JAB WE MET- A DEVAKSHI SS(Chap- 6 updated on pg 42 )

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Hello my dear Forum peeps!
I know we have so many amazing writers in our Forum...but here I tried my hand at writing an OS...hope all of u like it!
Here I go...
It was a bright winter morning on Saturday in Delhi...that means the beginning of the weekend...and who doesn't get excited when it comes to getting a break from the usual work oriented life...and there was Dr. SONAKHI BOSE all geared up for it...No she wasn't only happy coz of the holiday...but was happy by the fact that she gonna meet her old Frends...whom she hadn't met in the past 6 months due to her hectic schedule...So finally Sona , Nikki , Ria made a plan to watch a movie..and then have lunch together!


Here in the other part of Delhi...Mr.Dev Dixit , the succesful business Tycoon...was getting ready for his meeting with foreign clients in Starbucks in V3S Mall , Vasant Kunj...As usual He took blessings from Ishwari , Mamaji & MamiJi...Ishwari his Mom was all superstitious...and since a black cat crossed her way earlier this morning...so she was stressed abt Her Ladla and the only Son Dev!
Ishwari along with her pooja ki Thall...did pooja of Dev...and Said "Bhagwan tujhe har buri nazar se bachaye...tu Humesha khush rahe Beta"...and allowed him to go 4 the meeting!

So here Dr.Bose reaches V3S Mall with her phone & lappy in other hand...Sona was always dedicated towards her work...She wasn't much interested in watching movie...just to make her friends happy she agreed to come there on their insistence...so she decided to wait for them in a restaurant located just near the Theatre...
Starbucks too was located near the Theatre on the 3rd floor of the Mall...So Dev decided to take the Elevator for reaching there on Time!...
Meanwhile Sonakshi too was running to catch the Elevator!
Talking on the phone with Tina His PA Dev didn't notice Sona's wrds...but was disturbed by her screaming and was irritated with this!...
Sona finally succeded in catching the Elevator but was all frustrated with Dev's rudeness!
Sona to Dev- "Hello Mister!...are u deaf?!...can't u hear my voice?!...i was telling u to wait for me... ..Couldn't u see that?!
Dev after saying Tina that he'll talk to her once he reaches the Cafe!
Dev to Sona- "U said I'm Deaf...I'll ask u r u Dumb?!...can't u see that I was talking on the phone...I didn't hear u ...and Don't u've manners to talk to anybody?!

Sona to herself -How Rude he is!...Mr.Obhordro types...Apni mistake toh accept karni nahi h na!...
Dev to Sona- "What did u say?!...come Again"
Sona to Dev -"M kyun btaun?!...I'm not answerable to u...Mr.Jo bhi aapka naam ho!"
Dev to Sona- Ptanhi kaise ajeeb si ladki hai!...I guess ma was talking abt this girl only who will spoil my my mood!...uff!!...kahan Fas gaye main?!"
(Meanwhile they got above the 1st Floor and the elevator was heading towards the 2nd floor...but the actual Drama was going to start in a while...when The Elevator stopped suddenly with a wierd sound)
Both Dev -Sona stopped their Blame-Game. ..and realised what happened actually!
Both Dev -Sona asked themselves "What was that?!"
(The Elevator was recently made in the mall ...and it's trial was yet to be taken place...but the authorities forgot to put the notice of that It wasn't available for public usage)
Dev tried to understand the situation and he started pressing various buttons but no button was working . He then started patting on the door asking for help!
Dev - "Koi hain?!...is someone there outside ...Pls help us...we r stuck inside this lift!"
Sona panicked with what he said and asked him
Sona to Dev - "How did this happen?!...what will we do now?!"
Dev to Sona- "How could I know that?!...Don't u know even I'm equally stressed as u are"
Dev told her in a very angry tone...that almost left her in tears!
Dev to Sona- I'm sorry Miss...Jo bhi hain aap!...Dekhiye pls try to understand hum yahan fas gaye hain...now we have to find a solution to this problem"

Sona nodded in a Yes!
Both Dev & Sona tried to call their respective frends , relatives...but all efforts gone in vain due to network problems!
Finally Sona sat on the floor of the elevator almost given up on all her efforts...But Dev tried continuously ...for another 30 minutes!
Dev to Sona- "I think we have to stay here like this till the Mall gets closed...only then can anyone come to our rescue coz now no one will hear our voice due to hullabaloo in the Mall!

Dev calmly started doing his work...since he knew there was no other option...He opened his lappy and started working on his presentation!...leaving Sona getting irked seeing him so calm!

Sona to Dev - "Kaise aadmi h aap?!...aapko yaha se bahar nhi nikal na kya?!...How can u be so calm?!
Dev to Sona - " aaapne Hyper hone se kya ho gaya?!...hum bahar aa gaye lift se?!...boliye Miss...
Sona to Dev- "Bose!...Dr.Sonakshi Bose h mera naam...aur aapka?!"
D to S- "Mr. Dev Dixit!...nice to meet u Dr.Bose!"
S to D-"Same here...Mr. Dixit"
D to S - So aap shopping k liye yaha aai thi?!
S to D- "Nahi!, actually my friends wanted to meet me...and so we decided to watch a movie for a get together!...Aur aap yaha kse?!...
D to S- I had an imp meeting with my foreign clients...and I had to meet then in Starbucks!
S to D -"Toh...they must be angry with u naah!...that u made them wait 4 u for several hours?!
D to S- "Haa!...But I had no other option but to wait here...till my phone catches the network!
(Meanwhile the security guard along with team of mechanics were approaching towards the elevator to take it's trial)
(Suddenly Sona got up from the floor and said that she's thirsty and want to get out from there asap...and as soon as she could think of any way to get out of she noticed a button on the top right corner of the lift)
S-D woh Dekhiye!...there is a button ...should we press it?!
D-S Ok!!...Chalo give it a try!
S-D - "I'm not tall enough to reach upto that...I need ur help"
D-S - "Ok!...I'll lift up and u try to press that button"
(here the mechanics were surprized to find that the elevator is having an issue and sensed that there must be inside somebody stuck into the lift...they tried hurrying up their efforts...so as to rescue them)
(Dev -Sona unaware of the happenings outside the elevator were trying their best to reach to that button)
D- S "Kitni bhaari ho yaar tum?!...I'll loose my whole energy lifting u ap!!"
S-D "Shutup!!..Mr.obhodro!!...once we'll get out of it ...I'll show how much I weigh!!"
D-S "can u pls stop talking and do it fast...I'm loosing my grip!"
S-D "Arrey I'm trying my best naah!!...Dekhai nhi deta?!"
D-S "Ab m tumhe pakdu ya tumhe dekhun?!!"
S-D "Accha!! Accha Ok!"
( As soon as Sona could press the button...the mechanics opened the door of the elevator...only to find Sona lying on the floor and Dev leaning on her...both looking & lost into each other)
One of the mechanic cleared his throat and Dev-Sona snapped back into reality where...evryone was looking at them making wierd faces!
Soon a good no. Of crowd gathered there to look at the scene...and started murmuring to each other...Both Dev -Sona hurriedly got up from there...and felt embarrassed to find a lot no. Of faces glancing at them!
Dev to Sona in a low voice-" You go home, I'll handle everything here"
Sona looked at him surprizingly...and asked him with her gesture..."Will u be able to handle it alone?!"
Dev gave her convincing look and asked the people to let her out safely from there...as her family must be worried for her!
Sona before moving out of from there...Looked back to him...and they smiled to each other...and Sona thanked him by nodding her head!
By this time Tina and the other staff came there too...Dev told evrything abt what all happened...and angrily told them to put a notice here to avoid anyone facing similar situation!
Dev signalled Tina to make his clients understand the situation and asked them to postpone the meeting!
On both Dev-Sona's way back home...They were still lost in each other's thoughts...wondering why they were so engrossed thinking abt each other...when they met each other for the 1st time in their lives!.
Dev reached home...only to find anxious Ishwari...sitting on the sofa...waiting for her beloved Son to come back home!
Ishu to Dev - " Aagya beta!...Tu fresh ho jaa...m tere liye khana lagati hu!...Beta teri meeting kaisi thi?!"
Dev to Ishu- "Bht hi AJEEB"...
And with this Dev smirkingly walked to his room...leaving Ishwari behind a lot of questions!

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InDex!😃
Chap 1 -page 1
Chap 2 -page 10
Chap 3 - page 18
Chap 4 -page 24
Chap 5 - page 32
Chap 6 - page 42

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Chandniyati thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res...
Ruko ab padh k aati hun...
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A THANK YOU NOTE!
Thanks all for reading it...
Would love to read ur comments on it!😉
All chappals, tomatoes, nimbu-mirchi evrything is welcome!😆😆
Pls forgive me for all typo errors!😳
A special thanx to Gayu Di aka Devakshi Crazy for giving me tgis challenge to write an OS!👏
Thanx to Anu aka Ananya Ghosh who gave me an idea...that we could start an OS together but I promise u dear We'll write an OS together once!😉😳

Edited by Cutiepie.sona - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Perfect and Lovely OS

Wow their first meeting was awesome and feisty too

now either you can turn this into a SS so they can meet again or do another OS
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jade0001

Perfect and Lovely OS

Wow their first meeting was awesome and feisty too

now either you can turn this into a SS so they can meet again or do another OS



Shaun u read it so fast!😲
Thanx 4 ur lovely comment!😳
And thanx 4 ur lovely suggestion!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey loved it ...why don't you continue this story ...its very interesting...would love to read...
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Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Hey loved it ...why don't you continue this story ...its very interesting...would love to read...



Thanku Aswathy Di😳
Glad that u want more of it!😉
I'll try fulfilling ur wish!😉
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Sona yaar tu to badi talented nikli...😉😉
1st time os likha...and that is wonderful👏👏

Their first meeting was so nyc...
After reading ur os ...mere man me ek wish aa rahi hai..that what if hume show me bhi aisa hi scene mile with our new dev and sonakshi

Please write more...
Waiting for ur another story😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali333

Sona yaar tu to badi talented nikli...😉😉

1st time os likha...and that is wonderful👏👏

Their first meeting was so nyc...
After reading ur os ...mere man me ek wish aa rahi hai..that what if hume show me bhi aisa hi scene mile with our new dev and sonakshi

Please write more...
Waiting for ur another story😃


Thanku Anj!😳
I wish ki teri yeh wish zarur puri ho!😉
Will surely write more as soon as I get an idea!😃


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona




<font color="#ff3399">Thanku Aswathy Di😳</font>
<font color="#ff3399">Glad that u want more of it!😉</font>
<font color="#ff3399">I'll try fulfilling ur wish!😉</font>



Oh great ...then my dear lil author , I am going to eagerly wait for the next part ...

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