Devakshi FF: Reaching Out (Updated Chapter 29 Epilogue AN- Pg 142) - Page 102

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

127.3k

Users

84

Likes

2k

Frequent Posters

Mishti_94 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: StardustBliss

Fabulous dear..
I'm super happy how's this story flowing with all these twists and turns.
Tho my 'Devakshi heart' wants the patch-up soon, the reader in me love this slow burn.

Poor Dev. He lost in the forever battle of heart vs brain. His stupid brain which filled with Natasha's nonsense and his troublesome past want to run away from Sonakshi. But every string in his heart pulled towards Sonakshi, yearning for her love and warmth. He loves Sonakshi so much that, he doesn't even care about his own happiness.
Please.. Don't make my idiot suffer a lot. 😭

In the other hand, the way Sonakshi reacts surprised me.. And I think Dev also stunned with her decision.. Coz I think somewhat he hopes that she'll never give up on him. Atleast not this soon.

But After thinking a lot, I feel like Psychiatrist Sonakshi Bose trying to use her psychology tricks on Dev.. So that not only he understand 'their Love' but also overcome his fears. Good going mah grl. 👏

I enjoyed it a lot. Eagerly waiting for next chapter.. 👍🏼


Hi There!
The suffering will end soon enough!😃😃
But she hasn't given up on him!😉😉
Thank you so much! ❤️
Mishti_94 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: cscs

One more thing Mishti, I would like to see them being together and dealing with Dev's issues. Bcz it cannot wash away with love. Let Devakshi deal mood swings, temper... everything and still stay strong. Hope will get something like this.



Ps- Thanks Mahua for reminding me.


Hopefully your wish will be coming true soon! 😉
Mishti_94 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: _ShaheErica_

😭😭...😭😭...😭😭...
My condition is literally like this...

Why? Why Dev did this? Oh God, he lost her again.😭😭😡

Mujhe bilkul achcha nahi laga padke...😡

...

Mindblowing chapter dear Mishti.👏 As usual awesome dialogues. Sonakshi asked all the right questions. Loved it. Didn't expect this confrontation to go this way. But no complaints... Keep going. I am excited to know what happens next. Dev deserves a nice scolding from Ranveer and the gang. He is total budduram.

Forgot to mention... Above all this, I want to thank you loads of times for putting this update on Saturday itself.🤗
I was so happy to see the new chapter one day before, I couldn't control myself read it on the same day itself.😃 But very sorry, I couldn't comment immediately, as I was really very sad and also was completely blank. So read it again today, and commenting now.😳

This chapter was really heavy, loaded with solid dialogues. Kudos to you. You r an exceptional writer.👏👍🏼

Thanks again.

P.S. I am appreciating you, that doesn't mean I am not angry. I had asked you to give romance or at least a hug from DevAkshi asap. But the way the story is going, I guess everything is reserved for the last chapter. I hate it.😡😭


Thank you so much Dear! ❤️
Expect the Unexpected, as they say!😆😆
No problem. There is no deadline for comments. You do it when you feel like it!😆😆
Thank you so much for those words of appreciation, once again!😳
Hahaha. I have taken your request into consideration. Don't give up just yet!😉
Mishti_94 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sjain

Hey I am little late in commenting for chapter 22 ooppss
I wont hide but I was disappointed with chap 22 and the reason was I was upset with the fact that even though Dev went to see Sonakshi late night at Mr Shuklas house but then for talking and resolving issues Ranveer Neha and Riya got involved and I wad like WHY where is that sassy Dev gone the one who so rollay ignored Sonaksjona day back..This is such a prrsonal thing between Dev Sonakshi so I would have prefferd keeping these 3 away from this situation and would have like If Dev had planned something on his own
Next thing was the place why talk in such public place..This confused me..They were suppose yo talk to such a serious significant matter yet chose s public place to talk..I wish they had decided to be in a more perdonal space
Okay lol enough of complaining none the less I have to say that it was wrotten so Wonderfully snd Dev's innocent confession was so adorable aww
Thats all


Well, when it comes to talking, they were actually alone. No one was around or with them.
That's where your complaint lay right?
Also, this wasn't the final confrontation. So your sassy Dev is just round the corner. All you have to do is be patient!😆😆😆
Thank you so much Mahua Di! ❤️
Mishti_94 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sjain

Now About chapter 23
It was a very smart and mature feel one
Completely unexpecred
Thats wat I always appreciate about your writing its so subtle and hard hitting
and Big applause to you forbthid one..the flip it had in the end was kick ass..I loved the flow and gradual change in emotions and conversation..Even with confession happening..Nothing looked too much or extra
Very sharp crisp
Its wednesday tomorrow yayy eekkss

Thank you Diii!
I'm glad you found it well written!
*jumps with joy*
❤️
Mishti_94 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

A lovely story.It is convenient to read regular updates as being middle aged we loose continuity if there is a long gap.

Waiting eagerly for Dev to realise and meet Sonakshi again with a lot of trust in himself and his love for his dear girl.


Hi!
Yes, I understand!😊
I am waiting for that too!😆😆
Mishti_94 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Congratulations on that!😆 ❤️
Mishti_94 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: _ShaheErica_

Finally, our wait is over...
Thanks for updating. 🤗

Loved Ashaji's wise words for Sonakshi. Awesome update...

Waiting for Sunday now.

Also waiting for your reply. 😊


Yes!
You're Welcome!
She always was the wisest of them all!😉😉
Thank you for liking it! ❤️
Mishti_94 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara

Hi Mishti,

Initially, I was little worried at not finding the update, maybe because I went too deep into your story. 😆 But it's okay, I completely understand. This season, there has been oodles of weddings.

Coming to the chapter, once again an amazing chapter. 👏
I loved how Ranveer stood by Dev as he vented out all that was inside him, and how Asha made Sonakshi understand that how she misinterpreted the entire matter. However, I did not understand the engagement part in the end. My guess is, it's Jatin-Elena's engagement while Dev thinks it is Sonakshi's.

Completely intrigued. 👍🏼
Waiting for next.

- Tia.

Hahaha.
The pull is still working I see.😆
Thank you Tiaaa! ❤️
You'll find out soon enough!😉
Mishti_94 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: cscs

Whose engagement 😲

N what did Neha told Dev?

Aise kaun chorta hai cliff hanger pe 😭

Btw nice chapter. Asha being the sensible one explained Sonakshi that it was Dev's own fears and not his lack of trust on her love. N m glad Dev decided to go after Sonakshi.

Lets see what's store in the next chapter.


That's the Big question, hai na?😆
Thank you Charu Di! ❤️

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".