SS:Papa and his Pari(Dev-Soha Bonding)*COMPL* EPILOGUE pg124 26/3/2017

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Soumya21ag

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Kaise likhti ho aap itna achcha...

I mean just how??

Lovely start of a beautiful story

The way Dev consoled soha

Was beyond words

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm

Thanks to binshi also for helping you

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

wow...wonderfully written...very emotional ...had tears in my eye when Soha was talking to Dev abt her wishes to meet her father...loved it ...loved it...loved it...eagerly waiting for you next chapter.

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gmgi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Loved it Aazeen. 👏 Thank you Anjali n Sona

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27JAAN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Awesome!!!

Loved it to the core

I lost my father when I was too young

Those emotions of soha were exactly the same as I felt❤️

One thing I've learnt in life is to thank God for whatever he has given

(No burden does He put on any soul than which it can bear)

Here soha has a chance of meeting her father

Would love to read the next chapters

Thanks for the PM

P.S. I think sona is doing nothing wrong in hiding soha from her father

Our heart goes out for dev Bcoz we know that he is good at heart and loves sona immensely.But it's mothers instinct to protect her child from the darkness that she went through.Here sona can tell dev but there are worse people in the world from whom a mother(not sona) can protect her child

P.P.S this is just my opinion. I'm a student. So probably I might be wrong in feeling the emotions of the parents

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sa1234B

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Wonderful start 👏...loved it so much

Beautifully penned down soha emotions...its really heart touching & emotional

Eagerly waiting for next part...Thanks for pm

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AngelsFlyAlone

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

This was SOOO amazing! What a fantastic bonding between this adorable Pari and her papa. Just made me realize how much our dads mean to us girls. This was sooo cute. I'm not joking when I say I wholeheartedly wish for an exact execution of this meeting. I have no idea how Dev would feel to realize this angel is his own little doll. There was a clear underlying message of the fact that the heart always knows. I mean for her, who is he anyway. An uncle of a classmate who doesn't fail to drive her crazy. But yet she felt so incredibly hesitant to call him uncle because it just didn't feel the right word to name their bond yet she was so free and willing to pour herself to a complete stranger. It was enthralling to read and envision this warm escape of homeliness when someone so distant and strange and not related to you feels so familiar and so friendly. My heart has all the feels of cosy warmth and a hearty satisfaction. Truly hope you continue this and cannot wait to read more!

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mena_k

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Lovely!

Please do continue...would be waiting 😊

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Ashwini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Suchh an emotional one😭😭

First of all thankyou!!🤗 I was pleasently surprised reading my name at the beginning of the SS😛☺️

And thankyou to both Anjali and Sona di for helping you with this SS.😊

Coming to the SS, how do you manage to write soo well!! Whatever be the concept , you do the full justice to it👏

Really loved how Dev talked to Soha...and Soha telling him about her father and how she wished she met him and played around with him..but at the same time did not want to make her mom feel bad...

The way you related it to Dev's situations were too good👏

Waiting for your further updates😳

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Ria.C

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Beautiful OS Aazeen.luved it...thanks to u, Sona and Anjali ⭐️

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vayu_prachi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Wow!!!
Amazing Aazen...how effortlessly could dev interact with Soha and develop such a beautiful bond!!
U have addressed my fears and thoughts precisely...even I feel Soha is over matured for her age and she doesn't deserve this...making her miss her childhood
Really beautifully written and I loved the part where Soha talks about her feelings...
Waiting for ur next part...