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27JAAN

@27JAAN

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#81

This was so sweet❤️

Papa, Kya aap mujhe hug karoge!

This line just stole my heart

Keep writing dear

Would love to read your creations from now👍🏼

Edited by 27JAAN - 8 years ago

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Anjali Sharma

@Anjali333

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Jambread3
WOW👏
I'm still at loss of words!
It was amazinggg and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this

you've portrayed all the emotions so beautifully

No doubt I'm disliking Dev about his whole mistreating Sona and listening to his mother all the time but I simply love Dev and Suhana scenes so this OS was a delight!

Hope to read more such pieces from you! 😃

Thank you so ooo much Kiara for ur such a sweet comment

Yes...dev nd ishu scenes r some irritating

But I love dev

Devakshi nd suhana

Nd my golu

Will surely write dear😃

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Anjali Sharma

@Anjali333

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: 27JAAN
This was so sweet❤️
Papa, Kya aap mujhe hug karoge!
This line just stole my heart

Keep writing dear
Would love to read your creations from now👍🏼

Thanks for ur encouraging words

I will surely write

Sent u buddy request

Accept it

Then I ll PM u

Whenever I ll write something

Edited by Anjali333 - 8 years ago

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Shaun

@Jade0001

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Congratulations on your first story its Soulful and so Beautiful

Golu speaking about his dad that he does not spend time with him yet he has that one person that gives him all the love and attention in the world and that's his BigCha while Suhana never had the pleasure of staying with her father but when she came to Delhi she met him and they became friends but now knowing he is her father makes all the difference because now she too can be loved and share her moments with her Papa

both these kids need Dev in their lives

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Anjali Sharma

@Anjali333

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Jade0001
Congratulations on your first story its Soulful and so Beautiful

Golu speaking about his dad that he does not spend time with him yet he has that one person that gives him all the love and attention in the world and that's his BigCha while Suhana never had the pleasure of staying with her father but when she came to Delhi she met him and they became friends but now knowing he is her father makes all the difference because now she too can be loved and share her moments with her Papa
both these kids need Dev in their lives

Thanks a lot Shaun😊

Both soha and golu need dev...dev is very much important to them

Golu's father is good for nothing...so he consider bigcha at that place

And soha spent six years of her life without her father

Now she found him...

So she want to be with her father always

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#86

OMG How did I miss such a beautiful OS,I remember now I was on a vacation from 28th Feb to 8th march
Take a bow Anjali(,I don't know if you are older than me or not so not calling you Di yet)
Coming back to your OS,It was beautifully penned poor golu his father never give him company so he decided to praise his BigCha,so cute and then baari aai humari Soha baby ki,I loved the way you described her pinning for her father's love and realising what she has been missing since last 6 years and finally Papa kya aap mujhe hug karoge was the best ending
Do write more

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Anjali Sharma

@Anjali333

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Devakshilover
OMG How did I miss such a beautiful OS,I remember now I was on a vacation from 28th Feb to 8th march
Take a bow Anjali(,I don't know if you are older than me or not so not calling you Di yet)
Coming back to your OS,It was beautifully penned poor golu his father never give him company so he decided to praise his BigCha,so cute and then baari aai humari Soha baby ki,I loved the way you described her pinning for her father's love and realising what she has been missing since last 6 years and finally Papa kya aap mujhe hug karoge was the best ending
Do write more

I m so glad that you read my OS

No problem...

Padh to liya na...late hi sahi

Actually u elder to me...so I ll call u di

Thank you so much for ur encouraging words.

It really means a lot to me

Golu in his innocence praises his bigcha when he is asked to say something about his bigcha

Because for him...his bigcha is only his family

I ll surely write

But not now

After my exams I will try

If something comes to my mind

Then I ll surely write

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Sneha

@Rhy2015

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Wow Anji!!!
U wrote it so well...very cute n beautiful OS
Sorry for being late but I knw, u knw that m a late comer 😉
Keep writing coz I didn't feel for a second that it was ur first OS...
Will look forward for more stories...
😛 😛 😛

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Anjali Sharma

@Anjali333

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Rhy2015
Wow Anji!!!
U wrote it so well...very cute n beautiful OS
Sorry for being late but I knw, u knw that m a late comer 😉
Keep writing coz I didn't feel for a second that it was ur first OS...
Will look forward for more stories...
😛 😛 😛

Thank you so much sneha di😳😃

Ok...ok...no problem

I know well...u r late comer😆

Late hi aa gaye...

Aa to gaye...

That's enough!

You were busy na...

To maaf kiya...😉

Next me late mat hona

Ok...