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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bookworm123



Very well written. I never could write verse so I truly appreciate those who can.. 😊

I made a post on the break up but in a different vein from the above lovely verse..Would love to hear your views..



Thank you. And this is Shaheer inspired. He brings out Dev even when I don't want to connect with him...

Where is your post??? Am searching 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: taara113

wow...this is soo good...

im already feeling so bad for Dev...poor soul ya...and then you make posts like these...all one is left to do is pity him...
The world might come and tell him he is right...but one voice he wants to hear, is all broken and lost...brilliantly pulled of by Shaheer...



Very true. Brilliantly emoted by Shaheer...
His portrayal of Dev yesterday was poignant & real... You could just keep reasons aside and feel for him...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sahiba_07

This is beautiful! 👏



Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARCH21

I did right, I know
But do you also think so?
I know this is right
Aren't there few things we just cannot fight?
Do you agree?
But would you even tell me?
Do I have the right to ask?
Wish you would take me to task
Some things I just need to do
Things bigger than me or you
It is my duty & worship, I know
Even if my soul, I let go
I will live but I can't breathe
I will stand but can't find land beneath
I did right, my shattered heart is wrong
My place is here, am not sure where I belong.

Would you just tell me I did right?
I know I did, it's in plain sight
Choosing me was beyond question
But if I could just make one confession
Am hanging by a thread
But I will hold on tight
At the edge of the chasm
If I could just catch your sight.

Amazing. Esp those lines in bold 🤗
Edited by LiveLife321 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: LiveLife321


Amazing. Esp those lines in bold🤗



Ok! We are on the same wavelength 😃
You caught the exact thought that prompted this post...
Just watching Dev be strong, walk around, break down (himself & the phone), I had just one thought - 'hanging by a thread'
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARCH21



Ok! We are on the same wavelength 😃 Good to know. 🤗
You caught the exact thought that prompted this post...
Just watching Dev be strong, walk around, break down (himself & the phone), I had just one thought - 'hanging by a thread' Literally her memories are going to be his life line now.

You know what ARCH..Y'day i had this Q in my mind that when every one is firing at this guy Left right center for break-up then why i am not even angry on this guy? Ans is Shaheer...This guy is making it really difficult. With one expression, he is pouring endless emotions. I also mentioned it in one of my reply on y'day post that I was happily clapping for Sona in that break-up scene till i saw that one expression on his face when Sona said GOOD BYE which literally pushed & compelled me to understand his state of mind. I ended up writing long story y'day. This show truly driving us crazy.😆
Edited by LiveLife321 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LiveLife321


<font color="#0000ff">You know what ARCH..Y'day i had this Q in my mind that when every one is firing at this guy Left right center for break-up then why i am not even angry on this guy? Ans is Shaheer...This is makes it really difficult. With one expression, he is pouring endless emotions. I also mentioned it in one of my reply on y'day post that I was happily clapping for Sona in that break-up scene till i saw that one expression on his face when Sona said GOOD BYE which literally pushed & compelled me to understand his state of mind. I ended up writing long story y'day. This show truly driving us crazy.😆</font>



EXACTLY! It's Shaheer & Erica who are pushing me to watch the overall craziness they are showing.
Shaheer is fantastic and I just can't be angry with Dev...
Break up scene - my thoughts were 'it's a hospital guys. Take your personal issues elsewhere. Be adults.'
Saw Shaheer's expression after Sona's Goodbye and his breakdown. I was like, 'Shit! How much can a person (Dev) take'

The makers have hit jackpot with the leads and they are lost in the Ishwari story they want to build..

Yesterday - I really felt for Dev. He is in this invisible prison where everyone does crazy things and he has surrendered to protect his honor (and so the brave face). No one can get him out but he himself...

I don't want to know if there are mothers like this and they are reflecting reality n all. I honestly don't care 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mena_k

Its amazing how these two have the ability to pull us with them ad make us feel there pain or happiness the same way they portray it onscreen. Oh God it hurts, it hurts bad seeing them cry like this. Dev putting a strong face in front of all but lost the only soul who was his companion to share.

Needless to say, its just the beginning of pain for Dev Dixit. He will plunge deeper and deeper into the pain of well he was forced to make for himself with no one to rescue him.

😭



I think it's Shaheer's brilliant acting. When we want to not feel for Dev, Shaheer brings out the pain so real that we are drawn in.
Even the sadness in his eyes when he was leaving for office in the morning and glanced at the family picture - so real!

His pain has only just begun and will someone tell that crazy Mother that this boy bore his share of pain from past 20 years. But she has wiped that out as she keeps Dev only 8yrs old in her mind's eye...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Malvika07

Amazingly written. I wish I could write a verse

You always seem to catch the deepest emotions of Dev and manage to expresss them beautifully! Kudos!



Thank you 😊

I guess many times I first think in verse then begin elaborating 😃

The emotions portrayed by Dev yesterday were just so real, I had to express some... Kudos Shaheer!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARCH21


EXACTLY! It's Shaheer & Erica who are pushing me to watch the overall craziness they are showing.
Shaheer is fantastic and I just can't be angry with Dev... True. Shaheer is marvelous and Erica is on point.👏


Break up scene - my thoughts were 'it's a hospital guys. Take your personal issues elsewhere. Be adults.' When i first saw this scene in segment this is what is my reaction too. I was thinking like behave yourself guys, its hospital not his cabin.

Saw Shaheer's expression after Sona's Goodbye and his breakdown. I was like, 'Shit! How much can a person (Dev) take' He(Shaheer) killed it seriously👏

The makers have hit jackpot with the leads and they are lost in the Ishwari story they want to build..WORD.

Yesterday - I really felt for Dev. He is in this invisible prison where everyone does crazy things and he has surrendered to protect his honor (and so the brave face). No one can get him out but he himself...In y'day ep office scene stood out for me. His hesitation before playing audio clip, his trade mark (Mr.Obodro) anger while breaking that phone, the way he ran to collect those pieces after realizing his act, his helpless words when he said how will i listen her voice now?, his shaking hands while handing over that phone to Tina and his breaking voice when he asked I want phonebook from that phone. OMG. Its just start only. This guy will surely turn mad within a week if he pile up his emotions like this inside. He need a outlet.

I don't want to know if there are mothers like this and they are reflecting reality n all. I honestly don't care 😃 Good for our own sanity😆


Sorry for the typos in my previous reply, my son was playing with keyboard when i was typing.
Edited by LiveLife321 - 9 years ago

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