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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys back with another story
It is basically about their separation with flashbacks of jealous dev

So here it is

Two years before this day After ishwari's fiasco dev and sona were separated. Everything changed in that one day. Now dev was not with sona physically,he has not talked to her, not even seen her in last two years. In ishwari mention everyone returned to their normal routine like nothing happened. Like dev's happiness,his choice were never their concern. They were happy with the luxury dev was providing them and because dev never told anything to anyone so everyone beleived that nothing happened. Even ishwari had a feeling that something has changed in dev but her pride, her ego overpowered everything. Now dev spends more time with ishwari, always takes care of her so ishwari is happy and shows this off to GKB very often.but now between dev and her one thing has changed from dev's side that he doesn't talk to her other that formal one.he informs her everything related to house and office but he doesn't talk about him. He always keeps himself busy in work even in ishwari's room he always remains on laptop to avoid any conversation.

Riya's alliance has fixed with the guy she loves.how lucky they are this was the first thing came on dev's mind. Tears formed in corner of his eyes, everyone asked the reason and before he could say anything ishwari said with pride mera dev to hai hi aisa apni behno se bahut Pyar karta hai isliye jajbati ho gaya.are beta riya aaj hi thode Na ja rahi hai aur wo jisse Pyar karti hai uske sath uski shadi ho rahi hai wo khush rahegi.

Dev wanted to ask kyun maa? But he can't loose her so kept mum like always.

Vicky came with a box of sweets. Are maa bua kaha ho? badhai ho badhai lo mithai khao. He was saying in loud voice. Ishwari and RR came are kya hua? Kis bat ki badhai?
Are hamari sabse Bari problem aaj khatam ho gayi maa.
Kaun si problem?
Are wo bangalan... Are wo sonakshi.. Wo sagai kar rahi hai agle hafte to Hui Na khushi ki bat.

Name sonakshi brought thousands of memories at a instant for dev who was listening them standing on stairs.

Are kya bat kar raha hai? Sachhi? tujhe kaise pata beta? RR asked
Are wo aaj Maine chhoti bangalan hai Na uski Behan Elena use bat karte suna apni dost se.

Haye jiji dekho to kaise shadi kar rahi hai. Mil gaya hoga koi dusra paise wala inka to kaam hi yahi hai.acha hua Bala tali. Waise kisse shadi kar rahi hai wo bangalan?

ab jyada to pata nahi maa par wo Elena keh rahi thi ki 2 saal se sab use mana rahe the aur finally Jake usne ha keh di. Koi maan Nam ka ladka hai. Tum wo chhoro mithai khao.bua tum bhi khao.


Maan!!!! It means anshu!!! Anshumaan mukharjee !!! To aakhir tumne use apna bana hi liya.tum jeet gaye. wo tumhari so..nu ban hi gayi. Par wo to meri... thi... Kaise??.. Wo kaise maan gayi kisi aur ke liye? Kya do saal kafi the mujhe bhulane ke liye? He was broken all over again. Before heading to his room to his crying shoulder his pillow he looked at his family once and saw they were having sweets, they were celebrating his biggest failure.he smiled faintly at his fate.

So how was it?? Tell me through your comments
Should I continue? It has 2 more parts.

Plz comment guys. Your comments encourages me to write more and post here.so if you want to read me more please comment.
For PM please buddy me.
Love
Richa

Index

Part 1- page 1
Part-2- page 6
Part-3- page 11
Epilogue- page 18

If anyone wants to read my another stories here is the link.

Dev with Bose family
Helpless dev jealous sona

Morning romance
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it.👏 If the next part is ready can you plz update ASAP. Waiting...
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Please continue soon..
Eagerly waiting dear..
Awesome start..
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Originally posted by: gmgi

Loved it.👏 If the next part is ready can you plz update ASAP. Waiting...


Thanku so much.😊
Sorry next part is not ready yet because I was not in a right frame of mind to write any happy scenes because of separation news.
But I will try to post soon as I am working on it.
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Originally posted by: independent

Please continue soon..

Eagerly waiting dear..
Awesome start..


Thanku aru😊
I will update soon.
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Update plz! It was so good :(


Thanku so much😊
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Originally posted by: hermosoanu123

Awesome one continue soon


Thanku😊
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Awesome story and a good start...
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