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richa

@rcha_bhrt

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: sa1234B
Very beautifully written their emotions...
loved it...haan haapy ending toh hone chahiye

Thanku so much😊

Ok then happy ending hi hogi.

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richa

@rcha_bhrt

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: mantuamu
Oh god I was crying reading it I could feel how hard for u while u were writing happy ending wala DevAkshi chahiye if ur ok with that
All the best for ur exams prepare well

I actually cried buckets while writing it.😭 it was very hard indeed.

But now all the comments from you guys making me smile. thanku for commenting.

I will add an happy epilogue.

Awww thanku so much for your wishes.

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richa

@rcha_bhrt

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: aaliah3108

😭

U made me cry dear... it was so touching !! ... I am done with this man !! I cant read about their breakup ...what will I see ! 🤢

awww sorry but I cried too.😭😭 you are right even I don't know how I am gonna survive during their separation.

thanku for your comment ruchi😊

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Apne hame rulla diya 😭

But nicely written...hats off to you , not many can write tragedy to such perfection.

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adi35

@adi35

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Damn
u made me cry
Brilliant writing

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richa

@rcha_bhrt

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Apne hame rulla diya 😭

But nicely written...hats off to you , not many can write tragedy to such perfection.

Awww sorry dear it was not my intention 😭 I too cried with you.

Thanku so much 😊 for your words.

Really it means a lot.

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dhk26

@dhk26

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Mat likho yaar aaisa...nahi ho pata hai handle!!!!

Pata ha 4 baar runs pada complete karne k liye...

Ab ki update me plz patch up karvalena... Plz...

Must say u picked the words straight from heart!!!

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richa

@rcha_bhrt

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: adi35
Damn
u made me cry
Brilliant writing

awww sorry and i cried too.😭

Thanku😊

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richa

@rcha_bhrt

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: dhk26
Mat likho yaar aaisa...nahi ho pata hai handle!!!!
Pata ha 4 baar runs pada complete karne k liye...

Ab ki update me plz patch up karvalena... Plz...
Must say u picked the words straight from heart!!!

Awww sorry dear mera koi irada nahi tha rulane ka.

Thanku so much😊

I will update soon