the mirror standing behind her.He was looking at the time repeatedly

"Why don't you do some work? Put Suhana's milk bottle, baby wipes and some of her toys in my hand bag instead of staring at me like that?"Sonakshi said trying to keep her husband busy incase he lost his cool.

Dev rolled his eyes and moved towards the bed and did as his wife had asked him.

Just then Ishwari came in and left with Suhana saying she wants to gift her something special.

Sonakshi looked at herself in the mirror one last time and went downstairs with Dev and found Suhana playing with her Nicky Bua and grandmother.

Suhana was their life. Her birth had blessed them with loads of happiness and joy. She was the little angel to everyone in the house. Nicky used to play with her all day long, not even letting Sonakshi near.

And today was baby Suhana's first birthday. They had celebrated her birthday lavishly, with the whole neighbourhood present, showering her with gifts and blessings.The party was a total blast.

But Dev wanted to spend sometime with just his daughter and his wife alone, after the grand party too. And his Mom had happily agreed.

"Ye bhi koi poochne ki baat hai beta? Ye din tere liye kitna khaas hai jaanti hun mai,tum log jao maze karo", Ishwari had said lovingly when Dev had sought her permission.

"Sonakshi Maine Ise ye taveez pehnaya hai,ye meri taraf Se meri poti ke liye janamdin ka tohfa hai" Ishwari said to her daughter in law.

"Ye toh bahut sundar hai Ma" Sonakshisaid and kissed her daughter's cheeks while she happily clapped her little hands.

Dev smiled at the two girls in his life who had filled his life with immense happiness and unconditional love.

Dev and sona sat inside the car while Ishwari handed over them Suhana who was busy nibbling on her taaveez which Ishwari had put around her neck to protect her granddaughter from any evil eye.

Dev drove his wife and daughter to their farmhouse.She smiled at his choice and her cheeks were adorned with a dark shade of red.This was the same place where they made passionate love And that is when Suhana was conceived

"Did you like the place sona?I chose this place on purpose because it gave us our princess"Dev said opening her side of the door.She got out of the car with Suhana in her arms and placed a soft kiss on his cheek, earning a smile from him in return.

Dev took Suhana from Sonakshi as they both went inside the farmhouse. The farmhouse was decorated with beautiful fairy lights since his sona loved them.

They entered a room beautifully decorated with hundreds of balloons.There was a table in the centre which was decorated with flowers and ribbons with a cake on it.

"Did you like the decorations my princess" Dev cooed and Soha clapped her little chubby hands in glee indicating that she loved it

Sonakshi couldn't help but smile. She couldn't believe that this was the same man she had met almost three years ago. The man who barely smiled, barely expressed his feelings. The same man she used to call 'AUBHODRO'.

They cut the 'Chocolate cake' Dev had ordered together and Both Dev and Sona fed Suhana one by one.

After having her stomach satisfied Suhana started wriggling in Dev's arms unable to resist her urge to play with the toys which were kept inside a small basket on the floor.

Dev put Suhana down and she crawled towards the basket and started playing.

"Look Sona,how happy she is" said Dev watching his little bundle of joy

"Yeah,you are right" She replied and took a piece of cake and fed him,both got lost in each others eyes

They were brought back to earth by a giggle nearby. As Dev and Sona looked towards Suhana, their jaws dropped almost instantly.

'Dev, our baby..', Sona gasped. 'Is she? Are you seeing what I'm seeing? Is she really?', Dev asked Sona, not believing his eyes.

They both had tears of joy flowing from their eyes,they intertwined their hands as they happily watched their daughter take her first steps, giggling to herself as she made her way towards them.

This was the most beautiful sight, parents could ever witness.Soon enough Suhana reached dev and tucked at his pants,he bent down and took her in his arms while Sona rained kisses all over her face.Looks like our baby gave her parents a gift on her birthday', Sona said smiling, caressing Suhana's cheeks.

After sometime they headed back to their home having enjoyed their best day ever.As soon as they broke the news to their family members they all were elated.

Suddenly they heard Suhana who was now in her Nicky bua's arms trying to say something.They all got excited as to what word she would say as her first word.

'I bet it will be Ma' sona said confidently
"No no it will be Pa hai na my angel" Dev said and cooed Suhana who was only giggling seeing their parents fight over such a small thing

"Baby, say Pa."
"Say ma Suhana." Sona said running her hairs
"No princess, say Pa."Dev said.
"Ma" Sona said tickling her daughter causing her to laugh her beautiful tinkling laughter.
"Suhana, say Pa." Dev said picking her up and holding her in the air above him causing her giggles to get louder and louder.

"Niii." She giggled."Ni?" Sona and Dev said confused.
"Niii!" She giggled even louder."I KNEW IT! SHE WOULD SAY MY NAME FIRST." Nicky said jumping in joy having heard Suhana's screams. "I have been teaching her for months!"

"Niii!" Suhana screamed happily.

"This is so not fair." Dev mumbled causing Sona to laugh.

"We need to work more on this"said sona laughing and took baby Suhana in her arms to put her to sleep.

This was indeed A PERFECT DAY


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Cutiepie.sona thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res😃
*unres*
All I can say is *Awww*😳
Lovely OS Di😃
Loved how Dev was staring at her
Ishu agreed happily for Devakshi & suhana spend time together
And they reached there to the farmhouse
And the first step she took...loved how they felt esctatic😳⭐️
And then last part...
I laughed at Nikki's words😆😆

Edited by Cutiepie.sona - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww it's really lovely and amazing os
Perfect family 😳
Ni for nikki 😆
And ni for nice 😃
Devakshilover thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

Res😃

<font color="#ff3366" size="4">*unres*</font>
<font color="#ff3366" size="4">All I can say is *Awww*😳</font>
<font color="#ff3366" size="4">Lovely OS Di😃</font>
<font color="#ff3366" size="4">Loved how Dev was staring at her</font>
<font color="#ff3366" size="4">Ishu agreed happily for Devakshi & suhana spend time together</font>
<font color="#ff3366" size="4">And they reached there to the farmhouse</font>
<font color="#ff3366" size="4">And the first step she took...loved how they felt esctatic😳⭐️</font>
<font color="#ff3366" size="4">And then last part...</font>
<font color="#ff3366" size="4">I laughed at Nikki's words😆😆</font>


Thank you so much and I am glad that You liked it
Sharica thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#5
This is such a sweet OS..🤗
Loved it...it is simple but impactful..first thing came out my mouth after reading this was "AWWW...

My son is 6 months old and we are also waiting for the day when he will walk or call us ma and pa...I am so happy and can feel it...

Beautiful❤️
Devakshilover thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: flowers321

Aww it's really lovely and amazing os
Perfect family 😳
Ni for nikki 😆
And ni for nice 😃


Thank you 😊
cscs thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#7
Nice OS.
Devakshi missed a lot with Soha's "firsts".
it was so good to read it in ur OS.
N i liked she said first word Nii. 😆
AnanyaGhosh thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww... Its so beautiful and sweet.. Just like you di..
Loved thr small moments of togetherness..and also thr bonding...

Baby soha took baby steps and uttered Nii.. How cute..

Do write more...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res
unres.
aww this was such a cute os... devakshi and suhana!
and i loved it how suhana said "ni"...this was adorable..
thnks for writing such great works di.
thanks for the pm
keep writing
Edited by MehakGera - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow it's seriously a perfect day.
Loved it.
👍🏼

~KET@K!

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