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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

Omg!! Saru!😆😆

It was gr8!👏👏
This the first OS that I've read where I was laughing like hell!😆😆
Tum kya ho yaar...
Hasane ka talent sirf tumhara exclusive right ban chuka hai!😉😆
Mujhe best toh Dev ki GF ka dialogue laga...muh par bezzati kardi...agar tumhare ghar ka melodrama khtm ho gya ho toh hum chle?!🤣🤣
And the icing on the cake was dev's reply C'mon bby!🤣
Aur ishu ka drama...abhi bhi saara blame sona ko kar rahi hai...pgal aurat!😡😕
Bht badiya hai yaar...aise hi OS likhte raho aur hume hasate raho!😉😉
Agli baar pm kardena mujhe!😃

Thank you so much for ur appreciation. Ese hi encourage karte raho u will get some more
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Wow...that was awesome...
And hilarious too...
Especially...Dev leaving Ishwari and going to Khandala...
Amazingly written
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Wow...that was awesome...

And hilarious too...
Especially...Dev leaving Ishwari and going to Khandala...
Amazingly written

Sorry I forgot that it's Delhi backdrop so khandala will be too far let's do it. Dehrdun or masoorie.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Wow!!! So amazing 👏 👏
Loved it to the core

Right now I'm very much excited for tomorrow's episode.
And ur masterpiece increased my excitement much more
Now I can't wait for tomorrow's episode

Kitna amazing OS likha hai...
Loved dev-ishu scene
I wish show mein bhi DEV ishwari ki aise hi class lagaaye 😆

Please write more... 😊
And next time PM me please
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Wow!!! So amazing 👏 👏
Loved it to the core

Right now I'm very much excited for tomorrow's episode.
And ur masterpiece increased my excitement much more
Now I can't wait for tomorrow's episode

Kitna amazing OS likha hai...
Loved dev-ishu scene
I wish show mein bhi DEV ishwari ki aise hi class lagaaye 😆

Please write more... 😊
And next time PM me please

Thanx bose family dynamics is still in my head
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Sargesh

Thanx bose family dynamics is still in my head


Write it soon
Waiting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
🤣ohhh god kiya tha ye yar😆😆😆
meri hasi nahi ruk rahi😆😆😆

tere chakar se mujhe chakar atty hn👏

dev besharmmm🤣

melodroma😆

RR ne mental ko naukarani bana diya😆😆lakein phir bhi wo sudhri nahi ...sara blame dev and sona pe dal diya😡😡...i think RR ne ilaaj ke paise nahi diye mental ko😆😆😆



too goood dear tooo goood👏👏


do continoue dear..but but but aisa kuch nahi likhna jo kal ko show me dekh kr rona ajaeye humein😕like custody track ya dev and sona blaming each other on soha...kyun hi cvs forum se ideas lety hn ab samjh agya hai so plz acha acha likho😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ishwari and dev encounter
Dev in drunkard state returns home. Here ishwari was waiting for him in her room now not in hall becoz she has to pretend that she don't care abt him. Seeing that he has returned she will go to sleep now. But dev got slipped from stairs nd fall down ishu can't stop herself.

I- Dev sambhalke
She tries to support him to stand up

D- Ma tu mere liye abhi tak jagti h kya.

I- Nhi wo me paani peene aai thi. Tuje ese to dekh nhi Sakti aakhir maa hu. Budape me tuje meta Sahara bsnna chaiye or yaha tuje mere sahare ki zaroorat pad rhi h.

D teary eyed- Me ek accha beta nhi ban paaya maa. Tu sahi thi naye rishto ko nibhane ke chakkar me Mene purane rishto ko kho diya maa.

I- Ab purani baate yaad karke ghaavo ko taaza mat kar wese bhi dinbhar kaafi nhi h Jo tu raat me b yaad dila deta b un baato ko.
Meri ek bohot buri aadat thi Mr hamesha attet me jeeti asi thi kyunki eo ateet muje taakat deta tha par tera jo ateet h usne muje kamzor kar diya h dev.

D- Sonakshi ye tumne accha nhi kiya meri maa ko b cheen liya mujse. Ab meri maa b mujse pyar nhi karti.

I- kyo naam leta h baar baar uska. Or Teri maa abhi b tujse utna hi pyar karti h par tune Jo deewar khadi ki h use todkar me aage nhi aa sakti. Ab ja apne kamre me Teri maa ki boodhi haddiyon me itna dam nhi tha jo tuje utha sake.

Dev leaving
I- Dev kya tu use bhula paaya h. Tune apni zindagi to barbaad kar li h. Par me poochti hu kya parinaam nikla ye sab karne ka. Jab USKA naam Abu b Teri zubaan par h.

D- kya baat kar rhi h maa muje to ye b yaad nhi ki kal raat me kis ladki ke sath tha or aaj kiske sath. Sonakshi kon sonakshi.

I- Thik h ja ab in her mind she mumble( Me janti hu dev tuje tu kisiko chahta h to tootkar. Tera pyar uske liye Jo tha mujse chupa nhi h. Teri zubaan par baar baar uska naam bohot kuch bauan kar h. Sonakshi ka pyar saccha tha ya nhi ye to muje pata nhi h par tera pyar abi b baki h. Or shukriya ye yaad dilane ke liye ki abi b ummeed bachi hui h tere sudharne ki).

D in room lonely- Tumne bohot galat kiya sonakshi bohot galat kiya sonakshi, tum gandi ho, I hate u.

Suddenly he opened his bed drawer and take out the photographs which he kept secretly all t
Others were thrown outside. Dis was formed one becoz they both were in same frame

D- Tum itni gandi kyo ho, kyo barbaad kiya muje, koi insaan itna selfish kese ho sakta h. Nafrat karta hu me tumse.
He clamped her picture on wall nd began to throw dots as what he usually do in free time.

Bohot nafrat karta hu, tum chali kyo nhi jati meri life SE
Suddenly one dot pointed in her eye.

D ran nd remove that dot- Sonakshi tum theek to ho Na, kitni baar kaha h dhyan SR kaam kiya karo, itni beautiful eyes chali jati to mera kya hota. Tum apna bilkul khyal nhi rakhti. Pata h Na tumhe muje kitna dard hota h tumhe sad dekhke.
He hugged that photo. Suddenly remembered something.
D in complete break down nd cried hard- Kyo choddke chali gai tum muje. Tumne Zara b parvah nhi ki tumhare bina kese jee paunga. Miss boss u were right me khokhla insaan tha khudke decisions nhi Le paata tha kya kehti thi tum muje mamma's boy Na dekho me change ho gya hu kisiki parvaah nhi h muje. Ab me sabka permanent treatment karta hu. Please ab to laut aao. Jo muje sahi lagta h me wo karta hu kisiki influence me nhi hu ab me. Please laut aao, please kaha ho tum.
Ab to dev akela b nhi h bohot ladkiyan h uske paas. Tumhare peeche pagal b nhi h.

A loud laughter... Kya socha tumne dev tumhare samne bheekh mangega kabi nhi. Bhaad me Jao tum or tumhara self respect. Actually u don't deserve me or koi b ladki muje deserve hi nhi karti. Becoz I am the dev dixit nd u sukhdi boring si nutrionist. Or tumhari jagah yaha h. He keeps that photo in lower drawer.

He lay down on bed- I hate u sona I hate u...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Sargesh

Ishwari and dev encounter

Dev in drunkard state returns home. Here ishwari was waiting for him in her room now not in hall becoz she has to pretend that she don't care abt him. Seeing that he has returned she will go to sleep now. But dev got slipped from stairs nd fall down ishu can't stop herself.

I- Dev sambhalke
She tries to support him to stand up

D- Ma tu mere liye abhi tak jagti h kya.

I- Nhi wo me paani peene aai thi. Tuje ese to dekh nhi Sakti aakhir maa hu. Budape me tuje meta Sahara bsnna chaiye or yaha tuje mere sahare ki zaroorat pad rhi h.

D teary eyed- Me ek accha beta nhi ban paaya maa. Tu sahi thi naye rishto ko nibhane ke chakkar me Mene purane rishto ko kho diya maa.

I- Ab purani baate yaad karke ghaavo ko taaza mat kar wese bhi dinbhar kaafi nhi h Jo tu raat me b yaad dila deta b un baato ko.
Meri ek bohot buri aadat thi Mr hamesha attet me jeeti asi thi kyunki eo ateet muje taakat deta tha par tera jo ateet h usne muje kamzor kar diya h dev.

D- Sonakshi ye tumne accha nhi kiya meri maa ko b cheen liya mujse. Ab meri maa b mujse pyar nhi karti.

I- kyo naam leta h baar baar uska. Or Teri maa abhi b tujse utna hi pyar karti h par tune Jo deewar khadi ki h use todkar me aage nhi aa sakti. Ab ja apne kamre me Teri maa ki boodhi haddiyon me itna dam nhi tha jo tuje utha sake.

Dev leaving
I- Dev kya tu use bhula paaya h. Tune apni zindagi to barbaad kar li h. Par me poochti hu kya parinaam nikla ye sab karne ka. Jab USKA naam Abu b Teri zubaan par h.

D- kya baat kar rhi h maa muje to ye b yaad nhi ki kal raat me kis ladki ke sath tha or aaj kiske sath. Sonakshi kon sonakshi.

I- Thik h ja ab in her mind she mumble( Me janti hu dev tuje tu kisiko chahta h to tootkar. Tera pyar uske liye Jo tha mujse chupa nhi h. Teri zubaan par baar baar uska naam bohot kuch bauan kar h. Sonakshi ka pyar saccha tha ya nhi ye to muje pata nhi h par tera pyar abi b baki h. Or shukriya ye yaad dilane ke liye ki abi b ummeed bachi hui h tere sudharne ki).

D in room lonely- Tumne bohot galat kiya sonakshi bohot galat kiya sonakshi, tum gandi ho, I hate u.

Suddenly he opened his bed drawer and take out the photographs which he kept secretly all t
Others were thrown outside. Dis was formed one becoz they both were in same frame

D- Tum itni gandi kyo ho, kyo barbaad kiya muje, koi insaan itna selfish kese ho sakta h. Nafrat karta hu me tumse.
He clamped her picture on wall nd began to throw dots as what he usually do in free time.

Bohot nafrat karta hu, tum chali kyo nhi jati meri life SE
Suddenly one dot pointed in her eye.

D ran nd remove that dot- Sonakshi tum theek to ho Na, kitni baar kaha h dhyan SR kaam kiya karo, itni beautiful eyes chali jati to mera kya hota. Tum apna bilkul khyal nhi rakhti. Pata h Na tumhe muje kitna dard hota h tumhe sad dekhke.
He hugged that photo. Suddenly remembered something.
D in complete break down nd cried hard- Kyo choddke chali gai tum muje. Tumne Zara b parvah nhi ki tumhare bina kese jee paunga. Miss boss u were right me khokhla insaan tha khudke decisions nhi Le paata tha kya kehti thi tum muje mamma's boy Na dekho me change ho gya hu kisiki parvaah nhi h muje. Ab me sabka permanent treatment karta hu. Please ab to laut aao. Jo muje sahi lagta h me wo karta hu kisiki influence me nhi hu ab me. Please laut aao, please kaha ho tum.
Ab to dev akela b nhi h bohot ladkiyan h uske paas. Tumhare peeche pagal b nhi h.

A loud laughter... Kya socha tumne dev tumhare samne bheekh mangega kabi nhi. Bhaad me Jao tum or tumhara self respect. Actually u don't deserve me or koi b ladki muje deserve hi nhi karti. Becoz I am the dev dixit nd u sukhdi boring si nutrionist. Or tumhari jagah yaha h. He keeps that photo in lower drawer.

He lay down on bed- I hate u sona I hate u...


Hahaha dev poora mental ho gaya hai
kabhi kuch bolta hai aur kabhi kuch
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
poor guy he's totally broken

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