JAB WE MET- A DEVAKSHI SS(Chap- 6 updated on pg 42 ) - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona


Aa gya mera best reply!❤️
Haa!..woh Dev ka smirk dekar kehna to mera bhi fav tha!😉
Hahaha😆😆..
Thanku Ji😳
Chota tha!😲
Accha ek secret btau?!...aa raha h iska chap 2!😉
Haanji!...zarur!😆😆
Thanku ji!...i'm glad ki aapko maza aaya!😃
P.S- ab inna accha reply diya hai
Toh aapko maaf kiya!😉
Aur yeh rahi aapki jhappi master ki return jhappi!
🤗🤗

hahaha
Dev ka smirk kisika favourite kaise nahin ho sakta!😆😆
Yaaay!
Jaldi update karna chapter 2!
Hum kar rahey hai intezaar!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Mishti_94

hahaha
Dev ka smirk kisika favourite kaise nahin ho sakta!😆😆
Yaaay!
Jaldi update karna chapter 2!
Hum kar rahey hai intezaar!😉


Hahaha!😆😆😆
Yahi toh strategy thi...aa gayi naah saari fangirls padne!😉😆
Ok Ji!!
Kal tak mil jaega shyd!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Hello My dear Readers!
Thanku all for ur appreciation & encouragement for my first OS!
So on demand of all of u!
I'm trying to expand it!😃
Maybe it'll turn out to be a SS!
Only time will tell!😉
So here I'm presenting u all with next chap!
Hope u'll like it as the 1st one!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Chap 2
Both Dev-Sona hat incident as a fond memory...and they weren't sure of them meeting again...but destiny had something else in it's mind.. and yet another time their ways were to be crossed!

2 months passed and Here Sona's best friend Ria was getting married to Mr.Ayan Vashisht, Divisional manager of Canara Bank...where Ria was working as Assistant Manager...both fall in love with each other working together and now they were getting married!

Ayan Vashisht s Dad was a gr8 friend Of Mr.Manohar Dixit...and So Ayan and Dev were like brothers...After the demise of Dev's Dad Mr.Omprakash Vashisht ;father of Ayan helped Dev & his family through the crisis...He paid for Dev & his sister's education and helpee them stand on their feet...and that's Why upto a large extent gives credit to him for his success!
Since Dev was very much occupied with his work so he wasn't able to attend the pre-wedding functions...So Sona didn't get to know abt Dev's relation to the groom's family until the wedding happened!

On the wedding Day!

Sona was getting ready for the wedding...
In a peach colored embroidered lehnga...looking as gorgeous as a princess.While shewas getting ready Elena her cousin sister enters the room!
Elena to Sona -"How much time u'll take to get ready.Mashi -Mesho puch rahe hain"
Sona to Ele- "Bas almost done!...Abhi Jewellery is left to be worn...But I'm unable to find something good which could get away with the outfit!...Tu help karna meri!!
Elena helps her in finding matching jewellery...and then helps her to wear it too!
Elena to Sona- "Waah!! Waah!!...Mashallah Bikl ToTa lag rahi h puri!"
Sona by smacking on Ele's shoulder-"Chup kar!!...kuch bhi bolti hai"
Elena laughingly says-"Accha!! Accha!!!...thik hai!...ab jaldi kar warna tujhe utha kar niche le jaungi"
As soon as Elena says *utha kar le jaungi*...Sona gets reminded of Dev's words abt her being so heavy that he wasn't able to lift her up!
Sona lost in Dev's thoughts-"Itni bhaari hu m...kse utha lenge aap mujhe?!"
Elena almost confused with what sona uttered- "Sona tu theek hai na?!!...kya bol rahi h tu??
Elena tapped her shoulder and Sona got back to reality
Sona to Ele-"Haa!!..What did u say?!
Ele to Sona -"It wasn't me but u were talking...actually blabbering bhaari something something...What was that?!"
SONA to Ele-"Naah!!..nothing serious ...Chod!"
Since Sona's Daadi wasn't well that's why Elena & Saurabh (sona's brother)...were staying at home...and Sona her Ma & baba were attending the wedding"
Sona's Bab booked a Cab and all of them headed to the venue

Whereas On the other side Dev too was getting ready for his friend Aayan's wedding...in a black tuxedo...
Dev's Room
Dev talking to Tina on his phone-" Haa! Tina..all arrangements done naah?!...I don't want the meeting to get spoiled by any means...And what is the status of the presentation?!...Kaushik se pucho is it all completed?!"
Meanwhile Devika , Dev's sister knocks on his room's door!
Dev-"Come in"
Devika-"Bhai!..I'm not ur employee jo aapse permission lekar andar aayega...I knocked coz I wasn't sure that u've changed ur clothes!"
Dev-"Haan!Baba I know that!..aap toh meri bhi boss ho!...muje aapse permision leni chahiye that whether I should open the door or not!"
Both laughed loudly at their antics
Devika-"Accha!...Chalo Let's Go!...Maa is waiting for us in the hall"
Dev -"Maa ko bolo I'm coming in 5 minutes...Ek call karna hai!"
Devika-"ok! Fine but come fast!..otherwise main aur Maa aapko ywhin lock karke chale jaenge!"
As soon as Dev heard word Lock his eyes shot up...lost in Sona's thoughts ...he ignored Devika's words
Devika-"Bhai!...Are u listening to me?!...Maine kaha jaldi niche aa jana!"
Dev-Haa! Haa!...Sunai deta h muje!
Devika-"Toh! Yes/No toh bol dena chahiye tha na!"
Dev-"Thik h naa!...ab jaa tu!"
After making the important call..Dev, Ishwari , Devika get into the car
Ishwari to Dev-" Beta kitna time lagata hai toh...Ab dekh hum late ho jaenge...barat ke saath jaana tha hume...aur teri wajah se hume unhe wait krwana padega...Accha lagta hai kya aise!"
Dev to Ishywari -" Maa!..tu kyun tension le rahi hai...Om Uncle bura nahi maanenge...Hum time se pohach jaenge!"
Dev speedily drove his car to Ayan's house
As soon as they reached Ayan's House...Dev got a call and had to go to office for the same. He informed his mother and also apologised to OM uncle!
Dev to Om Uncle- Sry Uncle. It's very urgent I can't avoid going to office . But I promise u Uncle I'll reach the venue on time. And will not take much time to reach there
Om uncle- "It's ok Dev...U go and finish ur work ...we'll meet there at the venue itself"
Dev- "Thanku Uncle for understanding the situation"
OM uncle- "Arrey! No need to say Thanku Dev...For me u & Ayan both are same...How can I be angry with my son on his brother's wedding?!"
Dev smiled & hugged Om Uncle hearing this and went straight to his office!

By the time Ayan's Barat reached the wedding venue at Seven Seas Hotel in Punjabi Bagh...Dev hurriedly completed his work and drove straight to the venue and When he reached the Venue his eyes were mesmerised with the beauty of the scenario in front of him!

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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Note to the Readers!
I'll keep updating this on every Friday(if I get good ideas regarding it)
And as usual all ur views (positive or negative)
All are welcome
Pls do comment and let me know abt ur opinions!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Lovely Chapter

Ria is Sonakshi's best while Dev and Ayaan are like brothers that's interesting
so both Dev and Sonakshi have been thinking about each other so their first meeting did leave a great impact on both that's good
I liked how you weaved in Dev and Ayaan's past how his dad stood for Dev and his family very nicely done
Dev reaches the venue and is mesmerized so his eyes must have landed on the beautiful Sonakshi

waiting eagerly for the next chapter and thank you for taking this story forward
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

Chap 2
Both Dev-Sona hat incident as a fond memory...and they weren't sure of them meeting again...but destiny had something else in it's mind.. and yet another time their ways were to be crossed!

2 months passed and Here Sona's best friend Ria was getting married to Mr.Ayan Vashisht, Divisional manager of Canara Bank...where Ria was working as Assistant Manager...both fall in love with each other working together and now they were getting married!

Ayan Vashisht s Dad was a gr8 friend Of Mr.Manohar Dixit...and So Ayan and Dev were like brothers...After the demise of Dev's Dad Mr.Omprakash Vashisht ;father of Ayan helped Dev & his family through the crisis...He paid for Dev & his sister's education and helpee them stand on their feet...and that's Why upto a large extent gives credit to him for his success!
Since Dev was very much occupied with his work so he wasn't able to attend the pre-wedding functions...So Sona didn't get to know abt Dev's relation to the groom's family until the wedding happened!

On the wedding Day!

Sona was getting ready for the wedding...
In a peach colored embroidered lehnga...looking as gorgeous as a princess.While shewas getting ready Elena her cousin sister enters the room!
Elena to Sona -"How much time u'll take to get ready.Mashi -Mesho puch rahe hain"
Sona to Ele- "Bas almost done!...Abhi Jewellery is left to be worn...But I'm unable to find something good which could get away with the outfit!...Tu help karna meri!!
Elena helps her in finding matching jewellery...and then helps her to wear it too!
Elena to Sona- "Waah!! Waah!!...Mashallah Bikl ToTa lag rahi h puri!"
Sona by smacking on Ele's shoulder-"Chup kar!!...kuch bhi bolti hai"
Elena laughingly says-"Accha!! Accha!!!...thik hai!...ab jaldi kar warna tujhe utha kar niche le jaungi"
As soon as Elena says *utha kar le jaungi*...Sona gets reminded of Dev's words abt her being so heavy that he wasn't able to lift her up!
Sona lost in Dev's thoughts-"Itni bhaari hu m...kse utha lenge aap mujhe?!"
Elena almost confused with what sona uttered- "Sona tu theek hai na?!!...kya bol rahi h tu??
Elena tapped her shoulder and Sona got back to reality
Sona to Ele-"Haa!!..What did u say?!
Ele to Sona -"It wasn't me but u were talking...actually blabbering bhaari something something...What was that?!"
SONA to Ele-"Naah!!..nothing serious ...Chod!"
Since Sona's Daadi wasn't well that's why Elena & Saurabh (sona's brother)...were staying at home...and Sona her Ma & baba were attending the wedding"
Sona's Bab booked a Cab and all of them headed to the venue

Whereas On the other side Dev too was getting ready for his friend Aayan's wedding...in a black tuxedo...
Dev's Room
Dev talking to Tina on his phone-" Haa! Tina..all arrangements done naah?!...I don't want the meeting to get spoiled by any means...And what is the status of the presentation?!...Kaushik se pucho is it all completed?!"
Meanwhile Devika , Dev's sister knocks on his room's door!
Dev-"Come in"
Devika-"Bhai!..I'm not ur employee jo aapse permission lekar andar aayega...I knocked coz I wasn't sure that u've changed ur clothes!"
Dev-"Haan!Baba I know that!..aap toh meri bhi boss ho!...muje aapse permision leni chahiye that whether I should open the door or not!"
Both laughed loudly at their antics
Devika-"Accha!...Chalo Let's Go!...Maa is waiting for us in the hall"
Dev -"Maa ko bolo I'm coming in 5 minutes...Ek call karna hai!"
Devika-"ok! Fine but come fast!..otherwise main aur Maa aapko ywhin lock karke chale jaenge!"
As soon as Dev heard word Lock his eyes shot up...lost in Sona's thoughts ...he ignored Devika's words
Devika-"Bhai!...Are u listening to me?!...Maine kaha jaldi niche aa jana!"
Dev-Haa! Haa!...Sunai deta h muje!
Devika-"Toh! Yes/No toh bol dena chahiye tha na!"
Dev-"Thik h naa!...ab jaa tu!"
After making the important call..Dev, Ishwari , Devika get into the car
Ishwari to Dev-" Beta kitna time lagata hai toh...Ab dekh hum late ho jaenge...barat ke saath jaana tha hume...aur teri wajah se hume unhe wait krwana padega...Accha lagta hai kya aise!"
Dev to Ishywari -" Maa!..tu kyun tension le rahi hai...Om Uncle bura nahi maanenge...Hum time se pohach jaenge!"
Dev speedily drove his car to Ayan's house
As soon as they reached Ayan's House...Dev got a call and had to go to office for the same. He informed his mother and also apologised to OM uncle!
Dev to Om Uncle- Sry Uncle. It's very urgent I can't avoid going to office . But I promise u Uncle I'll reach the venue on time. And will not take much time to reach there
Om uncle- "It's ok Dev...U go and finish ur work ...we'll meet there at the venue itself"
Dev- "Thanku Uncle for understanding the situation"
OM uncle- "Arrey! No need to say Thanku Dev...For me u & Ayan both are same...How can I be angry with my son on his brother's wedding?!"
Dev smiled & hugged Om Uncle hearing this and went straight to his office!

By the time Ayan's Barat reached the wedding venue at Seven Seas Hotel in Punjabi Bagh...Dev hurriedly completed his work and drove straight to the venue and When he reached the Venue his eyes were mesmerised with the beauty of the scenario in front of him!





Its beautiful dear.. Espically both dev n sona getting lost in each other thoughts n dat by reminding d word lock..
Eagerly waiting ki dev ka kya haal hoga beautiful scenario dekhke apne samne..
Ur write ups r grt..aise hi likhti raho meri shona..
Pehele abhi mamta maam ne bomb faik diya regarding dev soha meet aur tumne regarding dev mesmerized by sona beauty.. Lagta h sabne heart attack dilane ka soch rakha h..
Eagerly waiting dear jaldi se post krna apna next os..
Loved it to moon n black..
God bless u shona..
Luv u..

Edited by Dancer.kavya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Wow..you started writing as well...very nice👍🏼..Beautifully written..
Loved both the parts...

First meet was awesome..stucked in lift..I so want this to happen in our show now...and Dev's smirk followed by bahot ajeeb...so cute...

They are going to meet again

Btw, venue meri mummy ke ghar ke bahot paas hain...pahoch jau kya😉..

Waiting for friday..but it should be a long chapter please...itna wait karne ke baad itna haq to banta hain..


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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
LOVELY CHAPTER...WOW LIKED BOTH OF THEM REMEMBERING THE LIFT INCIDENT...NOW SEEING HER AT THE WEDDING HE IS ABSOLUTELY IMPRESSED WITH HER LOOKS ...COOL...EAGERLY WAITING FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE...IS ISHWARI A POSSESSIVE MOTHER IN THIS STORY?? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Nice update Sonali. 😊
So Dev and Sona are still not over that meeting and remember each other now and then. I am sure its gonna be fun in the wedding. Excited for the next update.

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