Sau Dard A Devakshi Os

Awww such a brilliant piece of writing...you penned it down so beautifully...felt so real and so emotional...wish Devakshi reunion happens something like this in the show...
And please keep writing more...loved your writing style the way you described the whole scene it was damn beautiful...
Waiting for more ...

OMG!

This is so beautiful👏

I had tears in my eyes while reading 😭

Dev's pain,his restlessness and his emotions when he finally learned the truth was very well written
and you expressed sona's emotions through the diary very beautifully
Keep writing 😃

You penned down all the emotions beautifully...

Such a brilliant OS.👏👏👏. You should surely write more often. It felt like a visual of all the years from the time they separated. This can also be turned into a TS when we have more of Devakshi conversation after Dev leaves without meeting Sona and Soha that day.

Awww You got the right note...thank you so much for their reunion script.. they both wont be able to talk and express as they are not ready to take off their MOVE ON masks from their face.. they both dont know they are acting by the name of MOVE ON.. any third person or a diary was the only way they could get out of this drama .. and bingo u did it..

Pls do write how Dev will handle ishwari 😳 cant wait to read more from You !!

Beautiful beautiful ...

Awesome os.

Beautifully written...tears were flowing from my eyes when Dev was reading Diary...Loved it

Awesome OS...It was an emotional ride...I had tears in my eyes...