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Hey guys, this is one short funny OS from me...Hope you guys will like this.



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CRAZY



Dev said blocking her way,"Mai Jaunga Pehle"

"Nahi mai jaungi pehle..." Sona said trying to walk past him.

"Sona nahi mai jaunga..." Dev said again coming infront of her.

"Nahi Dev mai jaungi..." Sona replied stubbornly.

"Dekho Sona mujhe office ke liye late ho raha hai...Bachpana mat karo" Dev said trying to make her understand.

"BACHPANA?" She was astonished at his comment.

"Wo...nahi ...mera mat..." He stammered noticing her angry look.

"Huh...Bachpana mai nahi tum kar rahe ho. Mujhe bhi hospital ke liye late ho raha hai to pehle mai Jaungi" She replied this time angrily.

"Shona dekho samjhne ki koshish karo meri important meeting hai Jaan" This time he tried softly in loving tone..

"To?" She asked as a matter of what that it do not make any difference.

"To phir pehle mai jata hu phir tum chali jana" He said hoping her to agree.

"Nahi tum hamesha aisa karte ho, iss bar mai tumhare jhase me nahi aane wali" This time she was adamant.

"Dekho mai tumhe sham ko tumhe panipuri khilane le jaunga...Tumhari favourite jagah pe.." Dev tried bribing her.

"Nahi" She replied not giving up.

"Mai tumhe bahot sare chocolate la dunga...Tumhare favourite wale" he thought to use her weakness to make her gave in.

"Nahi" But she didn't budge.

""To phir tumhe kya chahiye?'' he asked finally giving up.

"Kuch bhi nahi...Tum pehle mujhe jane do bas" She put forward what she wanted.

"SONA" He said making his most innocent and cute face.

"DEV" She replied mirroring his expression.

"PLEASE SONA" He said helplessly.

"PLEASE DEV" Sona was on her full form today not ready to give in for anything.

After thinking for sometime he came with new idea this time trying to succeed in what he wanted.

He stared with his fingers cross at his side hoping to fool her,

"SHONA"

"Okay mai coin toss karta hu agar head aaya to mai jaungi aur tale aaya to tum mujhe jane dogi...Manjoor?"

"Hmm...thik hai..." Sona replied missing loophole in what he said.

"Phir mai coin toss kar raha hu." Dev said getting happy, finally his plan succeeded.

"Ruko" Sona said when his sentences sink in her mind.

"Ab kya hua?" He asked impatiently.

"Tum cheating kar rahe ho Dev" Sona said narrowing her eyes at him.

"Nahi Sona" Dev said keeping poker face.

"Ha coin mujhe do...agar heads aaya to tum jaoge aur tales aaya to mai"

Sona said taking coin from his palm.

"mai bhi to wahi keh raha tha" He murmured, feeling sad that his plan failed.

"Ha mujhe pata hai tum kya keh rahe the" She replied ignoring his puppy face.

"Hey durga maa...Ye to bed ke neeche chala gaya...Ab hume kaise pata chalega kon jeeta" Sona said when the coin she tossed rolled down under their bed.

"Sab tumhari galti hai..." Dev said getting angry.

"meri galti" She replied stepping closer to him.

"Ha tumhari galti...Na tum Alarm band karti na itna late hota..." He said stepping forward.

"Acha jee...Aur ab behas karke kisne time waste kiya?'' She said keeping her hands on her waist standing at few inches away from him.

"I have better option jab hame kam ek hi karna hai to saath me kyo na kare...Waqt bach jayega aur hum late bhi nahi honge..."

"KYA" her eyes widening at his offer.

"Ha...aur meri morning bhi good ho jayegi wifey"

He said smirking, sweeping her of her feet and carrying her to washroom ignoring her protests for completing what they were fighting for, their baths.





Thank you so much for reading and commenting on previous OS.



Hope you will give the same response on this as well.

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Khusharni thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😆😆 Hilarious!!! Could totally imagine them doing this!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i think i read this on SWASAN.
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Originally posted by: Prizi

i think i read this on SWASAN.


YEAH...THATS MY WORK...ON SWASAN
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hahaha 😃
Hilarious one...
Very nice... Keep it up nd write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is so cute... TFS.😊😆
And do keep writing.👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hilarious and Romantic😃👏😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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funny..enjoyed it 😆😆
please write more..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hahaha
Really fantastic and fabulous
Thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely ! Aww I'm already wanting them to get married just to watch those kind of scenes

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