DevAkshi FF : Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai | Part 3 (07.9.16)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello Guys!! Back with a story 😃 All the things are same like they are in the drama but Natasha didn't come in Dev's life , she will be coming in the upcoming parts o my fiction when DevAkshi will face there break up because of Ishwari. Its a completely different story. I don't think that there is any need of character sketch , but if u guys want it so I'm ready to update😊But your comments needed guys for the continuation of my story. Hope you all will like it 😊I will upload the First (1) Chapter tomorrowšŸ˜‰ Do comments guys😃

With love
Sunshine





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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Sunshine

Waiting for ur FF
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 1
"Sonaaa" Eleena screamed my name loudly and I snuggle deeper into the blanket

"Maa sony do na" I said

"Aj kaam py nahi jana?? jo sony do" she shouted again

and I wake up with a jerk and quickly went inside the washroom then I quickly take a bath and dressed myself

"Sonaa breaast tw karti jaa" Said mom

" Nahi , I'm already late" I said

And left for my job to meet my Dev 😳 and I reached there and went inside

"Agi Bangalan?? Yaha kaam karti hai na? paisy dayta hai tujhe hmara Dev itny sary aur aj tu dair sy aye ? " said Mami

"Wo wo aunty jee , mery auto kharab hogaya tha tabi" I said

"Tu aur tery bahany" said mami

"Mujhe kitchen main buhat kaam hai" and I escaped from her investigation šŸ˜†

"Yeh sab kuch apki wajh hua hai Mr.Dixit , dair raat tak mujh sy call py baat ki tahi" I said to myself

"Theek hai agar apko problem hai tw nahi karo ga ab yeh zid" saod Dev

"Aaapp" I said

"Haan main Miss.Bose" said Dev

"Its Sonakshi for u" I said 😊

Dev smiled

"Aur main na asa kab kaha mujhe aki zid sy problem hai? tumhi ekdam impossible" I said

''I know this one" He laughed šŸ˜†

"Mujhe ap sy baat hi nahi karni" I said
With that u hold my hand and hugged me tightly and I hugged u back.

"I love you miss khargosh" Said Dev

"I love u too" replied Sona

Precap : Ishwari angry on Sonakshi



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys , if I will get response like this I will not continue. 😭 I have a good story , but I don't think that u guys are interested and if u all are then do like and comment.

With love ,
Sunshine
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yes yes m interested...please do continue.. .Be calm..
U will definitely get loads of comment...nd plz pm me.. .
I am waiting.. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start dear... Nd off course I am very very interested
I would love to read u dear...
Plz continue ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys please do likes and comments otherwise I will not continue...

Ishwari saw Dev and Sona hugging and she was so shocked..

"Devvv"shouts Ishwari

They both quickly leave each other and Sonakshi was hell nervous and Dev so guilty.

"Maa woh" said Dev but Ishwari didn't let him speak.

"kab sy chal raha hai yeh sab Dev? aur tu na mujhe q nhai bataya?" said Ishwari

"Aunty jee .. " said Sona

"Tum sy baat ki hai?? nahi na , chup raho. Main apny bety sy baat kar rahi ho" said Ishwari firmly

"Maa woh main aur Sonakshi ek dosry sy buhat pyaar karty hain aur hum apko batany hi waly thy" said Dev

"Aur tu na mujhe batana zarorri nahi samjha?" said ishwari

"Aur tum nutrition, tum na mery seedhy sadhy masoom bety ko any jal main phasa liya?"

"Nahi Nahi , asa kuch nahi aunty jee" said Sona quickly , she was so confused and was hurt by Ishwari's word

"nahi , maa is main Sona ki koi galti nahi" said Dev

"tu chup rah. Ab tu mujhe seekhye ga k kis ki galti hai aur kis ki nahi?" Said Ishwari

"Aur tum, tum tw shareef ghar ki larki ho na aur yeh sab karti phirti ho?? tum na mery bety ko us k paison k liye phansa liya.. Tum jesi larkiyon ko aur ata bhi kiya hai .. Dev mera beta hai mera guroor hai aur woh wohi karye ga jo main ussy karny ko kaho gi" said Ishwari firmly

"Maa yeh tu kiya bolye ja rahi hai"said Dev

"Tujhe kaha na main na chup kar" Said Dev

"Aur tum main tumhy kabhi mery bety ki zindagi main nahi any do gi , mera beta meri arzi sy hi shadi karye gy aur meri marzi tum nahi Sonakshi. Aur apna saman uthao aur nikalo yaha sy . Ab humy tumhari bilkul zaroort nahi" Said Ishwari

Sonakshi was so damn hurt by Ishwari's words and Dev could feel it and without saying anything she left all heart broken ... Ishwari's words were ringing in her mind continuously .. She didn't even blink her eyes for once but tears were rolling down from her pink cheeks.. She thought that Dev was only his but a dagger pierced her heart. She move out of Dev's house and Dev was in shock.. ishwari goes to Dev

"Deekh beta woh tery liye sahi larki nahi hai , woh tujh sy nahi tery paisy sy pyaar karti hai" said Ishwari

Dev was so shocked by his mother's word that he didn't respond.

"Ab tu deekh lay tu kisy chuny ga mujhe ya us nutrition ko" Said Ishwari

"maa tujhe hi" said dev

"Mujhe pata hai" sad Ishwari

"Lakin us k bina bhi main zinda nahi rah pao gi" said dev and he walked out of his house

"Tu na mujh sy mery Dev ko alag kiya na ab main tujhe us sy alag kar do gi Sonakshi"said Ishwari to herself


Precap : Natasha entry


Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Do cont. But please DevAkhsi ko jyada separate mat karna...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 3

Sona was in auto going to her home and she was crying terribly. She was extremly hurt by Isahwari's words and even Dev didn't did anything.. Dev was following Sona's auto and they both reach Sona's place

"Sona" said Dev

"Dev maa na asa q kaha?" aur ap na bhi kuch nahi kaha hamry rishty k liye q kia apna asa?" asked Sona sadly

"Sona , hum na maa sy chupaya unhy bura laga thora time do mujhe main un sy baat kro ga sab sahi hojaye ga. Trust me" said Dev

"Hum na nahi ap na chupaya un sy Dev" said Sona

"Hmm I knw" said Dev

Dev hug Sona tightly and she hug her back

"Pls dun worry main sab sahi kar do ga" said Dev

"I trust you Dev" said Sona

"Ap tum ghar jao aur jo maa na kaha bhool jao ussy woh gussy main hai bs tabi kaha unho na asa" said Dev

"Hmm okay , ap apna khayal rakhye ga" Said Sona

And Sona went inside her house and Dev was worried because hs mother is everything for her. He was thinking about his mother the whole time until he reaches back. He straight away went to his mother's room.

"Maa" said Dev

"Deekh Dev mujhe pata hai tu kiya baat karny aya hai" Said Ishwari

"maaa main aur Sona ek dosry sy buhat pyaar karty hai maa" said ishwari

"Ab us 2 din ki larki ka pyaar mery pyaar sy zyada zaroori hogaya hai Dev??" said Ishwari firmly

"Nahi nahi maa , asi baat nahi. Tu jo bolye gi wohi karo ga" said Dev

"Meri dost ki beti hai Natasha , kal woh aye gi main chahti ho tu us sy shadi karye" said Ishwari

Dev was so shocked and hurt by his mother's word even without blinking his eyes tear rolled down from his cheeks and he quickly swipe away with his hands

"theek hai maa" said Dev

And he went to his room... He was getting calls from Sona but he didn't receive it and switch off his phone.. They both kept crying the whole night

The next day, Natasha family was about to arrive and Dev called Sona

"Dev?? Ap sahi tw hai na?? kal ap na call nahi utati aur upper sy phone band kar diya" said Sona

"Sona I'm sorry kal main na call nahi uthati, main is position main nahi tha k baat karo" said Dev sadly

"It's okay. Ap na maa sy baat ki??" Asked Sona

"Abhi woh baat nahi kar rahi jaldi kro ga" said Dev .. He was feeling guilty for hiding the truth

"Theek hai" said Sona

"Apna khayal rakhna bye" said Dev

"Bye" said Sona

And Ishwari call Dev downstairs to meet Natasha and he went down..

"Hi I'm Natasha" said Natasha forwarding her hand for a handshake

"Dev" He intentionally refused the handshake making Nat uncomfortable

And they both talk to each other for a while and Dev was giving answers to her questions.. and then her family went.. Few days passed like this and Sona was also increasing pressure on Dev to ask his mother... He didn't even tell her about Natasha because he don't want to lose Sona.. Natasha complained about the disturbing behaviour of Dev and she called him

"Dev tu aur natasha bahar q nahi jaty?? Abhi chalye jao acha hai ek sath time spend karny ka moqa mile ga" said Ishwari

"Nahi maa buhat kaam hai" said Dev

"Aj koi bahana nahi jao" said Ishwari

And then Dev was left with no option and he took Natasha to Sonakshi's favourite restaurant and he was sitting there with her and Sona was there too.. Sona saw Dev with anther girl and tears rolled down her cheeks.. He called Dev continuous time and then he receives her call ..

"Kaha hai ap??" asked Sona

"Main ... Main... Main meeting main issi liye call nahi utha raha tha" said Dev

"Achaaa?? tw phir yaha apka jurwa bhai batha hua hai kisi larki k sath.." said Sona

and then Dev looked at Sona who was crying and Sona then disconnected the call and run out of the restaurant and Dev also run behind her..


PRECAP : DevAkshi heated argument

Note : Do comments otherwise I will not continue 😭😭

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice updatešŸ‘interesting story
plz do continue ...i would love to read & do pm

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