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PY18

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Posted: 8 years ago

#231

Sona is in misery. That's really tough to handle 😒 plz update asap. Please 😭

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 8 years ago

#232

Wow ...this story is getting interesting ...loved it ...poor Sonakshi !!

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Sharica

@Sharica

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Posted: 8 years ago

#233

Natasha 😡 She is such a b***h...Gussa aa raha hain uspe...

Dev, you are such a dumb person...and for Natasha you forgot friendship of 20 yrs and now hurting your friend by taking her real name...you don't even knw how much it hurts when something like this happens...you idiot😔

Gayu I want Dev to suffer...itni easily Sona ko maaf mat karne dena Dev ko...

I am feeling bad for Sona...apne friend ke liye acha soch rahi thi aur usne kya kiya...Obviously jo Natasha Dev ko de sakti hain vo Sona thodi na de sakti hain ( I hope you knw what i mean) isliye shaadi ki itni jaldi ho rahi hain..

Bhugatne do maa bete ko...maja to tab aayega jab Dev khud Natasha ko kisi aur ke saath dekhega in intimate manner...tab I want to see his and Natasha's condition...

And yes ye Natasha ki ache se dhulai karwana Dev se...Dil khush kar dena us din..but ab iski pol khol do...

Natasha mere samne hoti to main uska khoon kar deti...

Anyways now you have to update soon..ye Natasha ka bura nahi hoga tab tak no patience..

Waiting...tick tock tick tock...your time starts now...😉

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
Haww... Itna chota sa chapter... Nhi chalega... Kyu...
And now sona ne sach kaha and dev ne confront kiya... Par nuts is such a ba****d woh samajhti kya hai.. Aab web series ka natak chalaya... Makes me cringe... Aur kitna neeche giraoge iss character ko??? Isshhh... Yeh sab padke mujhe itna gussa aya ki man kar rha hai nuts and dev dono ko thappad lagau... Bechari sona.. And now dev ne shaadi ka date final kar liya... O god.. I hp yeh shaadi ruk jaye pls... Pls... Pls... Yeh shaadi matt hone dena.. I beg u warna main marr jaungi...

And ish is utter rubbish...

Iss baar pls jaldi update karo... Pls.. I cant wait to read d chatni making process of nuts... Pls...

Anu theek se dekh chappy chota nahin hai

tune jaldi padh ke khatam kar diya excitement mein

Sona pe do min ka hi sahi bharosa kiya tha Dev ne

Nats ne kaand kiya to kya kar sakte hain????

Uska character likha hi hai maine taaki use neeche giraane ka mauka mile

woh neeche giregi tabhi to Dev ko ehsaas hoga ki Sona kitni acchi hai

aur Nats ki chatni jald hogi don't worry

this time I'll really update soon

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: Anjali333
Ye natasha
Kya nautanki hai...
Bechare dev ko bewakoof bana rahi hai...
I will kill her😡😡
Bunny n cheeku ki friendship me crack daal diya...

Jaldi jaldi iska real face dev ke saamne laao...
Or iska khoob band bahaana
Jo uski sab nautankiyon ko compensate kare
Please di...
Natasha ki dhulai honi chahiye...
Pleaseee😳

Kab tak chalne wali h nats ki nautanki??😲

Devakshi ko mila do!

Update next part very soon...
Very much eager to read further

Yaar Anji Natasha to hai hi characterless

usse aur expect bhi kya kar sakti ho tum

Natasha ki dhulayi ki itni demand

itni demand to kisine Dev aur Sona ko milane ki bhi nahi ki

tum sab ki demand poori hogi

Natasha ki aise chatni hogi ki duniya dekhegi

Natasha ka drama bass kuch aur hi din chalega

tu fikar na kar

iss baar pakka i will update soon

10 pages karo iss update ke baad

update mil jayega

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

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Posted: 8 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: flowers321
Waiting 😭

updated dear

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

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Posted: 8 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: MehakGera
amazing story dear...
the plot is damn interesting...
cheeku and bunny...awww...
natasha...hate her...
hope everythibg gets fine...want to see them fall in love...
you are a great writer...continue soon...
do pm me :-)

Thanku so much for the appreciation dear

your name is Mehek i assume

lovely name I must say

well all will be fine very soon

all I would say is stay tuned

btw U are an amazing writer as well

will put my comments on your OS too

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

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Posted: 8 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: TwinFlames
natashaaa.. ye ladki.. aur kitna jhoot bolegi? poor sona.. & dev toh.. arghhh!

nice update

uska character hi aisa hai

her life is a web of lies

will update soon

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

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Posted: 8 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: flowers321
Amazing
And dev dumbo 😡
Sona ki koi new entry h kia
Bechara 😭

nahi yaar ek aur new entry ko main handle nahi kar paungi shayad

itne characters nahi sambhalte

will update soon

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona
Aa gya update!
Mere liye hai!😃
Yayaya...thanku jee😳
Chapter is Dhamakedaar😉
Must say Nats is a fabulous actor!👏
Bandi kitna drama karti hai!😆😆😆
I was laughing imagining her crocodile tears!😉😆
And cheeku se Sona...
Awww!.felt bad for Sona!😭😭
But I'm confident Sona will help Dev out in this
She'll not let him destroy his life so easily!😉😃
Awesome chapter👏
Update soon😊