Devakshi FF - When Life Has Other Plans For You(clsd)~New Thread Crtd - Page 91

i'm a big fan of your writing

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Ha ha bilkul karungi khush.. *making weird faces to make u laugh*😆😆

Mogambo khush bilkul nahi hua

Originally posted by: Sharica

Ok dear..waiting...

Mujhe bhi office join karna hain 2 weeks baad...not feeling like joining back😭...but jaana to padega..

Hawww gini dii sry
Lunch break bola tha par lunch mein deri ho gayi
Abhi thodi der mein karungi

Aap bhi kaam pe jaoge????
Maternity leave khatam?????
Whr do u wrk btw?????

Originally posted by: write2neetha

Seriously this ish is becoming unbearable... How can she stoop so low...N plz don't make dev take any bad step jisse use baad mein pachthana pade.. plz in next chapter let both dev n Sona have a conversation n clear their misunderstanding.. dev hates nuts I loved it.. n plz update soon waiting eagerly to know what will happen next..

I know she's unbearable dear
But kya kare story ki jaroorat u know
Yaar dev already bohot kaand kar chuka hai
Pachtana to use hai hi
Will clear their mu soon
Thanks for the comment

Originally posted by: TwinFlames

dev's anger.. & ishwari ne toh creepy ness ki limit hi cross kar di.. 🤢 jay pls do something.. poor sona! 😭

Everything will be fine soon dear
Trust meee
Will update soon

Originally posted by: Devakshilover

Extremely sorry for the late reply Di but nowadays I am very busy
I leave from my home at 9 in the morning and enter at 9 PM
So will be giving a short comment on both the parts
so it was shocking to see sona behaving so normally with dev and dev once blast on her and then realise his mistake but then again gets manipulated by Ish's venom
and ye kya??trip par bhi bechari sona ko nahi chhoda ISHU maata ne waha bhi apna jaal Bichha diya I hope her true face comes in front dev soon

Its ok dear
Guess aapne koi new job join kiya hai
Koi baat nahi
Thanku for commenting

Originally posted by: SecretSuperstar

i'm a big fan of your writing

since aap ki writing is quite intense and real i wish ki ish ki bahut hi badiya dhulai padhne ko milegi (show mein to nahi hoga yahi padke khush hojayenge)

Hey thanks dear
Glad to have a new reader on board
Hope u continue commenting on my further updates
Will set everything right soon

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Its ok dear
Guess aapne koi new job join kiya hai
Koi baat nahi
Thanku for commenting

Nahi Di mai khud coaching jaati Hun college ki padhai phir 4 baccho ko tution padhati hun

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Mogambo khush bilkul nahi hua

Originally posted by: Sharica

For me it is like 2 updates in a day...I am loving it...

Chapter was good..Dev again back to his taunting.

Flashback on Sona being normal was good...but I feel its easy for Jay to advise but Sona is on the receiving end...she won't be able to follow Jay's advise in all the circumstances and it was proved in your chapter today...

Dev hates Natasha and I love that part...but the way he treated Sona was too much...She don't deserve this..

Ish ko to tumne bilkul he neeche gira diya...Is she worth to be called a woman??? And Dev again believing what he has not seen from his eyes...I hope he don't do anything stupid after this..Sona ko itna hate karti hain Ish ki usko itna cheap bana diya Dev ke aage...

Gayu now its too much dear..pls abhi Ish ka chapter close karo..she is unbearable now...I hate her..

Ab thoda thoda sach to samne lao...bahot galat ho gaya Sona ke saath...pls😭..Ish ki wajah se kuch nahi hona chahiye...

Ab next chapter ka wait karungi...

Aapki to chandi hai gini diii
Mata vaishno devi ki hi kripa hai shayad

Actually
They say na its easy to advise but difficult to follow
Same applies to sona

Ab aap hi chahti thi ki dev nuts ko yaad kare
Isiliye uss manhoos ko beech mein laana pada
I knw he was too bad with sona

Isshh ko jitna neeche girau utna kam hai
Par kya kare she is needed in d story

Haan haan gini dii ab ho gaya mera dark likhne ka sapna poora
Ab sab thik karne ka soch rahi hoon
Will update soon