Dev

I did right, I know
But do you also think so?
I know this is right
Aren't there few things we just cannot fight?
Do you agree?
But would you even tell me?
Do I have the right to ask?
Wish you would take me to task
Some things I just need to do
Things bigger than me or you
It is my duty & worship, I know
Even if my soul, I let go
I will live but I can't breathe
I will stand but can't find land beneath
I did right, my shattered heart is wrong
My place is here, am not sure where I belong.

Would you just tell me I did right?
I know I did, it's in plain sight
Choosing me was beyond question
But if I could just make one confession
Am hanging by a thread
But I will hold on tight
At the edge of the chasm
If I could just catch your sight.

Very nice.
Perfectly goes with the dev's situation.

Originally posted by: kashishbano

Very nice.
Perfectly goes with the dev's situation.

It's his decision but he is badly hurting...
Beautifully expressed by Shaheer...

Originally posted by: ARCH21

I did right, I know
But do you also think so?
I know this is right
Aren't there few things we just cannot fight?
Do you agree?
But would you even tell me?
Do I have the right to ask?
Wish you would take me to task
Some things I just need to do
Things bigger than me or you
It is my duty & worship, I know
Even if my soul, I let go
I will live but I can't breathe
I will stand but can't find land beneath
I did right, my shattered heart is wrong
My place is here, am not sure where I belong.

Would you just tell me I did right?
I know I did, it's in plain sight
Choosing me was beyond question
But if I could just make one confession
Am hanging by a thread
But I will hold on tight
At the edge of the chasm
If I could just catch your sight.

Very well written. I never could write verse so I truly appreciate those who can.. 😊

I made a post on the break up but in a different vein from the above lovely verse..Would love to hear your views..

@arch21 beautiful

wow...this is soo good...

Its amazing how these two have the ability to pull us with them ad make us feel there pain or happiness the same way they portray it onscreen. Oh God it hurts, it hurts bad seeing them cry like this. Dev putting a strong face in front of all but lost the only soul who was his companion to share.

Needless to say, its just the beginning of pain for Dev Dixit. He will plunge deeper and deeper into the pain of well he was forced to make for himself with no one to rescue him.

😭

Amazingly written. I wish I could write a verse

Originally posted by: bookworm123

Very well written. I never could write verse so I truly appreciate those who can.. 😊

I made a post on the break up but in a different vein from the above lovely verse..Would love to hear your views..

Originally posted by: randommusings

Beautifully expressed

Thank you 😊