SS: Forgiveness part 3 updated: page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys! I'm a new member on this forum and just wanted to share a story I'm thinking of writing. This short story is for after the misunderstanding with Ishwari and my take on the story from there. Let me know if you like it 😃


Forgiveness


Sonakshi was laying in her bed looking at the picture she and Dev took the time he had dropped her home after the gift incident with Riya. She can remember every detail of that day. Dev stammering when Mami came to the kitchen, his helplessness when Riya took the gift he had bought her and also his naughtiness, which he only let loose with her. She laid there remembering how great things were at the beginning, how Dev, or should she call him Mr dixit now. Did she still have the right to call him Dev after everything that had happened?


She blamed herself as much as she blamed him. She should have seen it coming, his staying home all day, canceling meetings and postponing everything to be with him. But she was blinded by the love he showered on her, God knows her bruised heart needed it. It took her weeks to realize that he really loved her and that it wasn't just a dream. She had found her prince and her love story had started and it consumed every bit of her.


Dev, or was it Mr dixit, was the rainbow in her life. The life that was sunny but also gloomy at the same time. Even though she had the most loving family in the world she alway sensed something missing, a puzzle piece nowhere to be found, that is until he walked in. Even though she hated him and his ways in the beginning, she later understood the intensity of his love, willing to climb mountains and cross oceans for his love. "I want you for myself" he echoed in her mind, nothing but a way too lively memory now. His husky voice, the heat from his breath melting her heart as it grazed her face. Her heart skipping a beat as his chest leaned in only to stop a few inches away. Him smirking as to show that he was aware of the storm he was evoking inside of her, a sensation so new to her, but so addicting. All she wanted to do was get lost in his embrace and drown in his smell that seemed to be more important that the very air she breathed... and then kichu bhaia calling, pulling her out of her heaven.


But that was all in the past now. All she could do now is dream of those moments and spend her days hoping that things would work out one day. That she might once again be able to hug her love and feel his warm embrace. Like she did the time she had told him her deepest and darkest secrets and wants.


He was standing there in the middle of his room inspecting something that was bothering him. His back turned towards her, his every muscle visible through his white t-shirt, his arms on his waist as if he was ready for combat. She swallowed her saliva, scared of what she was getting herself into, remembering his complaint earlier that day on how she never told him how she really felt. She was ready to do this she said to herself, not sure how true it was...




Hi again! thanks for reading my story. Let me know if you're interested in reading more, i'm thinking of righting a few more parts for this story.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey, just joined IF.
Please do continue with the SS.
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Grt start .
..beautifully conceptualised.hope u will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls continue... this is a cliffhanger stituation
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Nice start..
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2


He was standing there in the middle of his room inspecting something that was bothering him. His back turned towards her, his every muscle visible through his white t-shirt, his arms on his waist as if he was ready for combat. She swallowed her saliva, scared of what she was getting herself into, remembering his complaint earlier that day on how she never told him how she really felt. She was ready to do this she said to herself, not sure how true it was.


"Sonakshi, you can do this!" She said to herself and started slowly walking towards him. Even his hair laid perfectly, each strand complying to his order. Has he always been this tall she asked herself mesmerized by the man in front of her. Every inch of him was perfect, like a perfect symphony, he looked like a greek god even while wearing sweatpants.


"Stop it!" she yelled at herself, unaware that she had said it out loud. Causing him to turn around, her face now dangerausly close to his neck.


"Sona, tum?" he said confused.


"A..ap ha..hatiye na" she uttered forcefully her mind unable to think, his smell seducing her senses.


"Kyun?" he asked, smirking. His arm now gripping her waist.


"Kyun ki...kyun ki..mein.." Sona looked down unable to face the passion in his eyes.


"Haan..ap kya?" He teased her knowingly.


"Mujhe aapse kuch kehna tha." she said still looking down.


"Tell me" He said lifting her chin with his fingers, forcing her to look at him once again.


"Woh, Mr dixit.."


"Dev"


"Haan, Dev... Mujhe aapse kehnatha ki.." She said, unable to gather her thoughts.


"Haan, boliye na"


"Mujhe bolna tha ki.. Ki mujhe bhoog lagi hain" She said smiling nervousely.


Dev let her go disappointed of her inablility to express her feelings for him and turned his back to her. Leaving Sonakshi feeling defeated and sad.


"Mr dixit.." she said carefully.


"Are you upset?" She tried again, her voice threatening to crack.


"Please Dev, I'm sorry" She said hugging him from behind, burrying her face in his shoulders.


"I'm really sorry. Woh kya hain na, mein apni feelings share karne nehi sakti. I feel shy and you, and your eyes captivate me uperse tumhari yeh smile. I'm not good with words Dev." She blurted out still hugging him, tears flowing down her face.


Dev put his hands on her arms and trying to turn around. Noticing his shirt getting wet, her tears piercing his heart.


"Please Mr Dixit, let me finish." She said taking a deep breath. " I love you, I love you more than words can explain. I love you like Rose loved Jack, like the sea loves the shore and i need you more than i need the air i breath. You are my first and last love. The only one that managed to enter my world and made me want to make it as beautiful as i can, so that you'll stay there forever. You have no idea how heart broken i was when your engagement was announced. I felt like the very ground i stood on was crumbling. I..I love you to the moon and back Dev." She said smiling through her tears, unable to put words to the immense love she felt for him.


Dev turned around with tears in his eyes and wiped her tears away and kissed her gently on each eye before bringing her in for a tight hug. Their bodies melting into one and they stood there, in the feeling of the love that had taken over their lives, and time stood still in awe of their love.


Dev moved his arms to her waist giving her another kiss, this time on her forehead. Lingering there smelling the floral scent of her hair.


"Mujhe nehi bata tha ki tum itni filmi ho." he said pulling her closer, her feet barely touching the ground. Smiling at her lips, their lips almost touching.


"Jo bhi hoon, jaise bhi hoon, its all because of you" she said smiling into his eyes, before giving him a tight hug. Her face resting on his shoulder.


Dev let out a laugh, remembering the time he had said those words to her. Before hugging her tightly and lifting her off the floor.


*Thud!*

Sonakshi was brought back to reality by the sound of something falling on the balcony. She went over to see what had happened, her heart aching by the sadness that seemed to be her companion since her and Dev split. What she saw left her speechless.
Edited by kuchtohhai - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update.. 👍🏼
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing writing... I could visualize everything! Please update soon 😊
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Wonderful update!!
Cont soon
And plz pm me
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Love it! keep writing
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kya ma manengi ? ... a devakshi ff
my 1st ff by me .. do read it :-)

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