Cv's should rename dev and sona

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Posted: 8 years ago
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As Erica and shaheer only . because lets be honest all actions, clothes and even mannerism is of shaheer and erica only. They are not DEV and Sona .
Such weak script and pathetic direction 😕😕 Ke their offscreen drama seems to be more interesting than whatever ghisa pita track they are showing 😕😕

Where is unique approach,their so called breaking stereotype,refreshing and original scenes.

Can both writers match their scripts together, or watch season 1 at least .

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Story has totally lost its flow since Dev's realisation track has been introduced.

Post leap story made complete sense. Dev was living in his anger against all and Sonakshi in her.
For Dev, Ishwari was an equal culprit. Dev n Ishwari scenes were bang on.

Dev and Sonakshi scenes made sense. The anger they had for each otherfor past 7 years was evident.
Then came the accident sequence, which was suppose to soften Dev's stand for Sonakshi and Jatin was introduced to create a jealousy track.

But then suddenly , Suhana- Dev track came and story lost its flow.
It is not making ne sense.
Dev has made peace with Ishwari, has bcum same old Dev with her, but even after knowing the truth he is angry with Sonakshi.

One day he is hurt with his families lies and decides he will give his daughter time, next day he barges in his daughter's room to make her meet Ishwari.
Next day he listens to Sonakshi's shouting peacefull and very next day he ties Sonakshi to the door, to be with his daughter.
Today he wants to dance with Sonakshi.
Ishwari is talking big big things about parenting and Dev is happy.
He is winning every score in front of his daughter and suddenly the mother who had brought herdaughteralone is incapable of getting one injection from the doctor.

They jumping from one emotion to another so fast that, u don understand the reason for emotion also.
This is what Shaheer said that day, we as actors also don't know what is going to happen between these two, there so much high and low.

Jatin's entry looks totally waste.

I have a strong feeling, story has been changed after Jatin's entry.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dbrk

Story has totally lost its flow since Dev's realisation track has been introduced.

Post leap story made complete sense. Dev was living in his anger against all and Sonakshi in her.
For Dev, Ishwari was an equal culprit. Dev n Ishwari scenes were bang on.

Dev and Sonakshi scenes made sense. The anger they had for each otherfor past 7 years was evident.
Then came the accident sequence, which was suppose to soften Dev's stand for Sonakshi and Jatin was introduced to create a jealousy track.

But then suddenly , Suhana- Dev track came and story lost its flow.
It is not making ne sense.
Dev has made peace with Ishwari, has bcum same old Dev with her, but even after knowing the truth he is angry with Sonakshi.

One day he is hurt with his families lies and decides he will give his daughter time, next day he barges in his daughter's room to make her meet Ishwari.
Next day he listens to Sonakshi's shouting peacefull and very next day he ties Sonakshi to the door, to be with his daughter.
Today he wants to dance with Sonakshi.
Ishwari is talking big big things about parenting and Dev is happy.
He is winning every score in front of his daughter and suddenly the mother who had brought herdaughteralone is incapable of getting one injection from the doctor.
This is what Shaheer said that day, we as actors also don't know what is going to happen between these two, there so much high and low.
Jatin's entry looks totally waste.
I have a strong feeling, story has been changed after Jatin's entry.


Exactly nothing making sense . 😕😕 Why there is so much inconsistency ke sabke sab ka personality transplant ho gaya😕😕😕
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Posted: 8 years ago
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real life style of actors lifted.. check
track/story lifted from a Bollywood blockbuster.. check

Season 2 ready to drag another year 😡
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vibg

real life style of actors lifted.. check
track/story lifted from a Bollywood blockbuster.. check

Season 2 ready to drag another year 😡

🤢🤢 such lazy part from writers, mehnat nahi karni originality par toh show ko extend kyu Kiya. 😕😕 what next kal ho na ho.,soha ko "bimar Bata kar" lou story Chalao.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tinkerfairy

🤢🤢such lazy part from writers, mehnat nahi karni originality par toh show ko extend kyu Kiya.😕😕 what next kal ho na ho.,soha ko "bimar Bata kar" lou story Chalao.



Sona already has an undiagnosed medical condition.. they''ll kill her off and then DevIsh will raise Soha together! The result.. another emotionally immature, weak person who cant handle the teal world without bullying 😆

Story is sooo out of control and dilogues OTT.. not worth watching. I am njoying the forum!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dbrk

Story has totally lost its flow since Dev's realisation track has been introduced.

Post leap story made complete sense. Dev was living in his anger against all and Sonakshi in her.
For Dev, Ishwari was an equal culprit. Dev n Ishwari scenes were bang on.

Dev and Sonakshi scenes made sense. The anger they had for each otherfor past 7 years was evident.
Then came the accident sequence, which was suppose to soften Dev's stand for Sonakshi and Jatin was introduced to create a jealousy track.

But then suddenly , Suhana- Dev track came and story lost its flow.
It is not making ne sense.
Dev has made peace with Ishwari, has bcum same old Dev with her, but even after knowing the truth he is angry with Sonakshi.

One day he is hurt with his families lies and decides he will give his daughter time, next day he barges in his daughter's room to make her meet Ishwari.
Next day he listens to Sonakshi's shouting peacefull and very next day he ties Sonakshi to the door, to be with his daughter.
Today he wants to dance with Sonakshi.
Ishwari is talking big big things about parenting and Dev is happy.
He is winning every score in front of his daughter and suddenly the mother who had brought herdaughteralone is incapable of getting one injection from the doctor.

They jumping from one emotion to another so fast that, u don understand the reason for emotion also.
This is what Shaheer said that day, we as actors also don't know what is going to happen between these two, there so much high and low.

Jatin's entry looks totally waste.

I have a strong feeling, story has been changed after Jatin's entry.


100%agree wid u.if does know basic thinks which a doctor should know thn should throw away her medical degree certificate...ishwari d only Savior,sona is hopless she doesnt know anything 😡 if u r watching it for entertainment purpose its gud otherwise don't try to find logic.

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