Devakshi SS: Where life is leading us (Updated Part 16) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rimjhim_rims

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Guys from the next part i have two alternative story line in my mind and cantdeterminedwhich one should I continue. i am really confused in these two tracks in my mind.</font>

I don't want to guess your storyline and if u have two good alternative storylines...try to write short of two and decide...if not yet then show one of them as imagination and other as to be happened or decide based on end conclusion and moral...this came in my thought and I said it...sry if this such a bad one...no offence...or don't think if I say too much...and one thing...ur ff is so good and I am one of the krpkab fans who thought of sona to marry someone and dev leave ishwari...and u showing in ur ff so nicely and well carried emotionally too...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rimjhim_rims

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Guys from the next part i have two alternative story line in my mind and cantdeterminedwhich one should I continue. i am really confused in these two tracks in my mind.</font>


Pls write both sorry if sounds mean and greedy but i loved your writing really if possible pls write in two way.I enjoyed your writing always
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bizdil


Pls write both sorry if sounds mean and greedy but i loved your writing really if possible pls write in two way.I enjoyed your writing always


Thank you so much that you liked my writing.
What do you mean by both way?? continue Part 5 with one and then after finishing it write the other approach from Part 5 only??????
Please clarify.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very well written
Very well written
I just love reading your updates
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awww...i hope everything will be fine...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Nice update...you all FF..have different & beautiful story...loved it...please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sad
Very sad update
Beautifully written
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update...put up d next part soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you a lot guys that you liked it.
I will try to update as soon as possible.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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omg... very happy of dev and sona met again...but suddenly baby...anirban was even forced her for that...and omg...how can u do that...and ok..its a story...and dev will support her for sure... that's my only thought and waiting fr nxt so much...update ur both ff at same time...as we can catch up that also easily...update soon...and sry if said anything wrongly...
and please pm me...if possible..
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