Devakshi 4S:SONA v/s THE DIXITS Part 2 pg4 updated 30/1/17

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<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hey guys I am back...i think we all like d strong headed n
independent sona who gives it back to
the dixits...earlier also sona was strong bt shayd bado ka lihaz karke she
used to nt speak against the elders tht too bluntly n ohir toh pyar ne usko
barbaad kar diya somewhere to gain acceptance she sacrificed her self respect
bt nt any more she is back n with a bang so this 2S is again based on sona
being d fighter n giving it back as an equal to the dixits n my fav ex-gkb ki
left right left...Agar thoda zyada ho jae to I am sry beforehand n ur suggestions
n opinion are more than welcome bt I like it this way bt still every1 has an
opinion so all criticism is accepted...</font>


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<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">The dixits know abt soha n somehow soha is coming for a day
spend at ishwari niwas so lets see how it goes...how will soha be recd by the
dixits...her reaction...gkb ki class...</font>


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PART1

MAIN STORY

Soha was excited tht she wld spend her entire day with her father n his family...she loved his mom n her family a lot bt sometimes she used wonder abt her dad as well n wht wld it be like to hv a dad...she had friends who had dads n their dads used to pamper them,give them gifts,take them to holidays,save them frm their mom's scolding she never missed her father as her mom n her family pampered her a lot she was always given freedom to choose,to play ...if she didn't feel to do her homework her mother wld nt scold her bt make her understand its importance though it happened rarely as soha was always very responsible n over her age...so there is nt much she missed bt still wanted to knw wht wld be d feeling of having a dad ...when she came to know abt her dad she didn't wanted to meet him as he already didn't know abt her n she didn't wanted to leave her mom or hurt her by any means...bt now they know abt her n her dad wants to spend some tym with her n she knows tht her mom also wants tht her dad shld know her n soha shld knw her dad...so she was goin to her dad's house...she was wearing her fav dress which was pink in color had a white frill over the neck teamed with skin stockings n white bellies n her sling bag...

As soon as soha reached ishwari mansion...she saw the house n really like it she got out of the car n sprinted towards the entrance while sona n her caretaker suman didi were running behind her to stop...sona caught hold of soha n told her tht she shld nt enter d house now n let her call his dad so tht he can take her inside as sona didn't wanted to enter inside the house...

Sona-beta...wait...main aapke dad ko call karti hoon tht we hv reached as hum pehle hi aagaye so tht he can take u inside aur mujhe unse kuch baat bhi karni hai...

Soha-bt mumma aap bhi chalo na andar

Sona-no soha I wld nt go inside n I told u before tht u wld nt force me...remember

soha-I remember

sona recd a call frm some1 n she started talking by moving towards her car after telling sona tht she shld wait here only she will attend the call as its important then call her dad n then she cld go inside...

Soha being super excited started exploring the garden area n accidently a flower pot broke...

the evil ex-gkb entered the garden n started creating a scene

gkb-hey bhagwan yeh kya kar diya...itna mehnga gamla tha jisme who sabse mehnge wale phool(blue orchids) lage tha...satyanash ho tera ladki...

gkb held soha's hand n started manhandling her by jerking her n asking questions abt her identity while suman didi tried stopping gkb... hearing the entire chaos sona immediately came running towards her daughter while other family members of the didxit family came out as well including ishu ma,Elena,vikki n golu...(dev abhi aa raha hai)...

sona caught hold of gkb's hand n jerked it away frm soha's hand n the sona knelt down to see whether soha was hurt...soha was nt hurt bt her hand was paining due to gkb's strong hold n turned a lil red which made sona furious...

Sona immediately attended soha's hand by blowing air so as to soothe her pain n when soha gave her assurance tht she is fine its nt painin...she breathed a sigh of relief...while all of this was obsereved by the entire family with gkb n vikki makin faces n others jst lookin at soha...

Meanwhile dev also came to the scene...Soon the anger built in sona reached its peek n she caught hold of gkb's hand n twisted it really harsh...with gkb givin a loud shriek in pain...

Gkb-aaa...aayye bangalan kya kar rahi hai...mera haath haye dard ho raha hai...chod mera haath...

Sona-ab pta chala jab zor se kissi ka haath pakdte hai toh kaisa lagta hai...dard hota hai...(sona gribbed her hand more tightly givin more pain to gkb)

Vikki tried to intervene bt sona made him quite by giving him a death glare n sayin

sona-u jst stay out of it or u will hv to face the consequences(vikki went mum n stepped back)... aapko job hi problem hai who mere saath hai uske beech mein meri beti ko galti se bhi lanneka maat sochna...aapko jo karna hai mere saath kijiye mujhe kahiye...bt agar meri beti ki taraf aapne ungli bhi uthai toh main bade choton ka lihaaz bhul jaongi...

gkb(ven in her pain she cant stop accusing sona n fillin poison against sona in ishu's mind)-hayye hayye jiji dekh rahi hai...yeh hai aapki ex-bahu ke asli rang...chod mera haath...haan bacha kya hai lihaaz bhulne ke liye haan...

Sona-bahut kuch bach hai...aur mujhe majboor mat karna nahi toh aapke liye acha nahi hoga ... Aaj tak maine aapko kuch nahi kahan...tab bhi nahi jab aap mujhe bulti thi ki main aapke dev ke paise loot rahi hoon...tab bhi nahi jab aapne mujh par ilzaam laggaya aapke dev ko phasane ka...tabhi bhi nahi jab aap ne mujhe kosti thi jab main apke ghar ko ek bachcha nahi de sakti thi...tab bhi nahi jab aapne kaha ki maine dev se paison ke liye shaadi ki hai...na tab jab aapne mera bab par ilzaam lagaye kyunki aap meri badi hai aur uss tym mere husband ki mami thi toh rishte ka bhi lihaaz tha par aaj aap meri kuch bhi nahi lagti... aur jab baat meri beti ki aayegi tab main sab kuch bhool jaongi...phir mujhe koi farak nahi padta ki mere samne kaun hai...

Dev-sonakshi tum thik keh rahi hoon..

Ishu-dev tub hi...thik keh rahi hai who par yeh saari baatein soha ke saamne karni zaroori hai kya...uspar kya asar hoga...

Sona-haan zaroori hai taki soha ko bhi pta chalna chahiye ki agar koi usko hurt kar raha hai toh usko kaise jawab dena hai...so tht phir se usko koi hurt na Karen ...maine bhi yeh hi galti kit hi...apne pyar aur shaadi mein rishte main andhi ho kar main khud ke liye bolna bhul gayi thi tabhi shayd sab mujhko hi sunna kar chale jate bt main nahi chati jo galti maine ki who meri beti bhi Karen toh usko pta hona chahiye ki agar koi uske self respect ko hurt kar raha hai toh usko jawab dena hoga...

With tht son left gkb's hand with a jerk n gkb was writing in pain blowing air to cool down the pain with her expressions being totally shocked listening to sona...so were the expressions of others to see a totally different sona who gives it back...

Sona-agar agli baar meri beti ko kuch bhi kiya...n I mean kuch bhi aapka haath hi nahi bachega kuch aur karne ke liye aur main sach main aisa karoongi...(while her hands were crossed over her chest)

With this enetered a smart guy in his 30's holding a file n smiling

Sammy(sona's lawyer)-sona tum jo karna chahti ho kar lena...tumhe bachane ke liye main hoon na...

Sona-u re late

Sammy-sorry bt u came early I am on tym...

Sona-thik hai...lets get over with this...

Dev-over with wht?????????(confused lookin at the guy)

Sona(handing over the black file to dev which was brought bt Sammy)yeh legal documents hai...

Dev-kaise documents???????

Sammy-main batata hoon(Sammy came towards dev)

Dev(gesturing thru his hands to stop)main sonakshi se baat kar raha hoon tum se nahi...aur tum ho kyun(bein all possessive)

Soha-yeh buddy hai

Sona-he is my lawyer...

Dev-lawyer ki kya zaroorat hai n legel pprs???????????whts all this sonakshi??????

Sona-well MR DEVRATH DIXIT its for u only so tht u n ur family feel secure nahi toh phir mujh par ya meri beti par koi ilzaam lagga doge aap sab...jisme aap sab ko maharath haasil hai...

Sammy-yeh legal documents hai jisko sona...I am sonakshi bose my client ne sign kiya hai jisme yeh likha hai ki suhana bose ki maintenance ki saari zimedari soankshi bose ki hai n she doesn't require any help or any assistance from u...MR DEVRATH DIXIT or his family...no share in his business or In any of his property...

Dev-par iski kya zaroorat hai jo kuch bhi mera hai who meri princess ka hi toh hai after all who iss ghar ki beti hai

Sona-maine in documents main wohi likhwaya hai jo prenup mein tha so tht kisiko koi confusion na rahe tht me or my daughter are back for ur money...aapko aur aapki family ko tym spent karna tha soha ke saath thts why she is here n nothing else I hope I hv made myself clear...

Sammy-u can take these n show it to ur lawyer n if any problem mera number issme hai...

Sona turned towards soha who was jst amazed to see the dynamics

Sona- princess mumma aapke saath aage nahi jaa sakti...aage u hv to go alone...take care of urself n njoy...kissi ko tang maat karna...aur yaad hai na sabse imp baat

Soha-ya mumma I remember...kissi se kuch nahi maangna...kissi se koi gift maat lena...afterall humari self respect humare haath me hoti hai...

Dev-yeh kya matlab hai sonakshi

Sona-iska yeh matlab hai tht I don't want my daughter to suffer the same way I was suffered...n plzzz mr.dixit I don't want to argue on this...n I hope jo abhi hua tht wont happen again with soha nahi toh main kya karungi aapki aur aapki family ke saath I don't knw...

d-soha meri bhi beti hai I wont let anything happen to her agar usko kuch hua then ppl will hv to deal with DEVRATH DIXIT

SONA-I hope aisa hi ho n soha kuch problem na ho...u cld never take a stand for ur wife bt I hope u take a stand for ur daughter n ur family also remembers ki agar who meri beti hai toh aapki bhi hai...

Don't make me regret this MR DEVRATH DIXIT

With tht sona left soha with dev

PS:UFF bahut lambha ho gaya guys...toh I thought of writing abt soha's day with d dixits bt it already took me 1.5 hrs to write this n aage bhi toh dhamaka hona chahiye...so let me knw how it was ur likes n comments re so valuable...

PPS:IF ACHA RAHA TOH SHAYD I CAN CONTINUE FURTHER AS WELL

PPPS:ANANYAGOSH after posting this will start scripting ur fav bachelor n hen party nahi toh u will kill me though I was thinkin of continuing waqt bt I guess u wanna hot n passionate update so let me turn on my GM n start workin bt thoda sa patience yaar

Edited by A.K.Aggarwal - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing.
I really want this to happen.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing yr...
humein aesa hi toh chahiye...Gkb ko Sona uski nani dadi sab relatives yaad dila de.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Maza aa gaya Ananya...
Sona on fire..GKB ki to halat kharab kar di...itni khushi milli na dil ko...😆

Pls continue...
But yes, bachelor and hen party first...bahot ho gayi baaki cheezein...

Thanks you dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing start ...plz do continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Excellent os. Yes, please continue.
Edited by tia.o - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Do U really need to ask to continue such OS...
The forum is already mad for this avtaar...
Plz continue...
N do PM...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Please continue soon...it was amazing
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Dhamakedar OS.. I really want this to happen in show.. it wud be gud to watch this..

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