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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi lovely people😃 Firstly,I really wanna thank all of you'll for such a warm welcome!! You guys are literally the sweetest people and I'm glad I took the decision of joining you guys😉

So this is the first time I'm writing a piece on Dev & Sonakshi,it's based on Devakshi and Suhana's bond...It's a happy story,very different from the current plot.Without talking further,here's the shot,hope you guys like it.
Feedbacks - good,bad or ugly are always welcome😳

Happy reading x

"SUHANAAA", screamed Sonakshi angrily as she called out to her 6 year old daughter

Hearing her mother scream,little Suhana hid herself behind her father

"Kya baat hai Sona,tum chilla kyu rahi ho?",asked Dev peeping down from the first floor

Sonakshi looked up to find Dev looking behind him again and again nervously

"Dev,abhi ke abhi neeche aao aur saath mein apni beti ko bhi lana jisse aapne itna bigaad ke rakha hai"

"Papa,mumma ko bolo ke Miss Suhana Bose so gayi hai",whispered Suhana from behind him

"Aaj toh aapki mummy mujhe kaccha chaba jayegi",Dev whispered back

"Sona woh Suhana so gayi hai"

"What? Aisa kaise ho sakta hai,Suha ko meine 2 min pehle hi khana diya tha"

Oops,Dev was gone.

"Dekho mein janti hun ki Suha aapke piche khadi hai aur aapko yeh sab kuch kehne ko bol rahi hai.chup chap abhi ke abhi dono neeche aao"

Dev knew he didn't have a choice but to listen to his wife. Taking Suha's hand,Dev slowly came down.

There stood Sonakshi whose face was red by now because of her anger and beside her was their neighbor Mrs.Singh

"Arre Mrs. Singh,aap yahan achanak?'

"Achanak nahi Mr.Dixit,mein yahan aapki beti ki complaint le kar aayi hun"

"Suhana ki complaint? Kya kiya ussne?"

All this while Suha was hiding behind Dev, peeping through his legs

"Kya kiya? Yeh puchiye kya nahi kiya?"

"Okay,kya nahi kiya usne?"

Sonakshi glared at him while Mrs. Singh looked at him in disbelief

"I mean,aap itne gusse mein kyun hai? kya kiya Suhana ne?"

"Aaj school mein aapki beti ne mere bete ko bohot maara,itna maara itna maara ki who itna dara hua hai ki woh bed ke neeche se nikal hi nahi raha hai"

Dev looked at her confusingly, Suhana had hit a boy?

Before he could ask further,Sonakshi started

"Suha,abhi ke abhi bahar aakar aunty se maafi maango"

Slowly Suhana came out and stood in front of Mrs. Singh with her head bowed down

"Lekin mumma..."

"Lekin wekin kuch nahi Ms Suhana Bose,say sorry"

"Sorry aunty",said Suhana innocently which made Mrs. Singh melt

"It's okay,aainda mat karna",saying so she left

Seeing her chance, Suhana started to run when

"Not so soon young lady",said Sonakshi sternly

Suhana stooped in her tracks

"Dev aap aise bhud banke kyun khade ho? Yeh sab aapke laad pyar ka natija hai"

"Arre lekin mujhe koi batai ga Suhana ne uss ladke ko maara kyun?,asked Dev scratching his head

"Woh papa Aayush meri best friend ko taang kar raha tha iss liye meine usse bohot maara"

"Kitna maara?"

Sonakshi looked at him in disbelief

"bohot"

"Shahbash",with that Dev high-fived Suha

"I don't believe this.Aapki beti ne ek ladke ko itna maara and instead of shouting at her,aap usse shahbashi de rahe ho wah Mr. Dixit wah

"nahi nahi mein Suhana se bohot naraz hun aur usse daantunga bhi"

Dev turned around to Suha and winked at her

"Suhana,very bad,aapko aisa bilkul nahi karna chahiye tha,maafi maango mumma say",said Dev loudly to add effect

Sonakshi rolled her eyes looking at the drama unfold in front of her

They were never going to change.

"Sorry mumma",said Suha softly

Before Sonakshi could say anything further,

"Wow Sona tumne Suhana ko itni jaldi maaf bhi kardiya,wow tumhara dil kitna bada hai,chalo chalo Suhana video game khelte hai",with that Dev picked Suha up and ran towards his room.

Sonakshi shook her head and laughed at their antics before making her way to the kitchen.

Who said parenting was easy?

---The end---




Edited by Jambread3 - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice ...really enjoyed and brought back beautiful memories of my childhood...something similar happened at our house when we were young...my younger sis was very naughty...one day a guy in class pulled her dupatta while they were playing basket ball...twice she told him not to trouble her ...third time he did that she hit him a lot and so badly ...that next day my mom was called to school to meet the class teacher and principle...my mom was furious on her...but my dad supported her fully...infact appreciated her 😆...when I read this story it reminded me of that incident.
Edited by WeRockTheWorld - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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aww this was so sweet dear
Filled my heart with joy
Mere ghar aisa scene abhi bhi hota hai but with regular role reversals kabhi mom SE dad bachate hai to kabhi dad SE Mom
Write more of these stuffs loved it to the core
I could totally imagine the scene in front my eyes
Btw I have PMd you another of my works and I have written a gocha-soha OS too
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Posted: 8 years ago
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O wow its soo cute... Loved it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely OS 👏..
Do write more often
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a cute OS.
Loved it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's cute! I hope we do get some scenes like this later:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice i enjoyed reading it
I hope we get to see something of this sort in d show
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is such a cute OS...
This happens in almost every house...specially in a father daughter bond...

Loved it...

Do write more dear😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's very simple and sweet story dear
Pls write more
Edited by flowers321 - 8 years ago

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