We Never Separated : DevAkshi TS *updated* @pg.4

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At 11p.m in the night the bell rang at Bose residence.

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There wasn't anyone at home, everyone had gone to Kolkata for attenting a marriage and I chose to stay here because of my work commitments or because I wanted to stay alone, away from the hush-hush in the wedding.

I got a little scared, who could it be at this hour. Then I recollected that it could be our neighbours to pick their keys. I got a breather and quickly went downstairs along with the keys and like always I opened the door without seeing who it was.

I know that you know who it was. Yes you are right. It was Mr. Obhodro.

Was I expecting him to be here? No.
Was I happy that he was here? Yes.
Did I show it to him? OFCOURSE NOT.

He was all drenched. It was raining heavily outside. We both just stared at each other for a minute, like we'd drown in each other's eyes.

"Mr. Dixit, what are you doing here?"
I asked him.

He didn't say anything.

"Mr. Dixit, I'm talking to you.. may I know what are you here for?"

"You"
He said.

I wouldn't be able to control myself if he keeps looking at me with his light brown, piercing eyes. Hence, I turned to leave.
As I turned he held my hand. Reminding me of the night he confessed his love to me.

I got my hand out of his grip. And facing him I yelled
"What is wrong with you..Mr. Dev Dixit can't you get it that I've moved on? Oh ya.. it must be hurting your ego right? That how did I move on so easily. Get this in your mind Mr. Dixit I've chose someone to spend my entire life with and I do not love you any longer"
I stressed on the last line.

I could see the tears in his eyes. I know he must be going through alot.

"Kam se kam khud se toh jhoot mat bolo." He was polite and adorable when he said that. And yeah fine, he said the truth.

I couldn't face him anymore and I went inside the house saying "I don't know what you are saying"

He was trying really hard to get back to me from the past 2 months. And I wasn't giving in to him. But I really wanted to.

He followed me, and holding my arm he turned me to face him.
"Please stop it now, Sonakshi. Please, I can't bear it any longer." He literally pleaded and I was feeling really bad.

"I know..I know mujhse bahot badi galti hui..par Sona please, give me another chance." He put his hand on my cheek. And his hand was burning with fire.

"Dev.. are you not okay?"

"Main theek hun.. tum.."

I didn't let him complete and put my hand on his forehead. He had fever.

"Mr. Dixit you have high fever"

"Kuch nai hua hai mujhe.. I'm fine..now listen.."

"No you listen..aap apne alawa kisi ki sunte kyo nai hai..aapko fever hai and aap aise baarish mein..aap apne aap ko superman samjhte hai? Chaliye mere sath."

Okay okay okay.. shall I continue??
Do tell me pls through your comments.
This separation track is taking a toll over me now..hence I came up with this.. if not on television..yaha DevAkshi ko saath soch lia.
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sowiee thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow

excited to read the next part !!!

2 months ??? very long time !

pls do continue
gmgi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You stopped right there and now you are asking if you should continue>? Grrr😡
Atleast you could have stopped after she took care of him n he slept.

Chalo chalo give us the rest of it... Plzzz
shilpa_akki thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yes plz continue it...
It was really looking interesting...
Our Devakshi are all alone without mata
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gmgi

You stopped right there and now you are asking if you should continue>? Grrr😡

Atleast you could have stopped after she took care of him n he slept.

Chalo chalo give us the rest of it... Plzzz


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gmgi

You stopped right there and now you are asking if you should continue>? Grrr😡

Atleast you could have stopped after she took care of him n he slept.

Chalo chalo give us the rest of it... Plzzz

Don't kill me for this 😉😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aree why ask ...pls continue ...all ready to read ...TV pe tho we dont get sensible stories ...atleast you guys are doing total justice to the characters...eagerly waiting ...write soon..and a looong one so that we have enough to read 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing! Eager to read more :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yes yes continue soon!! Waiting to read the next part. Lovely start😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yar why did you stop!!!
Btw great piece of writing continue soon plzz
The title is damn captivating!!

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