Devakshi SS: Where life is leading us (Updated Part 16)

.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Omg!!!

The news of the baby came as a shock!!!

Anyways, it was an amazing part!!

Please cont soon

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Shaun

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Part 1

I just came across your story now and wow what a fantastic start

Dev still hurts when he thinks about Sonakshi while Neha seems to know her mother much better .

Dev hearing that Sona is marrying within 10 days is just devastated but now that both Riya and Nita tells him the truth about Ishwari it's even more devastating knowing his mother played him

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rimjhim_rims

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: mgram505
omg... very happy of dev and sona met again...but suddenly baby...anirban was even forced her for that...and omg...how can u do that...and ok..its a story...and dev will support her for sure... that's my only thought and waiting fr nxt so much...update ur both ff at same time...as we can catch up that also easily...update soon...and sry if said anything wrongly...
and please pm me...if possible..

No you haven't said anything wrong please don't be sorry. your active suggestions and comments give me inspiration to write more. As per the story lets see what happens in future.

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rimjhim_rims

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.
Omg!!!
The news of the baby came as a shock!!!
Anyways, it was an amazing part!!
Please cont soon

I will try to write as soon as possible.

thank you that you get it interesting.

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rimjhim_rims

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Thank you Jade0001 for your wonderful review.

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CrazyGirlRashi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Sonakshi is pregnant
OMG
You are giving shocks of my life in every part

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rimjhim_rims

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Guys what do you want next????

I want your suggestion.

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shilpa_akki

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Ummm...pregnant track...quite interesting but try to end it asap as I want to Devakshi only...
Previously in last parts there were no Devakshi scene or Convo...
So try to make this possible

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mgram505

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: rimjhim_rims
Guys what do you want next????
I want your suggestion.

all we want is devakshi happy for long time...that baby dont do a mistake and so killing it is wrong and devakshi will not do that...as before ishwari do mistakes and we can blame their children for these things...and let it be...and continue with a child of devakshi too...for which love of dev and sona equal for them...which can portray another side of them...and devakshi understanding increased to another level...which can reveal abt them more to the society...

i just thought of it...hope u understand wht i want to tell...and another

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