Devakshi TS - Solitary Reaper (ch-2 updated at pg6) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: srilotus

very nice Dear

Do continue :)




Thank you dear 😊
Edited by Rhy2015 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful prologue - update soon dear. sunday bright kardo.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Please do continue sneha
I'm waiting to read how the story unfolds




Thank u Gayu..really need encouragement coz Idk anything bout writing still tried 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shri123

beautiful prologue - update soon dear. sunday bright kardo.





Thank you dear...will update tomorrow morning 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monaleojan

Intresting prolouge.. Do cont. SOON.. :)



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice please update soon!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Prologue seems interesting...
Please do continue...
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3 months ago

Ishwari Dixit was admitted to the hospital because of her illness as she was not following her diet properly. So, Dr. Ahuja introduced Dev to their hospital's best nutritionist.


First meeting

Dr. Ahuja: Sonakshi, he is Mr. Dev Dixit, a very big businessman and a trustee of this hospital.
They shook hands and that touch brings shivers to their bodies.
Sonakshi has never seen such a handsome man like Dev and Dev was dumbstruck seeing an epitome of beauty. They both were lost in each other, when Dr. Ahuja's voice brought them back.

After taking Ishwari Dixit's file they both headed towards Sonakshi's cabin, quiet and embarrassed with that which just happened in Dr. Ahuja's cabin.
After discussing a few things they both bid goodbye.

While going back to the parking lot, Dev suddenly got back to Dr. Ahuja and asked him, if Sonakshi can be his mother's personal nutritionist. He said he will talk to her about it.
In the evening Dev got a call from Dr. Ahuja and told him that Sonakshi agreed to his proposal, but she still want to continue this job so, will only be coming to his home 3 days a week. Dev was very happy to hear that.

First Day at Dixit mansion

Sonakshi was getting ready to go Dev's house, but at the same time she wasn't understanding this jittery feeling, she was having the butterflies in her stomach because just by standing in front of that man she was knocked out.
Whereas Dev has decided to go late because he wanted to introduce Sonakshi to all the family members and was still not believing the fact that beauty is going to work in his house around him.

At sharp 10am
She entered Dixit mansion and was quite impressed by the interiors. Dev saw her entering from his room and came downstairs to welcome her.

Dev: Good morning Dr. Bose.
Sonakshi: Good morning.
There was a spark in their eyes, but today they made sure not to do anything weird which can leave them speechless.
They both made their way to the living room and Dev introduced her to all his 3 sisters (they all the very positive, but they didn't get complete attention from their mother)

Sonakshi found them all very warm and welcoming, within few days she made her space in everyone's heart. But, whenever Dev is around it gets very hard for her to behave normal n Dev also always made sure to come home earlier than his usual timings on those days just to get glimpses of this lady.



Days were passing and they both were getting closer with every passing day. There was an undefined affection between them. Slowly, Dev started making excuses to see meet her at the hospital on the rest of the 4 days, she as well was enjoying this newly found feeling. Dev being a shy and reserved person, was hesitant whereas Sonakshi wanted Dev to confess first.


One day when, Sonakshi was at Dev's house. Ishwari told Dev that they all have to go to their village to perform some rituals for his late father and after that they all have to attend Vicky's wedding too (Vicky is Dev's mama's son)they have to leave tomorrow.iswari said,"I would have gone with his sisters but for rituals, u need to come along". As Ishwari finished this sentence, they both looked at each other and sadness was very much visible in their eyes, but Dev couldn't say no to his mother n nodded his head.


Dev wanted to talk to sonakshi before they leave, but as everyone was around it wasn't possible. At around 7pm Sona left with disappointment coz she wouldn't get to see him for the next few days.

Next morning they left very early n reached there.After performing all the rituals everybody went to their rooms to take some rest.Dev was very restless coz he couldn't talk to Sonakshi before coming here.He tried to call her, but the call wasn't going through coz of the weak network after a few tries finally the call got connected.

Dev: Sonakshi kaisi ho?
Sonakshi: Thik hu Aur aap??
Dev:... (he didn't reply, but there was a continuous smile on their faces)
Dev: Sonakshi main tumse Kuch kehna chahta hu.
Sonakshi: she knew what was coming next n was very happy and nervous at the same time.

Before Dev could say anything the call got disconnected...


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Precap: Dev reached back home in completely devastated n drunken state. He Couldn't believe what he heard and seen.
Edited by Rhy2015 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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UNRES:


Amazing ...this story is really different and interesting

wat a precap yr...

excited for the next update

Do update soonish


Edited by srilotus - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow.. Its very Good... Oii first meeting.. Was awsmm.. Restless to see each other... Kya hua.. Dev babu..Devdas bangaye..?! Eagerly waiting for the next part... Update Soon!

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