DevAkshi One Shot: Requestaan Paiyyan Ve

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Requestaan Paiyyan Ve

Dev released a deep irritated sigh. Pushing back from his white chair, Dev marched his way to the main floor where the muffled music that was disturbing him from behind wooden doors, began to maximize its volume and hurt his ear drums.

He looked over at the railing and saw his three sisters gathered around in the living room with all the sofas pushed aside. While they stood in a straight line, he saw Sonakshi standing in front of them facing them. Dev scrunched his eyebrows, confused as to what the girls were up to.

Kalaiyaan... Kalaiyaan...

Dev leaned against the railing and watched them.
Tu leya de meinu golden jhumke

He smirked, amused at seeing Sonakshi dance and his sisters follow her movements.

Main kanna vich paavan chum chum ke

Dev chuckled as he looked on. Sonakshi's earrings, or rather jhumke, swayed heavily as she moved around. His mind drifted to his failure of gifting Sonakshi a pair of earrings. If only Rhea hadn't intervened, Dev thought. Then today Sonakshi would have been dancing and expressing love for an earring that he had actually brought for her, not wishing for one.
Mann jaa ve... mainu shopping kara de
Mann jaa ve... romantic picture dikha de
Requestaan paayiaan ve..

Dev stood up from the railing with his scrunched brows once more. A faint smile began to curl up on his lips as he saw the blush that would feature on her face. That knowing smile of a past memory, the dreamy look of a hopeful future; he noticed it all.

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri white kalaiyaan ve (ho..)

Dev began walking down the stairs keeping his eyes glued onto Sonakshi. The way she moved so gracefully, perfecting all her moves, going not too fast nor too slow for his sisters to catch up... it was all too mesmerizing for him.

With his hands in his pockets, Dev deliberately took a seat on the abandoned sofa so that he could have a better look at her. Getting a brilliant idea, he took out his phone and began recording her.

Oh mainu chadhiya hai rang rang
Main khwabaan de sang sang aaj ud'di phiran
Main saari raat ud'di phiran

He chuckled at the way she squeezed her eyes and spun around with her arms wide open. The urge to run up to her and give her a tight hug was incredibly strong.

Oh badle jindadi de rang dhang
Meri neendein bhi tang tang, aaj ud'di phiran
Main saari raat ud'di phiran
Mann jaa ve... gulabi chunni diva de
Mann jaa ve... colourful chudi pavaa de
Requestaan paayiaan ve..

Dev lowered the phone a little as he saw Sonakshi drape a red dupatta over her head. Once again a deep urge to be the one to drape the deep red cloth over her head arose. His heart skipped and his spirit flew when he imagined himself as being the reason as to why Sonakshi decks and adorns herself so beautifully. He had never imagined that he would ever get so intimate with a person to the point they would want to do specific things to please him. Of course, he has had people send him gifts or try to please him to gain contracts or build business affiliations. But all that is just business. It was all conducted for selfish personal gains. Sonakshi, on the other hand, has never done anything for him in return for a favor. She has never showered him with love to get love from him back. She simply loved without any conditions laid out.

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri white kalaiyaan ve (ho..)

Of course, Sonakshi has aspirations and some wishes of her own. Being in a relationship, she expects Dev to do some things for her to express his love. But that's not the stipulation for her love. She didn't love him or ask for his love so that she could gain monetary or materialistic pleasures. Sonakshi asked and wished for Dev's love in the hope of simply being loved. That was her sole motive - love.

"Mr. Dixit," Sonakshi snapped her fingers in front of Dev's face to bring him out of his thoughts. "Are you okay?"

"Huh?" Dev said, eyes still dazed away. "Haan." He answered, his eyes focusing back to reality, his hands saving the video and tucking it back into his pocket.

Sonakshi gave him a small smile and asked him, "How was it?" At his questioning raised eyebrows, she clarified, "The dance. Your sisters were good weren't they?"

Looking back, Dev saw that his sisters were huddled around at the back anticipating his answer.

"Haan.." Dev said slowly. "They were good but.. I think they need more practice." Standing up to make his way back to his room, he added, "You should give them some more lessons. Maybe an hour every day?" He suggested taking one step closer to her. Leaning in, he whispered, "And a private one for me?"

He left with a grand smug plastered on his face while Sonakshi was left behind burning with embarrassment.

Dev ruffled Nikki's hair to tease her some more. While he went up the stairs, he winked at Sonakshi who tensed up and looked around at a loss of which way she should go.

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riddhima11 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res!!!
First of all I fell in love with this song😳
Could have never imagined something like this own these two.. But it was Perfect..
I like the way how you address some adaayein of both of them : Dev with slight confusion and awe in his eyes and that faint smile... Haaye!!!😳😳... And in the end, how Sonakshi feeling all embarrassed cannot decide which way to go..
Very small things, but I guess these things make me imagine the scenario as if its happening right in front of me..
You really do have amazing ideas.. I am in awe of them - Devakshi and your ideas😆

Please keep writing.. 👏 I am greedy now...
I missed today's episode, was feeling a bit low.. but this OS made me smile😃.. Thanks..

Love
Pankhuri


Edited by riddhima11 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow that was so refreshingly awesome
Khusharni thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww😳😳 so bloody adorable!!! Pllleeeaaassseee make more OSs like this one😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This OS is devakshi.Thats just how perfectly it describes them
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gurl this is awesome...

loved this...:-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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woww such a cute n adorable os😳
keep writing moree🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: riddhima11

Res!!!

First of all I fell in love with this song😳
Could have never imagined something like this own these two.. But it was Perfect..
I like the way how you address some adaayein of both of them : Dev with slight confusion and awe in his eyes and that faint smile... Haaye!!!😳😳... And in the end, how Sonakshi feeling all embarrassed cannot decide which way to go..
Very small things, but I guess these things make me imagine the scenario as if its happening right in front of me..
You really do have amazing ideas.. I am in awe of them - Devakshi and your ideas😆

Please keep writing.. 👏 I am greedy now...
I missed today's episode, was feeling a bit low.. but this OS made me smile😃.. Thanks..

Love
Pankhuri


Haha, this song is like my all time fav. <3 Just had to write something on it. 😆

I love the ending with a confused Sona. She is so adorable and it's so like her to do something like that. 😳

Haha, thank you. 🤗

I haven't watched the past two episodes. So trust me, I know exactly how you're feeling.

Gonna catch up tomorrow. 😎
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jade0001

Wow that was so refreshingly awesome


Thank you. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khusharni

Awww😳😳 so bloody adorable!!! Pllleeeaaassseee make more OSs like this one😛


Haha, thank you! 🤗

I'll try but incorporating a song is actually quite difficult. 🤔 I'll see what I can do though. 😳

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