SS:Papa and his Pari(Dev-Soha Bonding)*COMPL* EPILOGUE pg124 26/3/2017

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.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#711

Amazing chappy...

Off to give boards...

Pehla pehla paper...

Thanks for the pm

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fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#712

Beautiful update Aazeen. Rocked it.

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Anjali Sharma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#713

*Unres*

WOW!

What an emotional update...

Excellent⭐️

Show mein aisa kyu nahi...

Dev kyu apni maa ke paas chala gaya tha bhaag kar

Bola tha na ye CVs ko bhej do...par aapne meri baat nahi maani na

Ab bhi time hai...

Dev sonakshi ka emotional confrontation mil sakta hai...

Ye wala or tadap tadap ke OS ka 2nd part...dono bhej do...CVs impress ho jaaenge...or aapko rakh lenge

Iska to ek aur bhi faayda hoga...

Agar apko unhone rakh liya...to aap hume future story bhi bata doge...

Jaldi karna...

Dev soha ka kitna cute and sweet moment tha...

I loved it...

Mujhe show mein bhi ye chahiye

Kya bola hai dev ne sona ko...ekdum emotional hi kar diya...😭😭

Sona kuch boli kyu nahi...

Mujhe uski baat bhi sunni thi...

Kahaan aake khatam kar diya

Gandi baat...

De do

Next part bhi ab...

Padhne ke liye bhut eager hun main...

Sona di se kar lenge contact...bas aap kar do...

Jaldi jaldi...

And 1 important thing...

Maine 1 post banai hai... Chandani di ke liye Congratulations post

Aapko link bhi send kar diya

Ab apko wahaan par reply karna hai...

Please

Edited by Anjali333 - 8 years ago

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Soumya21ag

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Posted: 8 years ago

#714

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Excuse me for any typos or something...
I really was very sleepy while writing...
consider this as my stint to write while I am dozing on and off...
I hope it would be a worthy reading update...

what do u mean hope

padhne se pehle hi bol rahi hun

the update will be amazing

aap ho hi itni achchi writer

sote hue bhi likh sakti ho

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Soumya21ag

@Soumya21ag

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Posted: 8 years ago

#715

dii itna amazing update👏

aankhein bhar aayi😭

couldn't control my self only while reading this update

dev and soha's bond is adorable

the way he fed her

the way he made her fall asleep

took care of her😳

all of them gave me father goals

and then dev's questions

i feel so bad for him

he does not deserve this😭

i know even sona has been through a a lot

but she had soha by her side

but dev was all alone

and im so happy that sona realised

that her daughter missed her dad

dev and sona's confrontation was really emotional

par agli baar se phir kabhi mat kehna

"I'm sorry if this update wasn't upto mark"😡

coz aapka update aur achcha...bohot achcha na ho

aisa ho hi nahi sakta

samjhi meri dii😆

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#716

Both the parts were so beautiful Di
Brought tears in my eyes
So Daddy's angel loved spending time with him and did so many things which she didn't in the past 6 years
Sona is afraid that dev will snatch soha from her but dev assured her that he couldn't imagine this in his wildest dreams
But one question, yaha kya wo part nahi hai jaha sona baby soha ko lekar dixit mansion gayi thi?

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#717

I am late to read this one...but thoroughly enjoyed...very emotional...I liked the way Dev explained his pain to Sonakshi...not many a times we get to hear fathers version of pain...about missing their kids childhood...this is so beautifully written...I wish in our serial also we get Dev to speak openly to Sonakshi ...not hiding his pain...he needs to voice out his pain to her ...only then she can understand him better...and in this story he has just done that !! 👏 ⭐️

Will eagerly wait for your next update...

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sona_naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#718

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
[DIV]A good filter of 33 members from my list done...[/DIV][DIV]More filtering shall be done in the coming updates according to the responses...[/DIV][BR][DIV]I am not so idle to be postingpmsto people who don't even care to revert...[/DIV][BR][DIV]Have a good read...[/DIV][BR][DIV]And if you are not gettingpms, better buddy me and be in contact...[/DIV][BR][DIV]Have a great day...[/DIV]

someone is in strict mood i see [LOL]

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#719

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Excuse me for any typos or something... [BR]I really was very sleepy while writing... [BR]consider this as my stint to write while I am dozing on and off... [BR]I hope it would be a worthy reading update...

if u can write dis while dozibg on and off ..den i dunno wat to expect if u r fully awake [;)] [:$] [=))]