Devakshi FF - When Life Has Other Plans For You(clsd)~New Thread Crtd - Page 87

mixed feeling after reading this part...

how could a mother do this to his son..???😡 or Bechare Shonakshi, how long she have to suffer..???😭 How long Dev have to bear all this pain...???😭

But really I am so much emotionally attached with your story. every day i wait for your update, eagerly wait for what happen next in Dev & Sona's life...😊

r u sure that ishwari is dev's biological mother?? i mean she's disgusting man.. how can she stoop so low?? arghhh
ye sona kaha ma bete k bich pad gayi

OMG ...Dev as a dark character..will he force upon her...sexually abuse her in a fit of anger to show his power...I hope not...if he does that ...when he knows the truth he will feel even more miserable...and for life long that guilt will be there...at the same time he will hate his mom to push him to such an extant...probably never get back to Ishwari again...

well as usual predictions of mine...😆

I have always avoided dark romance ...and never got interested ...but urs have a diff touch probably its the hope that you give ur story that every cloud has a silver lining ...

I liked the conversation betwn Sona and Dev's father...but I thought after listening to him she wouldnt show her fear and there by declining to go for trip ...not giving in to his threat...

As far as writing goes , you do have professional touch to ur narration ...and I love ur writing ...

Am eagerly waiting to see how much more harm can he cause to their relationship and her...and how are you going to bring out the truth abt Natasha and Ishwari ...

Please update soon 😳

This update is like a treat to me...
Itna long chapter maza aa gya...
Finally u cleared aa my queries regards to Sona being normal...

This cruel lady named Ishwari...can I plz kill her???
But m sure once Dev comes to knw bout her deeds, he will handle her pretty well...

Poor Sona... no matter how much she tries... it's getting more harder for her...
Hopefully, Dev will soon find out truth n will apologize for his harsh behaviour.

Really looking forward for the coming update...
Once again beautifully written. 😛

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Pehle a very biggy wala thanks for updating after my exams... Thanks di aap sach mein bht achhi ho.. Pehle adi k liye woh ID khatam kiya jaldi and now for me.. Thanks di.. Waise yaad aya.. Adi ko bht miss kar rhi hu.. I hp yeh msg woh pade if possible...

Now update... Well.. It was dark and very scary.. Dev ka woh sab kehna sona ko and sona par mental and physical torture.. Jay ka scene achha tha.. I wonder iss insaan ne aise chudail jaisi ish se shaadi kaise kiya???

Now Indore trip party.. Woh dress... Like seriously di... Yeh twist zaruri tha??? Why cant ish just die in some fire or get killed by a mob of protestors... Why why why... Itni ghatiya hai.. Ek aurat itni ghatiya.. Itna neeche.. I was so in disgust reding her plotting and mentality... Just yucks.. Matlab..

Hamari hit list badti jaa rhi hai di.. Nuts ish and now this hotel boy.. Iska toh dev ekdom murder kar dega.. I wish kar de.. Pls...

And now.. Kya kahu samajh mein nhi aa rha hai.. Sach.. Par yeh chap honestly thoda disgusting tha with regards to ish ka part.. Baki sab was okay.. I can read in the hope sab thik hoga jaldi.. Par ish.. I wanna see her commit suicide not fake par in real like guilt se bharkar..

Di chap 10 ho gya.. Aab toh ish ka sach and hamari wishes puri karo.. We are thirsty and hungry for seeing those.. Pls.. Waiting.. Update soon...

Awww u r always welcome dear
Tere exams ke khatam hona ka hi to wait tha
I'm glad ki u r finally free


Yaar pehli baar dark ff attempt kiya hai
Koi to support kardo mujhe

Yaar bina jaroori twist ke gayu nahi likhti
Isilye hasn yeh jaroori tha
Aur bhalamain iss ko glorify kyun karungi

Hit list badi hai to kam bhi hogi
U found the chappy disgusting??????
Oh I'm sorry dear
But it was required

Isshu aur nutska sach jald saamne aayega
Dnt worry

Will update soon

Haye mera res wala comment kaha gaya

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Awww u r always welcome dear
Tere exams ke khatam hona ka hi to wait tha
I'm glad ki u r finally free


Yaar pehli baar dark ff attempt kiya hai
Koi to support kardo mujhe

Yaar bina jaroori twist ke gayu nahi likhti
Isilye hasn yeh jaroori tha
Aur bhalamain iss ko glorify kyun karungi

Hit list badi hai to kam bhi hogi
U found the chappy disgusting??????
Oh I'm sorry dear
But it was required

Isshu aur nutska sach jald saamne aayega
Dnt worry

Will update soon

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Next reply mera aaega😊

Fantastic updates (last one and this one too)

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Gayu di soo gyi hai 😆😆