Kya Ma Manengi ? ...... A Devakshi FF Episode 5

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Hey Guys ... Thank U For The Reviews But Guys Mujhe Zyada Review's Nahi Mil Rahe Please Review And Keep Reading Warna I'll Stop Writing ... Mujhe Confidence Nahi Mil Raha Plz I Request U To Review It ! So Here I Present U The 5th Episode ...

At Sonakshi's House ...

Sonakshi - How Am I Looking ?
Elena - U Are Looking So Pretty!
Saurabh - Ha Sona ! Tum Bohot Sundar Lag Rahi Ho!
She Was Dressed In A Pink Kurta With A Pink Coloured Slacks!
Sonakshi - *Blushes*

At The Ishwari Nivas ...
Dev - I'll Get Ready Today Perfectly! And I'll Also Gift Something To Her ...
Ishwari Ji - Kya Baat Hai Beta ... Apni Engagement Tutne Ke Baad Bhi Itna Khush Lag Raha Hai ...
Dev - Ma ... Tu Aisa Kyu Keh Rahi Hai .. Kya Koi Apni Engagement Tutne Ke Baad Saara Time Dukhi Rahega ... Ma ... Mujhe Lagta Hai .. Ki Jo Maine Kiya Thheek Kiya ... !! 3 Zindagiya Barbaad Hone Se Bach Gayi ...
Ishwari Ji - 3?
Dev - 3 Nahi 2! Mein Bhi Na! (In His Mind - Oh Shit! What Are U Doing Dev !)
Ishwari Ji - (In Her Mind While Smiling To Dev - I Don't Know ... But Why Am I Feeling That Dev Is Behaving Weirdly These Days)
Dev - Am I Looking Handsome Ma?
Ishwari Ji - Beta? Why Are U Asking These Type Of Questions? U Are To My Handsomest Beta In The World!
Dev - Tere Se Hi Toh Yeh Quality Mili Hai Tu Itni Sundar Hai Tabhi Toh Mein Itna Handsome Hu!
Ishwari Ji - Dhat! Haha ! Now Go To The Office U Are Getting Late !
Dev - Ma .. I'll Go To the Office Late Today ...
Ishwari Ji - But Why?
Dev - Because ... There Are No Meetings Today From 7:30 To 9:00 a.m. (In His Mind - Because I've Postponed All The Meetings 1 And A Half Hour Late Because I Want To Spend Some Time With Her ...:-))
Ishwari Ji - Achha ...
Dev - Achha Ma Is The Breakfast Ready ?
Then Suddenly Sonakshi Comes In The Room With The Breakfast Of Ishwari In Her Hand ...
Sonakshi - (In Her Mind - He's So Handsome ) Yeah Mr Dixit ... The Breakfast Is Ready ... Please Go And Have Ur Breakfast .. Everybody Is Waiting ...
Dev Is Mesmerized After Seeing Sonakshi Because She's Looking So Pretty ...
Sonakshi - Mr Dixit?
Dev - Huh?
Ishwari Ji - Dev Wo Tujhse Niche Jaake Naashta Karne Ko Keh Rahi Hai!
Dev - Achha Ma .. Now I'm Going Downstairs For My Breakfast ...
When He Was Going Out Of The Room He Smiled At Her And She Blushed ..
In The Dining Room ...
After Eating Breakfast ... Nikki And Neha Went To Their Bedroom's,Riya To The Office ... And Ishwari Ji Is Also In Her Bedroom ... Dev Is Working On His Laptop And Sonakshi Is In The Kitchen ...
Dev Shuts Down His Laptop And Goes To The Kitchen ...
Sonakshi - (In Her Mind - Dev Yaha Kyu Aa Rahe Hai ? Her Heart Starts Beating Faster And Faster )
Dev Comes Closer And Closer To Her Leaving No Place To Move For Her ... Her Heart Starts Beating Faster ...
Sonakshi - Dev .. Tumi Yeh Ki Karechhe ? (sorry agar yeh galat hai toh i don't know bengali)
Dev - Sonakshi I Want To Know Everything About Ur Past,About Ur Likes And Dislikes ...
Sonakshi - But Why Mr Dixi .. Uh ... I Mean Dev ... U Know Everything About Me ?
Dev - No I Don't Know ... I Want The Details ...
Suddenly Kichhu Bhaiya Calls Sonakshi To Help Him Prepare For The Lunch ...
Sonakshi - Dev ... Kichhu Bhaiya Is Calling Me ... I'm Going ...
When She was About To Go ... He Pulled Her Back ...
Sonakshi - Dev ... Please Jane Dijiye Na ... Mein Yaha Job Bhi Karti Hu ...
Dev Chuckles And Lets Her Go ...
After Coming Out Of His Room ... She Starts Dancing Like Mad People And The Song Kuchh Toh Hua Hai From Kal Ho Na Ho Plays ...
And Same Is With Dev ...
After Some Mad - People - Like Dancing ... They Both Come Down And Dev Goes To His Office Waving A Bye To Sonakshi And she Also Waves Him A Bye ...

Precap - Everybody Will Play Antakshiri And When Radharani Will create A Scene Their ... Dev Will Defend Sonakshi And Ishwari Will Also Defend Her Even Mamaji Will ...

Sorry Guys ... Antakshiri Ni Daal Payi .. Chalo See U Tommorow Bye ... Please Do Comment And Review Because Guys This Time I'm Serious I'm Not Getting Enough Reviews And Without Them I'll Discontinue It ... So Please Review It !! I'm Not Confident That's Why I'm Asking U Guys To Review It .. Please Review It And Keep Reading !!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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You have done a great job dear
U present every episode so so beautifully by adding dialogues

I always enjoy to read ur post dear
Plz plz plz don't stop writing 😭 😭

I am enjoying ur writing every day.. If u won't write that's unfair dear
Plz continue ur writing... 😊
Edited by Ferdous_69 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

You have done a great job dear
U present every episode so so beautifully by adding dialogues

I always enjoy to read ur post dear
Plz plz plz don't stop writing 😭 😭

I am enjoying ur writing every day.. If u won't write that's unfair dear
Plz continue ur writing... 😊

Thank U ... Bas Mujhe 8 Comments Chahiye ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely FF..I want to read further..Plz do continue..Dont stop ..I eagerly wait for your post..You seem quite regular in writing ..Dont get demotivated .Do write about antakshri and want to read how dev defended
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: simplesweety1

Thank U ... Bas Mujhe 8 Comments Chahiye ...



U will surely get...don't stop writing dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Lovely Update.. 😊

thank u
Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice...update ur next part soon..

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