Devkashi Two Shots : Cant Let Go

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Posted: 9 years ago
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First ever os by me..m not a writer so please bear with me and let me know ur views..


Cant Let Go

He entered late night in the house after work and heard his mami talking to Ishwari " Suna hai bangalan ne kisi ko fasa liya hai..acha hi huva kamse kam humare dev ka tho picha chut gaya" that's it..he could not take it anymore his frustration had reached another level. He kept walking towards his room. Ishwari who was waiting for him to come back called out to him but he excused himself and told her he was tired and needed rest. He marched straight towards his bedroom. He closed the door behind. He needed some privacy. Threw his coat on the bed and continued taking rounds in the room. Ritvik was getting on his nerves. Every time he noticed or heard anything about Sonakshi and Ritvik it will break him apart. This needed to end somewhere he could not just let her go. She belonged to him and only him. "mera Sonkashi pai haq tha aur humesha rahega...humare beech aur koi nahi asakta" he murmured to himself.

He checked the watch it was 11:30 P.M. He badly needed to talk to Sonakshi. He decided to wait till the morning but he did not have patience to wait. He picked his phone and dialed her number. She did not receive his call. He kept trying again. Finally she picked up..

"Maine kaha tha aapse ki aap mujhe call na kare"

"mujhe tumhse kuch jaruri bath karni hai"

"lekin mujhe aapse koi bath nahi karni hai"

"mai kal subha 7 bajhe tumhe pick up karne aajuvunga"

"lekin"

"ill see you in the morning"

Before she could complete he disconnected the call. He was just waiting for clock to strike 7 so that he could meet her.

Next day in the morning he reached to her place exact on time. He noticed her coming out of her house. He could not take his eyes away from her. All his anger and frustration just disappeared in seconds. He kept starring till she called out to him. He finally came back to his senses.

"jo bhi bolna hai jaldi bolo...mujhe jana hai"

"Yaha nahi...mere sath chalo"

"mai kahi nahi ja rahi"

Before she could complete...took hold of her hand and made her sit in the car. He drove her to distance far away from city so that nobody disturbs them. She kept yelling throughout on the way but he paid no attention and kept driving.

Finally they reached the destination he stopped the car and got down. She too moved out of the car.

"Ye kya batmizi hai Dev...aapko koi haq nahi hai ki aap"

"mujhe haq hai Sonakshi...humesha tha aur rahega"

He came dangerously close to her...

"ye aap ki galat falmy hai Dev...aap mujh par se sara haq kho chuke hai..aur useke liye zimedar aap khud hai"

"mai manta hu Sonakshi meri galthi thi..lekin tumhe bhi koi haq nahi hai kit um mujhe chod ke kisi aur ke sath chali javo"

Sonakshi realized where this was heading too..She realized what was Dev condition right now as she had experienced the same when Dev was going to get married to Natasha. But today Dev had forced her to take that decision. So she was confident enough while facing him.

So guys here comes the first part...let me know if u all wnt me to continue... waiting for your reply's.. 😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice atleast this Dev understands ...I like it please continue...absolutely curious to know how it will end too ...dont make us wait long ...eagerly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its really nice...
Please cont soon😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting ...plz continue
eagerly waiting😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Nice...
It doesn't seems to be ur first write up...superb
Do continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You said first time writer ... he'll you awesome as a writer
Yes Dev realizing Sonakshi should only belong to him
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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intrstngg strt...
luvd it..
waitngg 2 knw whts sona's move..
continue plzz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omgg no why'd you end it there 😭 It's amazing, please update soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds very interesting...
plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi v nice... Please pm me when u write ur next part to this

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