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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Ok I feel like crying now because I know they are not gonna show this on the show😭😭

How good are you ?!! Woww. I loved every single thing about it. The Dev Dixit in your story is the ideal man- the man of my dreams. So SO amazing. The Bose family's reactions, Dev's internal struggle, his realization, Sonakshi's confusion.. everything was so beautifully potrayed.

Absolutely loved it!!

Waiting eagerly for the next part👏👏

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: dbrk
Beautiful, exactly the way we can imagine Dev to handle Sonakshi and her family. I was very disturbed after watching today's SBS segment. How can girl's parent just go to meet boy's family, the the groom himself has not even come to meet them. What they want to show Bose family way too simple or dumb. Ur OS really refreshed me.

Thanks yaar. I really needed to post this part before today's episode. I was worried what would be shown today, then I wouldn't be able to take it forward.

But I do hope Dev does make an attempt to meet her parents. Dev said right mujhe kahin jaana hai.. I want him to head out to Sona's house the first thing in the morning.

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Malvika07
Ok I feel like crying now because I know they are not gonna show this on the show😭😭
How good are you ?!! Woww. I loved every single thing about it. The Dev Dixit in your story is the ideal man- the man of my dreams. So SO amazing. The Bose family's reactions, Dev's internal struggle, his realization, Sonakshi's confusion.. everything was so beautifully potrayed.
Absolutely loved it!!
Waiting eagerly for the next part👏👏

Oh wow.. Such kind words... Thank you.

Did you miss Ishwari?? I tried to ensure the focus stayed on her insecurities too,

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gmgi

@gmgi

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Loved it👏

Dev's visit, Bijoy's easy going manner which prompted him to visit again to reveal his intentions regarding Sona, Ishwari's fight to come out of her insecurities, Sona's immediate conclusion that Dev is going to propose as soon as he said he want to talk : so natural and brilliantly paced. The characters remained in their own element through out. Even RR taunts were not that irritating because of Dev's reaction. Continue soon please.😳

Thank you for the PM

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Oh wow.. Such kind words... Thank you.

Did you miss Ishwari?? I tried to ensure the focus stayed on her insecurities too,

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No no I didnt miss her, Her emotions were also so nicely shown by you, not OTT like in the show😲

I have just gotten so used to ignoring Ishwari now, that I forgot to mention her in my comment😆

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: fanktlk

FINE!! This is the last part.. No more OS for you...

Like the rest of the readers are going to let you off the hook if you ditch the next part. 🤣 Cliffhanger mein choda hain... sab log latak rahe hain. They will come after you with dandas..

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Like the rest of the readers are going to let you off the hook if you ditch the next part. 🤣 Cliffhanger mein choda hain... sab log latak rahe hain. They will come after you with dandas..

I will PM them.....

And if i don't get the review.. I will run behind you with a danda... and you can't even run now..

Edited by fanktlk - 9 years ago

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

WOWWW!! Too good. please continue...

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: gmgi
Loved it👏
Dev's visit, Bijoy's easy going manner which prompted him to visit again to reveal his intentions regarding Sona, Ishwari's fight to come out of her insecurities, Sona's immediate conclusion that Dev is going to propose as soon as he said he want to talk : so natural and brilliantly paced. The characters remained in their own element through out. Even RR taunts were not that irritating because of Dev's reaction. Continue soon please.😳

Thank you for the PM

RR's taunts.. oh it so difficult to think of taunts.. I don't know what to write.. Must say the CVs are good that way...

Thank you so much.. I wanted Dev to react but we know he wouldn't say anything. Once look from him is enough to snap Radha Rani... Only he has to notice what RR is saying. I tried to highlight this in the previous part when Sona says she says such things hundred times a day..

That was actually to impress upon Dev that Sona is constantly taunted behind his back in his home.

Thank you for reading so promptly 😃

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Malvika07

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No no I didnt miss her, Her emotions were also so nicely shown by you, not OTT like in the show😲
I have just gotten so used to ignoring Ishwari now, that I forgot to mention her in my comment😆

... Oh well she was such a sweetheart..

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