Dard-e-Dil.....A loyal fans grief!

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Sonali Mahajan

@Cutiepie.sona

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Dil todne ka haq bhi usi ko dete h
Jisse hum pyaar krte hai,
Shyd yahi hota h saccha pyaar
Ki chot tumhe lagti hai aur aahein hum bhartein h!

Sabse khoobsurat hissa bnaya tha tumhe zindagi ka
Kya kami reh gayi humare pyar m
Jo aisa sila diya is bandagi ka!

Pehle dafa dekha toh
Tujhe par dil haar diya tha,
Laga tujh m kuch baat hai
Ki tune is boring aur dull life ko sawar diya tha!

Ek rishta sa jud gaya tha tere-mere darmiyaan,
Jaane kab aa gyi humme itni duriyaan!
Yaad rahenge woh sare pal jo humne sath bitay the,
Paas hokar bhi ho gye hum dur, jaane kesi yeh majbooriyan!

Ab tujhe dekhkar, taras aate hai is pyaar par,
Tujhse zyyada dukh hota teri is haar par!

Tu kabhi is rishte ki ahmiyat na samjhe
Par hume ise kabhi bhula na paenge,
Koshish karne bhi bekar h ab toh,
Ki chaah kar bhi hum tera saath na chod paenge!

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Sonali Mahajan

@Cutiepie.sona

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Hello peeps!

Back with my another poetry!

Based on the disappointment that we all have with a sudden leap!

Thanku all for encouraging comments on my last poetry post!😳

Hope u'll like this one too!😉

Pls drop in ur comments abt ur views!

Eagerly waiting for ur replies!

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AnanyaGhosh

@AnanyaGhosh

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Le mera reply aa gya...

A vry beautiful and endearing poetry... I lived it...

Truly that devakshi nt became a part of our life bt hamari zindagi... Hamari jeene ki hamari saans lene ki waja...

And d ott dramas and planning plotting made me give up... Amd suddenly d leap news.. Just took d land under my feet...

Bt now seeing sharica in devakshi in a 100% avatar... I wll try to warch d post leap epis as season 2!!

Bt iss show ko aab apni zindagi nhi banana... No way... Ek baar jab dil toit jaata h toh jorna bht mushkil ho jaata h..

I hv accepted d leap 70% and remaining i m trying to...

Beautiful post sonu...

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Sajini Cherian

@sajinifaby

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Sometimes good memories are haunting..
Shaheer ke liye
Am here but with broken trust !

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Dancer.kavya

@Dancer.kavya

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

Shona u r once again back wid ur beautiful poetry..

Loved it.. Keep rocking like dis..

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Luckie2

@Luckie2

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sajinifaby
Sometimes good memories are haunting..
Shaheer ke liye
Am here but with broken trust !

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U r such a positive person in the forum pls dint lose trust ...cheer up di

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Sharica

@Sharica

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Dil khol ke rakh diya yaar...beautiful poetry...

Aisa hi haal ho gaya hain...humne to aisa pyar kiya ki koshish karke bhi saath choda na jaaye...tum se jyaada hum jud gaye is pyar ke rishte se ki halat aisi ho gayi ki jaaye kis raste pe...

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cscs

@cscs

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Nice poetry. Totally relate able. I am not in a position to react on anything ATM. Lets see what happens.

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Sonali Mahajan

@Cutiepie.sona

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
Le mera reply aa gya...
A vry beautiful and endearing poetry... I lived it...
Truly that devakshi nt became a part of our life bt hamari zindagi... Hamari jeene ki hamari saans lene ki waja...
And d ott dramas and planning plotting made me give up... Amd suddenly d leap news.. Just took d land under my feet...

Bt now seeing sharica in devakshi in a 100% avatar... I wll try to warch d post leap epis as season 2!!
Bt iss show ko aab apni zindagi nhi banana... No way... Ek baar jab dil toit jaata h toh jorna bht mushkil ho jaata h..

I hv accepted d leap 70% and remaining i m trying to...

Beautiful post sonu...

Thanx Anu dear!😳

Yeah I know it's really saddening to see that our baby krpkab that we have nurtured with so much love & care is going haywire!

Aab isse dil se nahi lagana ...sacchi!

Aaj is poetry m saari dil ki bhadaas nikali hai!

Hope I conformed to ur expectation!😉