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hey guys i am saira ...i am new to this forum and new to writing as well...so if i did any mistake...plz excuse me...and plz comment and express your point of veiw...
my story is about if sona had a younger brother,and he happens to love riya..post devakshi break up..how do they react on their relationship?...what would ishwari do in such a situation?...and how gkb spices up the drama?...will this relation acts a bridge for reunion of devakshi...?
It has been 3 months since devakshi broke up... and trying to move on...but unfortunately neither would do that...everything has changed but not feeling of being without each other...
like every day sonakshi have done daily routine and got up to the braekfast table..but today the topic is interesting...
at the table
asha: sona oo tumme patha hai...kal tumura bhai anewala hai...
sona (with surprised expression):maa mera bhai tho yahi hai kyun dada?
asha:arre ee bhai nahi ...mera matlab hai elena ka bhai ...kolkata se...
sona:akhil? achanak se kyun?
elena:oo usko koye project hai yaha kisi company mein...isliye
sona:oo good..tho kitne baje araha hai oo?
elena: kal sube ki flight se..
sona:tho tik hai...maa muje dher horai hai...main nikalthi hun...bye every one...
she left the house...
the next day
door bell rings...
sona:main dekti hun
(sona opens the door to see akhil)
akhil:sonaaa di...kaise ho aap?
sona:akhil...main teek hun ?? tum kaise ho? (they hug each other)...
(he comes inside and greets every one)
akhil:nashta kar rahe hun..bhahut bhuk lagi hai ...main(asha interupts)
asha:pehle fresh hojao uske ke baad...
akhil:kya mashi aap bhi maa ki tara hogayi...tik hai main jaraha hun...
(he leaves)
sona:tho baba main chal thi hun...sham ko milte hai...
bijoy:ha bete jao...have a good day...
sona:tq baba bye(she leaves)
(saying she leaves)
after some time
akhil:dekho mashi main agaya...jaldhi nashta karletha hun...varna late hojaunga...
asha:acha akhil tummara internship kis company mein hai?
akhil:oo mashi...ish...(phone ring interupts) one second aa mashi...(on phone)ha tum log ponchungaye...main araha hun...(he ends the call) mashi sham ko milte hai ...bye
(he leaves)
AT ISHWARI DIXIT COMMUNICATION OFFICE
Akhil:ha finally yeah...main pounchungaye...patha hai main hamesha se yaha kaaam karna chatha tha...aaj finally god ne meri wish grant ki...
one of his friend:god ne nahi tumari mehnat ne...
akhil:ha wo bhi hai...(tina comes there and informs that dev wants to meet them)chalo...
AT DEV CABIN
dev:so gentle men...main iss project ko lekar bhahut serious hun...isliye aap logonko delhi bhulaya gaye...so i think aap mein se koye bhi muje shakayat ka moka nahi denge...is that clear..
hum sath kaam karne vale tho naam jana zaruri hena...lets start with right side...
(every body introduces and akhil's turn)
AKHIL:sir akhil biswas...
DEV:BISWAS ...bengali ho
AKHIL:yes sir...koye problem?
DEV:NO nothing like that ...infact i am very happy to work with a bengali...
AKHIL:thank you sir...i will make sure aap ki ye khushi barkarar rahega...
dev:nice to meet you ...gentlemen ...now you can go head with your work...
(everybody leaves)
(dev remenbers the hospital conversation when sonakshi scolds him in bengali)
DEV TO HIM: I MISS YOU SONAKSHI khas karke tumhari bengali galliyon ko...bhahut miss kartha hun...
OUTSIDE THE CABIN
AKHIL:SOO GUYS...hume hamara kaam par pura focus lagana hai...ok...(every one nods in yes)
EVENING NEAR SONAKSHI HOUSE
(as usaul dev was waiting in his car to get a glimpse of his sonakshi and Akhil notices him.he goes to dev )
AKHIL:DEV sir aap yaha?
DEV:AKhil tum ?
AKHIL:HA...SIR main yahi rehta hun...aap mereliye?
DEV:nahi tumhareliye nahi...ooo (with a small poss)cafe hain tho coffe pine aya hun...
AKHIL:itne door...ok cool...sir actually sath main pesakthe hai oo hamari project ki design ready hai...
DEV: abhi karna hoga..oo (AKHIL interupts)
AKHIL:plz sir ... sath mein dhono kaam hojayega...
DEV:(with a disapointment as he cant meet sona) ok...chalo mein park karke atha hoon...
AKHIL:ok...sir tq...(both sit in the cafe) tho sir ee hamare mobile ka design hai...(dev interupts)
DEV:TUM begali hona...tho yaha kaise? i mean muje laga ki tum kisi bachler room main rehte honge...?
AKHIL:ha ...sir par mere mashi meshu yahi rehthe hai...aap apne car jaha park kiya na oo ghar ...(dev interuptes)
DEV:tum sona ke ghar mein rehthe ho...
AKHIL:ha sir...aap sona di ko janthe hai..
DEV:OO(thinks agar mane isse bathadiya tho ye sona ko bathadega aur oo muje yaha dek kar bhahut gussa hogi nahi) unne kon nahi janta...seher ki best nutritionist hena...
AKHIL:OO...par aap tho unne ese adress kar rahe hai jaise(dev interupts)
dev:jaise?
AKHIL:JAISE aap dono ek durse ko bhahut jan pehchan hai..
DEV:esa kuch nahi hai...jab meri maa hospital mein thi tho unhone diet chart diya ... bas..aur kuch nai...vese tumhare ghar mein patha hai tum mereliye kaam karthe ho...
AKHIL:NAI sir oo baat adhuri reh gayi thi...ghar pohanchte hi ...(dev interupts)
DEV:nahi math bathana...
AKHIL:(WITH SURPRISE LOOK) ji kyun?
DEV:OO project nayi hena...aur main chahtha hun ki ye project confidential rahe...
AKHIL:par (dev interupts)
DEV:mane kaha na...
akhil:ok...sir (murmuring to himself)khibhabe obodhro che...
DEV:main jantha hun main bhahut rude hoon...
AKHIL:SIR aapko bengali athi hai..main nahi jantha tha i am sorry(with a sad and confused face)
DEV: bengali nahi par obodhro ka matlab ache se jantha hun...
AKHIL:OO...TIK hai tho kal milte hai sir...
DEV:good and i hope tum apne ghar mein (akhil interupts)
AKHIL: SIR aap ne muj pe inte bharose ke sath ee kaam sopa hai ...tho i will never let my boos down sir ...dont worry
DEV:ok...i hope so good night
AKHIL:good night sir...(dev leaves) strange man...(he also leaves)
AT SONAKSHI HOME
(AKHIL is back home)
AKHIL:(looking at sonakshi)sona di aap kafi popular hai...
SONA:HA...
AKHIL:itne surprised look...di aap ko pata hai aaj mene ek admi se mile...oo aap ki itne tarif kar raha tha...kaha tha...aap ne unke ki maa diet chart plan ki...
SONA:OO really...vese kaun hai ee admi...
AKHIL:NAAM tho patha nai ...par lag raha tha aap ko jantha tha...
(elena souruv comes into hall)
ELENA:akhil tum hamare sath chalo...
AKHIL: ha...muje bhi aap se baat karna hai...chalo
(all three leaves)
IN SOURUV ROOM
elena:akhil oo kal sona...(he interupts)
akhil:kal sona di ka birthday...aap unne surprise karna chathi ho...but you are late...kyun ki mera plan ready hai...
ELENA:OO how mean...tum ne hume bathaya bina plan banaliye...
AKHIL:ISME mean hone ki kya bath hai...aur vese main sona di ka favourite bhai hun...itne haq tho bantha hai..
SOURUV:OOO hellow sona ka favourite bhai main hun
AKHIL:nai..dada...aap unke favourite dada ho...aur main unka favourite chota bhai...logic samja karona dada...
SOUROV:tik hai...aab plan batayaga...
(they discuss the plan)
AKHIL:tho done ...kal thoda jaldi shuru karna hoga...(three hifi each other)
THE NEXT MORNING
DEV OFFICE
(AKHIL reaches tina table)
AKHIL:tina...dev sir hai kya cabin main?
TINA: HA... KYUN?
AKHIL:ha...oo bas permission chaye tha...aaj keliye...mood tho tik hena unka...?
TINA:HA ...TIK HAI ...infact bhahut acha hai...tum jao...
AKHIL:soothi (she gives a confused expression) i meant sachi...(she nods in yes he goes inside)
(nok nok)
dev:come in ...
AKHIL:morning sir...
DEV:akhil...tum kuch kaam tha..?
AKHIL:SIR ..oo muje aaj keliye...half day leave chahiye...
DEV:half day...jan saktha hun kyun?
AKHIL:aaj soni ka birthday hai...tho main,dada aur di unkeliye surprise plan ki hai...tho
DEV:Aaj sona ka birthday hai...
AKHIL:actually kal hai sir...par hum bara baje manayenge..tho
DEV:I KNOW unke maa ka birthday bhi esehi manaya tha...(he smiles)
AKHIL:SIR...aapko kese patha...
dev:i just guessed ...tume chuti chahiye na...(he nods in yes)...granted...tum jasakthe ho...
AKHIL:THANK you sir...and ek baat kahoon if you dont mind?
DEV:ha...bolo
AKHIL:SIR kabhi kabhi esehi hasliya kijiye...i dont think aapke hasne se company ka shares main koye farak padega...(he leaves...and dev gets a flash back of night power cut scene)
AT A COFFE SHOP
(akhil waiting for some one and the person arrives..it is none other than riya)
AKHIL:MAIN tumse milne keliye ...all the way kolkata se aya hun...oo tum mujse milne keliye coffe shop tak ane keliye inte dheer kardi...not fair riya
RIYA:everything is fair in love...mr akhil (he smiles)
AKHIL:RIYA...patha hai mene tume kitne miss kiya...aur ee delhi project hasil karne keliye kitni mehnat lagi..
RIYA:MUJE patha hai...and mene tumareliye kuch layi...(she gives him a gift wraped box)
AKHIL:EE kya hai ...
RIYA:khud deklo...(he opens the box...and its a watch and he smiles)tum muje jab bhi miss karogi tho ee watch tum yaad dilayegi main hamesha main tumare sath hun...
AKHIL:(hugs her)thank you soo much riya...par iska ee matlab nahi ki hum nahi milenge...tume muje rooz milna hoga...(she nods in yes...and akhil looks at the watch)o my god ..bhahut dheer hogai...muje ghar nikalna hoga...miss riya ...i need to leave ...kal milte hai...(he hugs her)bye...
(both leave)
SONAKSHI HOME
my story is about if sona had a younger brother,and he happens to love riya..post devakshi break up..how do they react on their relationship?...what would ishwari do in such a situation?...and how gkb spices up the drama?...will this relation acts a bridge for reunion of devakshi...?
It has been 3 months since devakshi broke up... and trying to move on...but unfortunately neither would do that...everything has changed but not feeling of being without each other...
like every day sonakshi have done daily routine and got up to the braekfast table..but today the topic is interesting...
at the table
asha: sona oo tumme patha hai...kal tumura bhai anewala hai...
sona (with surprised expression):maa mera bhai tho yahi hai kyun dada?
asha:arre ee bhai nahi ...mera matlab hai elena ka bhai ...kolkata se...
sona:akhil? achanak se kyun?
elena:oo usko koye project hai yaha kisi company mein...isliye
sona:oo good..tho kitne baje araha hai oo?
elena: kal sube ki flight se..
sona:tho tik hai...maa muje dher horai hai...main nikalthi hun...bye every one...
she left the house...
the next day
door bell rings...
sona:main dekti hun
(sona opens the door to see akhil)
akhil:sonaaa di...kaise ho aap?
sona:akhil...main teek hun ?? tum kaise ho? (they hug each other)...
(he comes inside and greets every one)
akhil:nashta kar rahe hun..bhahut bhuk lagi hai ...main(asha interupts)
asha:pehle fresh hojao uske ke baad...
akhil:kya mashi aap bhi maa ki tara hogayi...tik hai main jaraha hun...
(he leaves)
sona:tho baba main chal thi hun...sham ko milte hai...
bijoy:ha bete jao...have a good day...
sona:tq baba bye(she leaves)
(saying she leaves)
after some time
akhil:dekho mashi main agaya...jaldhi nashta karletha hun...varna late hojaunga...
asha:acha akhil tummara internship kis company mein hai?
akhil:oo mashi...ish...(phone ring interupts) one second aa mashi...(on phone)ha tum log ponchungaye...main araha hun...(he ends the call) mashi sham ko milte hai ...bye
(he leaves)
AT ISHWARI DIXIT COMMUNICATION OFFICE
Akhil:ha finally yeah...main pounchungaye...patha hai main hamesha se yaha kaaam karna chatha tha...aaj finally god ne meri wish grant ki...
one of his friend:god ne nahi tumari mehnat ne...
akhil:ha wo bhi hai...(tina comes there and informs that dev wants to meet them)chalo...
AT DEV CABIN
dev:so gentle men...main iss project ko lekar bhahut serious hun...isliye aap logonko delhi bhulaya gaye...so i think aap mein se koye bhi muje shakayat ka moka nahi denge...is that clear..
hum sath kaam karne vale tho naam jana zaruri hena...lets start with right side...
(every body introduces and akhil's turn)
AKHIL:sir akhil biswas...
DEV:BISWAS ...bengali ho
AKHIL:yes sir...koye problem?
DEV:NO nothing like that ...infact i am very happy to work with a bengali...
AKHIL:thank you sir...i will make sure aap ki ye khushi barkarar rahega...
dev:nice to meet you ...gentlemen ...now you can go head with your work...
(everybody leaves)
(dev remenbers the hospital conversation when sonakshi scolds him in bengali)
DEV TO HIM: I MISS YOU SONAKSHI khas karke tumhari bengali galliyon ko...bhahut miss kartha hun...
OUTSIDE THE CABIN
AKHIL:SOO GUYS...hume hamara kaam par pura focus lagana hai...ok...(every one nods in yes)
EVENING NEAR SONAKSHI HOUSE
(as usaul dev was waiting in his car to get a glimpse of his sonakshi and Akhil notices him.he goes to dev )
AKHIL:DEV sir aap yaha?
DEV:AKhil tum ?
AKHIL:HA...SIR main yahi rehta hun...aap mereliye?
DEV:nahi tumhareliye nahi...ooo (with a small poss)cafe hain tho coffe pine aya hun...
AKHIL:itne door...ok cool...sir actually sath main pesakthe hai oo hamari project ki design ready hai...
DEV: abhi karna hoga..oo (AKHIL interupts)
AKHIL:plz sir ... sath mein dhono kaam hojayega...
DEV:(with a disapointment as he cant meet sona) ok...chalo mein park karke atha hoon...
AKHIL:ok...sir tq...(both sit in the cafe) tho sir ee hamare mobile ka design hai...(dev interupts)
DEV:TUM begali hona...tho yaha kaise? i mean muje laga ki tum kisi bachler room main rehte honge...?
AKHIL:ha ...sir par mere mashi meshu yahi rehthe hai...aap apne car jaha park kiya na oo ghar ...(dev interuptes)
DEV:tum sona ke ghar mein rehthe ho...
AKHIL:ha sir...aap sona di ko janthe hai..
DEV:OO(thinks agar mane isse bathadiya tho ye sona ko bathadega aur oo muje yaha dek kar bhahut gussa hogi nahi) unne kon nahi janta...seher ki best nutritionist hena...
AKHIL:OO...par aap tho unne ese adress kar rahe hai jaise(dev interupts)
dev:jaise?
AKHIL:JAISE aap dono ek durse ko bhahut jan pehchan hai..
DEV:esa kuch nahi hai...jab meri maa hospital mein thi tho unhone diet chart diya ... bas..aur kuch nai...vese tumhare ghar mein patha hai tum mereliye kaam karthe ho...
AKHIL:NAI sir oo baat adhuri reh gayi thi...ghar pohanchte hi ...(dev interupts)
DEV:nahi math bathana...
AKHIL:(WITH SURPRISE LOOK) ji kyun?
DEV:OO project nayi hena...aur main chahtha hun ki ye project confidential rahe...
AKHIL:par (dev interupts)
DEV:mane kaha na...
akhil:ok...sir (murmuring to himself)khibhabe obodhro che...
DEV:main jantha hun main bhahut rude hoon...
AKHIL:SIR aapko bengali athi hai..main nahi jantha tha i am sorry(with a sad and confused face)
DEV: bengali nahi par obodhro ka matlab ache se jantha hun...
AKHIL:OO...TIK hai tho kal milte hai sir...
DEV:good and i hope tum apne ghar mein (akhil interupts)
AKHIL: SIR aap ne muj pe inte bharose ke sath ee kaam sopa hai ...tho i will never let my boos down sir ...dont worry
DEV:ok...i hope so good night
AKHIL:good night sir...(dev leaves) strange man...(he also leaves)
AT SONAKSHI HOME
(AKHIL is back home)
AKHIL:(looking at sonakshi)sona di aap kafi popular hai...
SONA:HA...
AKHIL:itne surprised look...di aap ko pata hai aaj mene ek admi se mile...oo aap ki itne tarif kar raha tha...kaha tha...aap ne unke ki maa diet chart plan ki...
SONA:OO really...vese kaun hai ee admi...
AKHIL:NAAM tho patha nai ...par lag raha tha aap ko jantha tha...
(elena souruv comes into hall)
ELENA:akhil tum hamare sath chalo...
AKHIL: ha...muje bhi aap se baat karna hai...chalo
(all three leaves)
IN SOURUV ROOM
elena:akhil oo kal sona...(he interupts)
akhil:kal sona di ka birthday...aap unne surprise karna chathi ho...but you are late...kyun ki mera plan ready hai...
ELENA:OO how mean...tum ne hume bathaya bina plan banaliye...
AKHIL:ISME mean hone ki kya bath hai...aur vese main sona di ka favourite bhai hun...itne haq tho bantha hai..
SOURUV:OOO hellow sona ka favourite bhai main hun
AKHIL:nai..dada...aap unke favourite dada ho...aur main unka favourite chota bhai...logic samja karona dada...
SOUROV:tik hai...aab plan batayaga...
(they discuss the plan)
AKHIL:tho done ...kal thoda jaldi shuru karna hoga...(three hifi each other)
THE NEXT MORNING
DEV OFFICE
(AKHIL reaches tina table)
AKHIL:tina...dev sir hai kya cabin main?
TINA: HA... KYUN?
AKHIL:ha...oo bas permission chaye tha...aaj keliye...mood tho tik hena unka...?
TINA:HA ...TIK HAI ...infact bhahut acha hai...tum jao...
AKHIL:soothi (she gives a confused expression) i meant sachi...(she nods in yes he goes inside)
(nok nok)
dev:come in ...
AKHIL:morning sir...
DEV:akhil...tum kuch kaam tha..?
AKHIL:SIR ..oo muje aaj keliye...half day leave chahiye...
DEV:half day...jan saktha hun kyun?
AKHIL:aaj soni ka birthday hai...tho main,dada aur di unkeliye surprise plan ki hai...tho
DEV:Aaj sona ka birthday hai...
AKHIL:actually kal hai sir...par hum bara baje manayenge..tho
DEV:I KNOW unke maa ka birthday bhi esehi manaya tha...(he smiles)
AKHIL:SIR...aapko kese patha...
dev:i just guessed ...tume chuti chahiye na...(he nods in yes)...granted...tum jasakthe ho...
AKHIL:THANK you sir...and ek baat kahoon if you dont mind?
DEV:ha...bolo
AKHIL:SIR kabhi kabhi esehi hasliya kijiye...i dont think aapke hasne se company ka shares main koye farak padega...(he leaves...and dev gets a flash back of night power cut scene)
AT A COFFE SHOP
(akhil waiting for some one and the person arrives..it is none other than riya)
AKHIL:MAIN tumse milne keliye ...all the way kolkata se aya hun...oo tum mujse milne keliye coffe shop tak ane keliye inte dheer kardi...not fair riya
RIYA:everything is fair in love...mr akhil (he smiles)
AKHIL:RIYA...patha hai mene tume kitne miss kiya...aur ee delhi project hasil karne keliye kitni mehnat lagi..
RIYA:MUJE patha hai...and mene tumareliye kuch layi...(she gives him a gift wraped box)
AKHIL:EE kya hai ...
RIYA:khud deklo...(he opens the box...and its a watch and he smiles)tum muje jab bhi miss karogi tho ee watch tum yaad dilayegi main hamesha main tumare sath hun...
AKHIL:(hugs her)thank you soo much riya...par iska ee matlab nahi ki hum nahi milenge...tume muje rooz milna hoga...(she nods in yes...and akhil looks at the watch)o my god ..bhahut dheer hogai...muje ghar nikalna hoga...miss riya ...i need to leave ...kal milte hai...(he hugs her)bye...
(both leave)
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