Masquerade (DevAkshi SS) Part 4 Page 12 (July 26th)

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Part 3

Fantastic !

Dev now having confidence and maybe its because of Miss Bose but indeed he showed his confidence well inviting her for a shower but what is that is he married ?

but then it would be impossible as she did mention its his first time so perhaps he was in a relation ...uff okay I'm just waiting for next update

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Please do PM me when you update again

Pretty Please ...

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Khusharni

@Khusharni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

OH gosh!! Is he married or engaged?! No Dev!! 😲😡

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Manu

@.scarlet.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Yay!! I see my name there :D

See all of you need to thank me...meri vajah se there'll be more parts 😆

But this is just her excuse she wants to write more xD Mera naam laga diya :p

Anywho coming to this part, you burned the screen of my laptop with so much hotness ☺️

And I loved it so much <3

Despite the fact that you're writing something like this for the first time( I guess) it was perfect :") :D So you must write more stuff like this xD 😉

That cliffie tho! -_-

So eager to read the next part NOW...but ik I'll have to wait :p

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Manu

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

wat

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dev is married????🤣

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

I AM HERE😎

OO LA LA!☺️

("We will need to burn off the breakfast" This line, I didn't know whether to blush or giggle. So I did both😆)

I personally don't know how writers write "mature" content like such without crossing the line, so babes you have done an amaziiing for displaying coitus (😆) without making it vulgar or cheap! For making it sensual and quite interesting!

I actually thought they were just fooling around, like spicing up the good ole sex life with a little bit of character play (? Like what is the word?). But I don't know what you have churning in your mind now, whatever it is, I am tuned in for moreee!

Hope your exams went well🤗

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Harshitha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Aaahhh ...kill me kill me kill me. I'm dead. That was so hot. Dev Dixit is the epitome of sexiness. Sigh...I'm hyperactive in my crush mode... again you managed to leave me giddy with your writing. I honestly crave for the next parts. I'm so glad you decided to continue it. Ring????? Bugger!!!!! Whats behind it? Is he kinda engaged or something???? Curious curious curious. Continue soon and love you for writing this am-azing story...