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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: laughingpearls

Awesome update loved it sorry for late reply


Thankuu pearl...no need to sorry.. m a super late updater😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dakshasharma

Really nice update...

A new love story... Hopefully if ishwari will not play same rolelike in serial.
Do continue dear...




Thankuu dear...m glad u liked it...

Will update today...
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Posted: 8 years ago

RECAP:
Present:
Dr.Sonakshi Bose is an oncologist. She works in a hospital in Mumbai.. There Dev Dixit and his mom came to consult a doctor.
Past:
Sona was dev sister's friend and they fell in love with each other.. But Sonakshi and Dev were separated four years back..To know more read the remaining chapters...



When Dev and Ishwari heard Ishwari's name, they moved towards doctor's cabin.

Sona was busy in checking the details of her new patient's health condition, suddenly she noticed her patient's name...'ISHWARI DIXIT'... But it was too late, before deciding anything she heard the click of her cabin's door... She was not at all prepared.. But she has to be strong.. She is not going to let her past to effect her present. She is the doctor and Ishwari Dixit is her patient..Nothing more, nothing less..

Ishwari's case was also not different.. She met Sona after long four years. A smile started to form on her face and she had an urge to hug her.. She moved forward to hug Sona, a girl with golden heart whom she loved like her own daughter. But Sona's next words stopped her..

"Take your seat Mrs. Dixit"

For a moment Ishwari halted on the spot. The girl, once she called her aunty ji is addressing her as Mrs. Dixit. But she can't blame her..She is the soul reason for everything ,so she can't expect anything from her. Ishwari and Dev took their seat and Sona engrossed in the file.. Once she checked the reports, she got big relief.. Ishwari was in curing stage...
Dev never expected Sona will treat his mom.. He didn't had the courage to talk with her...So he listened her words without saying anything...

Sona discussed Ishwari's health details with them. After hearing Sona's words Dev got big relief..


Atlast Sona said

"Mrs.Dixit...No need to worry..You will be completely fine...I prescribed you some medicines and please come after two weeks. Now you can take your leave. "

After that Sona turned to take something from Almirah..Actually she wanted to avoid any conversation with Dev and Ishwari..

Ishwari wanted to talk with her , not as her doctor. When she was going to tell something to Sona, they heard clicking sound of door followed by a man's voice...

"Sona..., Mai aagayee"

That man didn't notice Dev and Ishwari, directly landed infront of Sona and hugged her tightly.

"I missed you Sona...I know you also missed me..."

"Haan Rittu, I missed you too..but now you are back, I'm soo happy"

Ritwick was really surprised to hear she missed him. Actually he know she missed him when he was not around , but she never admitted it infront of him.

Ishwari and Dev was still in her room.. Dev's jealousy hit him when he saw Ritwick hugging Sona. He fisted his palm out of his anger. Sona was facing Dev, so she saw his expressions and how much jealous he was.


"Woh Rittu..This is my new patient Mrs.Ishwari Dixit and her son Mr.Dixit"


When he heard that he turned to them..

"I'm so sorry , I didn't notice you out my excitement. Meeting Sona after long one week made me forget my surroundings.. Moreover this is her free time, So I thought she will be free now.. So sorry"

"Areh Rittu, Our section is over. They were starting to leave... Oh Sorry!! I forget to introduce him.. This is Ritwick Sen Gupta, my fiance..."

Ritwick looked Sona for a moment..She blinked to him. Ritwick got shock after shock.. But he didn't express it on his face.


"Yeah..I'm Ritwick Sen Gupta.Neurologist of this hospital... Nice to meet You MR.."

Ritwick forwarded his hand towards Dev..

"Dev...Dev dixit"

Dev shook his hand with Ritwick.

Dev excused from there and Ishwari followed him. When they were out of sight Ritwick closed their room and turned towards Sona...

"I need explanation" Ritwick firmly stated her.

"What..what are you talk..talking Rittu" She stammered..


"I need explanation on what happened few minutes ago..You introduce me as your fiance..How my sister can introduce me as her fiance.. I know something is wrong.. Why did you do that Sona...why?? "


"I wanted sadistic pleasure Rittu..I wanted it... I wanted to show him that I was not at all affected.. I wanted to show him that he is my past, he has no right on my future..I'm living a happy life without him where he has no place.. I wanted to show him that he couldn't broke me where I 'm completely broken inside.. I wanted to prove infront of him that Dev Dixit can't control Sonakshi Bose's life"
by saying this she slummed on the nearby sofa..By next second Ritwick was near to her and consoled her. She clutched on his shirt and started to cry her heart out. She was holding her tears last four years, but now she can't take any control over it... He let her to cry without uttering a single word..

He was not aware she was this much broken inside. He knew she had a past, but he never pressurised her to tell her story to him. Once she told him that she had a lost love, she had no problem with sharing it with him, but she feared it will broke her again and told it to Ritwick. He understood her situation and didn't compel her to share with him. Deep down he hated that person who was the reason behind her sadness.

Dev Dixit completely broke after seeing Sona in Ritwick's arms. He never thought Sona will move forward. How can he think that, she has all the rights to move forward. He is the main reason why they broke up and how can he think that she will wait for him, that too when he himself told her that he is going to marry other girl. Immersed in thoughts he walked and suddenly bumped to a lady... NATASHA, Natasha Gujral...How can he forget that face..


"Dev, Tum yahan...sab teek hena..."

"Woh actually, Mom ki tabiyath teek nahi thi...So.."

"Oh God! What happened to Aunty ji...How is she now??"

"Nothing to worry..She is okay now"


Dev didn't wanted to share Ishwari's health details with others.

"Thank God! , I'm so happy to see you here Dev... Meeting you after four years is such a pleasant surprise..."

"Same here Natasha...By the way what are you doing here"

"Seriously Dev?! You are asking this question to a doctor...okay bathathi hun...m a gynacologist and haan, my hubby is also working here...Let's have coffee..I will call him too.."

Suddenly Natasha's phone started to ring and she attended it..


"I'm really Sorry Dev, some emergency came. Gotta go..meet you some other time..please give me your number"

Both of them exchanged their numbers and Natasha rushed towards labour room and Dev to his memory lane.

After completing her works Natasha moved towards Sona's cabin , where a cute scene welcomed. Sona and Ritwick were sleeping by Sona placing her head on Ritwick's shoulder. She always adored their bond. Sona is not only a wonderful sister but also a wonderful sister in law. Natasha considered herself as very lucky to have them in her life. She didn't disturb them and waited them to wake up. But she noticed the stains of tears on Sona's face, it made her restless.


Soon Sona and Ritwick woke up , Sona surprised to see Natasha.

She ran to her and hugged her.

"I missed you bhabhi..."

Natasha knew something is wrong with her. Usually she call her Naat but when she is not in her usual self she call her bhabhi.

Natasha patted her by looking Ritwick with her questioning eyes. He assured her.

After sometime Sona told them that she want to talk with them and they planned to go to their favourite cafeteria.

Sona determined to share her past with them. She never shared her pain with anyone. She thought she was healing, but Dev's presence made that wound refresh.

Sona started to share her past with them. Ritwick and Natasha sat either side of Sona as a pillar of support. She told them how they became friends and each others everything. Both of them were aware about their feelings but none of them was ready to confess. But one day Dev confessed his feelings to Sona. She was on cloud nine at that day. She wished for her fairy tale love story. God heard her prayers and gifted Dev as her prince charming. She too confessed her feelings to him. That was just a beginning of their love story. There started a beautiful journey of them. Sona always teased about how he will propose her. Dev always said her that he will give world's best proposal to her. And she knew that he will give best to her.




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Edited by binuuu - 8 years ago
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Part-4


--Flashback--
One day evening he gifted her a packet and asked to open it from her home. Soon she reached home and ran to her room. When she opened that gift box she saw a beautiful saree with accessories. Dev messaged her an address and asked her to meet him there.

She was sure Dev is planned something good. When she reached the place she saw a beautifully decorated venue.. Deep down in her heart she knew that he is going to propose her. She asked her to come at 8'O clock, but he was not there, she waited him for whole one hour and she tried to call him. But all the time she heard busy tone from other end. She waited long two hours there with worry filled mind. Suddenly she heard the screeching sound of car. She ran to the car and saw Dev. From his face she understood that something is wrong with him.

"Dev.. Where were you?..Where was your phone. How many time I called you..."

She went on with her quetions.

"Enough Sonakshi... Please just shut up your mouth"

She never heard thin tone from him. She really shocked to hear Sonakshi from his mouth, he always addressed her as Sona. But this sudden change made havoc in her. She became quite after hearing his words.

The scenes happened after that was just like nightmare for her.She wished to open her eyes from that sleep. One of the best evening turned to worst evening of her life.

Dev told her that he was playing with her emotions and he never loved her. He was loving someother girl Natasha and he is willing to marry her. And Sona was a time pass for him. He really loves Natasha and going to marry her within two weeks.

She shuddered after hearing his words.Tears started to flow from her eyes where there was not a single stain of tear on his face, no emotion , no guilty. The man whom she loved was playing with her emotions, how fool was she to let him make her fool. She sat on the mud by crying her heart out, after sometime she stood with determinations in her eyes.

"What you thought Mr.Dixit? You can fool me and I will cry for my lost love forever...So you are completely mistaken Mr.Dixit.. I'm not going to waste a single drop of tear for you. We are over. So goodbye forever. I wish you a very happy life ahead with your partner. I hope we never cross each others path again. "

She acted completely strong infront of Dev, but deep down she was completely broken.

On the other hand she was not aware that he was more broken than her. He made her go from his life. He immensely loved her but destiny was cruel to them.

When she reached the home she avoided any interaction with her family and ran to her room. There was something waiting for her. An admission letter for her MD course. She always dreamt of studying the most famous college in Mumbai, finally she got a chance to start her life afresh from the memory of Dev.

She had to join after two days and planned to go next day itself. Her family members were very happy and proud about her. Saurab was settled in Mumbai long ago, Bose family was staying in Delhi only because Sona is doing her MBBS from there. Now she is going to Mumbai, so whole family planned to settle in to their house in Mumbai.

Sona didn't inform about her departure to anyone. She was not in a state to do that. There she met two beautiful souls Ritwick Sen Gupta and Natasha Gujral. Soon they became best of friends. Sona found a brother in Ritwick. They were her pillar of support. Soon Natasha and Ritwick got married. Her best friend became her bhabhi. She was very happy for them, unlike her love story her brother got his love of life. These past four years they were with her in all ups and downs.

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When she finished her story she was crying her heart out. Ritwick consoled her ,but Natasha's mind somewhere else. The names Dev and Natasha striked her.

"What's his real name Sona? " Natasha asked her.

"Dev, Dev Dixit..."

Natasha felt she is seeing some horror film. Her friend was in pain all these years, if she was aware about this she could have mend it at that moment.


Suddenly Natasha's eyes caught something rather someone. Far corner of that cafe a man was sitting in his deep thoughts by sipping his coffee.

She realised that is none other than Dev. She excused from Ritwick and Sona, and moved towards his chair.

"Hai Dev"

"Hai" , From his body language she understood that he is not interested to talk with her. But she want to do this, life of two innocent souls are in her hand, she want to solve their misery.

At that moment Dev spotted Ritwick and Sona. Their proximity made him break the glass on his hand. Natasha followed his eyes and she spotted he is looking at Sona's and Ritwick's direction.

"Come Dev, I need to talk you. "

She held his hand and walked towards their table. Ritwick and Sona raised their eyes to look who came there and they saw Dev with Natasha. Suddenly Sona stood up seeing them and started to move from there. Ritwick too understood that person is none other than who broke his sister's heart.

"Sona, please stop and hear me out.. I'm one of the main reason you guys separated. Let me give a chance to explain"

Sona looked Natasha in shock.

"Please take your seat Dev ". Natasha told Dev.. Dev and Sona avoided looking at each other.

So this Natasha is none other than the girl whom Dev loved and going to marry. But why she didn't marry him and married Ritwick. Lot of unanswered questions started to form in her.

"I know, what you are thinking Sona... Everything happened due to some misunderstandings. Your assumption was right, Dev was going to propose you on that day. He was madly in love with you.
You know what, we were family friends.. And my dadi helped Aunty Ji on her crucial time and Aunty ji promised her that she will fullfill all her wishes.. But dadi ji never asked anything from her. But on that day dadi ji's tabiyath bigad gayi and she asked Ishwari aunty Ji to come hospital. From there she asked Dev's hand for me. My dad was also there,he didn't said anything. But Aunty Ji thought she got a golden chance to return back and instantly agreed for dadi's wish without considering Dev's opinion. She was not aware about ur relation. That day Aunty Ji talked with Dev and asked him to marry me. He refused by saying he loves someone, but Aunty Ji thought he is trying to find an excuse to escape and threatened him. She told him that she will end her life if he didn't agree for her decision.. He was shattered and finally he agreed for his mother's sake...
The next day when you guys broke up Dev came to me and told me about you and he can't marry me. He can't give your place to anyone else. I assured him that I will handle the situation. My dad was very understanding, he always fullfilled my wishes.
My dad asked me whether I'm ready to marry Dev, you know, I love Ritwick and I told him that and he promised me that he will talk with Aunty ji and dadi. He made them understand.
Soon Aunty ji too understood that he loves you. She felt very bad at that time. She considered herself as the culprit for your separation. She was ready to accept you Sona, She loved you very much..But she was not aware about you two. That's why all this happened.
Next day he came to meet you. But you were not there. We searched many places in Delhi as well as Kolkata. But you didn't left any clue. You know the remaining story...You got admission in Mumbai and you settled here. I came here like you and shadi hogai and I lost all contacts with Dev.
If I had a small idea about your story I should have helped both of you Sona..."

After hearing the story tears started to flow from their eyes. Dev got a big relief. He wanted to make her understand , now Natasha done it. What he is going to do now , she is already engaged, from her face he can clearly understand that she really likes Ritwick.. Was he too late.. Ritwick understood his dilemma and initiated the conversation..

'I'm Ritwick Sen Gupta, Natasha's husband'

Dev looked him with wide eyes and he assured him.

Soon Ritwick and Natasha moved out of the scenes leaving two love birds alone..


Dev held Sona's hand

"I'm so sorry Sona... I know,I don't deserve your story..I broke your dreams.. That day I had no other option. I knew if I say truth then you will definitely tell me to marry Natasha.. And I knew that you will never forget me too... So I thought to make you hate me.. So I told all the lies Sona...I'm really sorry Sona..Please forgive me"

"Please Dev...Let's forget it...Let's start afresh... Friends..." She forwarded her hand to him...

He shook her hand with her...
"Friends...By the way your fiance kafi handsome h "

She knew he was teasing her...She nudged him and told

"Bhai h voh mera"

Dev's phone started to ring..It showed Nikki's name.. He told Sona to pick up the call.. But she feared to take it, she really missed her but she never tried to contact her. She nod her head in negative, Dev assured her and finally she picked it...

"Hell...hellloo"

There was complete silence on other side. Nikki felt she is dreaming... When she again heard the sound she jumped from her place

"Sona...sonaa...where are you yaar...I missed you...where the hell you disappeared...Don't talk to me..." she started to sob..

Sona's state was also not less..She missed her bestie, she asked sorry 100th time...Atlast Nikki forgave her...


"Ek minute...ek minute...I called bhai and you picked it...SONA BHABHIII...Ahem...ahem...I want to meet my bhabhi come bestie...jaldi bhai ke saath gar aajaan...mom and I will wait for you guys"

After that Sona and Dev spend some time with each other...There started their friendship again... History is going to repeat.. But this time only happy ending.


That's it guys...finally i completed it😆
Let me know how is it...criticisms are always welcome...
Happy Ramadan everyone..Ramadan Mubarak...cya after one month...My dear writer friends,don't forget to pm me ur stories... I will read and comment after Ramadan...
Lots of love
Binuuu

Edited by binuuu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful happy ending.. Loved it..
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was a wonderful FS!!
Enjoyed it a lot...
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful ending.loved it.waited for this FS.but forgot d name of ur FS.Loved d way 'how sonakshi suppressed her broken dreams ,pretended like she was not affected'.happy for rejuvenating their relationship.
Edited by maasha - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was beautiful...all MU cleared nd now start of new friendship..
Finally happy ending...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update dear
Finally all misunderstanding solved
They became friends again
Thanks for pm
Ramadan Mubarak to you & your family as well.

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