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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: gmgi
Beautiful Aazeen 😳 It was a lovely read. I can just imagine Dev doing the vrat. He really would have. ⭐️

Hi Geena di...😃

Thank you sooo much!😃

I am so glad that you liked what I wrote.

I think too that dev would really have had fasted for Sona, siting the reason for that vrat...

Thanks a lot for your comment and humble words...⭐️😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
Beautiful
i really wanted to see sona fasting n dev along wid her
u fulfilled my wish
it was just perfect
plz do write more
thanks for pm

Thank you so much sona di...😃

If you had a wish, why hadn't you shared with me?

I would have written with double inspiration...😉😆

Next time on, do please let me know... (Except for hot-romantic content. I have zero quotient in that.)

Thank you for your inspiring words. I will continue writing. Did you notice, I am writing a new os every week...😆

Thanks for ur comment.

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Sneha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Beautiful OS ...
Keep writing more dear.
😊

Edited by Rhy2015 - 8 years ago

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Vimal M

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Very beautiful OS.Loved it.I wish we got a scene like this in the show also.

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Anjali333
Wow!!!! 👏 loved it sooo much
If karva chauth would hv happend in th show...then it should b like this😊
Me too wanted sona to write dev's name in hr hand
Nd dev's reaction on mehandi...it was too real
I loved that part sooo much because that too happens with me
My brother also say me to stay away whenever i apply mehandi
That part wz my personal favourite
Thanks fr such cute momrnts
It was v nyc how u ended neha's track
I wish CVS to read this ...so that they come to know what viewers want...😊
Loved evry single bit of ur os
Please come back soon with another fabulous story
Thanks fr pm

Hi Anjali...😃

Thank you so much buddy!

Ia m so happy to read your comment dear.

Atleast someone wrote a detailed comment.

Thank you for that...

Hahahaha... Dev's reaction to mehendi... Well my brother used to give exactly those reactions, he would say: Ye kya Gobar lagaake aa gayi haath pe... Kitni badboo aa rahi hai...😆

As to Neha track: By God! I really had wanted that track to finish this way only... But God knows why they are stretching it like a chewing gum.

Thank u again dear for such a lovely comment... Means a lot to me...

And I am posting a new story every week.

You may get another one next week...😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha
Wow :)
Awesome OS :)
Beautiful :)
Loved it :)
Thanks for the PM :)

Thank you so much!😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: krystle123
wow...its beautiful dear 👏

Thank u dear!😊

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy
This one was so beautiful aazeen
Loved it immensely
Dev sona keeping fast for each other
Neha getting back to ranveer
Ishwari mellowed down gkb not so taunting
Loved it

Thank you so much Gayatri di...

I wanted to mellow them down.

This is the intensity of everything in the show I love.

Glad you loved it...😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: cscs
Beautiful OS. 😊

Thank you!😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Loved it ...wonderfully written...I always wanted a Karwa Chauth scene in our serial but sadly they didnt have this track . thank you so much for writing it for us...👏⭐️

Thank you di... I am glad you loved it... I too missed a karwa chauth day in the show... Thats precisely why I wrote this os. It was a pleasure writing for you all...😃

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