Devakshi FF:- The Life Changing Bet **Completed** Epilogue on Pg 168

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

ritwik ko bhai hi bana diya Aditi...sach hum log jab likhne pe aate hain toh apni saari bhadaas nikaal dete hain...rofl

Amazing start

interesting characters

Dev is a playboy

update soon

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sowiee

@sowiee

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Wow... Seems a like triangle love story. Bring it on... Waiting for the story to unfold more...

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

A Very Interesting and Lovely start

Dev , Ritwick and Misti are close friends while Dev and Misti come out of rich families Ritwick comes from a working class family for him love is important while for Dev its about money he believes money can also buy love .

Sonakshi a music teacher and her friend cum bhai has come to visit while her parents are thinking to form a marriage alliance between Sonakshi and Ritwick which she clearly tells her mom she has never looked at him differently so there certainly cannot be any marriage talks now for Sonakshi and Ritwick😆

i'm looking forward to seeing where will Dev and Sonakshi meet both are in different areas

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.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: srilotus
ritwik ko bhai hi bana diya Aditi...sach hum log jab likhne pe aate hain toh apni saari bhadaas nikaal dete hain...rofl
Amazing start
interesting characters
Dev is a playboy
update soon

Hahaha..bilkul sahi kaha aapne😆😆

Thank you so much😳

Hmmm...Ofc😊

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simplesweety1

@simplesweety1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

I Loved It! Wow! Jo Bhi You Write Aditi Di Its Awsm As Always! And I Laughed When I Read The Part Where Sona Laughed On Coming To Know About Her And Ritwik's Alliance! 😆

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vivekathapli

@vivekathapli

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

This one is amazing..waiting for the next part

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Soumya

@Soumya23

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Beautiful start...

jaldi jaldi nxt part update karo...

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Amazing

Ritwik bhai jaisa 🤣

Please update soon

Its interesting

Waiting for dev n sona first meet

Plz pm if possible

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Awww adi dost tak thik tha bacche ...bhai banake chod diya yaar tune ritu baby ko
Itna bhi kya gussa bichare par??????
Dev the playboy ab aur kaunsa naya kaand karega...yeh dekhne wali baat hai
Jaldi update kariyo