Devakshi FF:- The Life Changing Bet **Completed** Epilogue on Pg 168

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.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#711

Originally posted by: falah5
bookmarking😊

Thank you😊

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.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#712

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
amazing
loved it
so sona 8s back ..
loved dev wid ansh ..
waiting for more
plz update soon
thanks for pm

Thank you😊

Yes...she is back but as Tanya

I will try...

You are most welcome

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Erina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#713

Wow wowww finally adii tmne mere ff ka update diya sirf dev hi nhi mai v exicitment se jump kr rhi ty jb mjhe tmhra pm mila... Love u for dis swtheart... Muhhh... 😳

Pta hai kitni badly miss kr rhi ty mai 😭 But tmhe force v nhi kr skti ty as tmhra xams upcoming hai so mai aisa feel kr rhi ty jaise - "Keh v na paun, reh v paun... 😭" n finally i got jo mai itne din se wait kr rhi ty best new year gift from u... 😳

N chap ki kya baat krni vo to bilkul rocking h n heart touching v jaana dev ke sath happy feel ho rha h to sona ko dekh kr rona aata hai... First tym mai dev ke against nhi hu only bcse of u...

Thank god unke beech mein kuch nahi hai nhi 😆 to mai to maar hi jati 😭

My poor devakshi vaqt ne kiya kya haseen sitam tm rhe na tum hum rahe nah hum... U r awesome writter adii seriously tjhe to cvs k jagah hona chahiye tha...

With loads of love n hugs 😳 🤗

I will be waiting for next chap...

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.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#714

Originally posted by: Erinasingh69
Wow wowww finally adii tmne mere ff ka update diya sirf dev hi nhi mai v exicitment se jump kr rhi ty jb mjhe tmhra pm mila... Love u for dis swtheart... Muhhh... 😳
Pta hai kitni badly miss kr rhi ty mai 😭 But tmhe force v nhi kr skti ty as tmhra xams upcoming hai so mai aisa feel kr rhi ty jaise - "Keh v na paun, reh v paun... 😭" n finally i got jo mai itne din se wait kr rhi ty best new year gift from u... 😳
N chap ki kya baat krni vo to bilkul rocking h n heart touching v jaana dev ke sath happy feel ho rha h to sona ko dekh kr rona aata hai... First tym mai dev ke against nhi hu only bcse of u...
Thank god unke beech mein kuch nahi hai nhi 😆 to mai to maar hi jati 😭
My poor devakshi vaqt ne kiya kya haseen sitam tm rhe na tum hum rahe nah hum... U r awesome writter adii seriously tjhe to cvs k jagah hona chahiye tha...
With loads of love n hugs 😳 🤗
I will be waiting for next chap...

Hahaha...I can understand your excitement😳😆😆

And yes...2017 mein yeh pehla update hai...😊

Thanks a lot...I know there are mixed emotions seeing devakshi...but both are not wrong if we see from their places😊

Hahahaha...don't worry Rohan is a positive character...

Thank you so much...😃

Aree nahiin nahiin...aisa kuch nahiin hai😳

Lots of love and hug to you too❤️🤗

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Anjali Sharma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#715

So good to read ur update after a long time😃

Beautifully written👏

Dev has really changed so much...😊

He was so excited to see his son

Loved how he was playing with Ansh

That was so sweet😳

Mishti is really a sweetheart... She is true friend

She is helping dev to get his family back

And Rohan is also a nice person

He help sonakshi in time of her need

I love the positivity of ur ff...thank u so much for that

Try to update soon

Thanks for pm😊

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 8 years ago

#716

Loved it dear...beautifully written... I loved the way Dev was playing with the kid...we always get to see maternal affection very frequently in most of the books...but very few ppl describe fathers emotions towards his kid...I loved that part so much... eagerly wait to see the next update..

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dollyreddy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#717

Amazing chapter dear. Just loved it.

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.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#718

Originally posted by: Anjali333
So good to read ur update after a long time😃
Beautifully written👏

Dev has really changed so much...😊
He was so excited to see his son
Loved how he was playing with Ansh
That was so sweet😳

Mishti is really a sweetheart... She is true friend
She is helping dev to get his family back
And Rohan is also a nice person
He help sonakshi in time of her need
I love the positivity of ur ff...thank u so much for that

Try to update soon
Thanks for pm😊

Yeah...updated after a long time...2017 mein pehli baar

Thanks a lot...

Yes...he was very excited to see and play with his son...

And yes...Mishti is a very nice friend...she tries to help Dev in every way possible...

And Rohan is also a good man...

Thank you so much once again...

My pleasure

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.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#719

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Loved it dear...beautifully written... I loved the way Dev was playing with the kid...we always get to see maternal affection very frequently in most of the books...but very few ppl describe fathers emotions towards his kid...I loved that part so much... eagerly wait to see the next update..

Thank you so much...and yes Dev was very happy to meet his son...exactly..therefore I added this in my FF...I had read somewhere that we all know abt a mothers love but can understand fathers love only when we become one...

But woh toh main nahiin ban sakti...😆

But...still I try to understand it...😊