WhiteNoise thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#1
Hola fellow DevAkshians.I m back with another one of my rambling.It isn't very good but Bear it please.
Love Invalid
Love.What is love?? A four letter word.For some people it meant their life but for me it was nothing but a strange word.Strange because i never felt loved?? my family wasn't perfect as every child dreams, i never got to know what love was, until she came into my life.It wasn't like she changed my whole life or i fell for her at first sight.It was hate at first sight. An unknown smile formed at my lips
"Dev ,Lets go we will late??"
Bunty dragged me ,damn he's so hyper.We walked outside in the garden area.
So where was i ?? hmm Hate at first sight.I hated her, more than i ever hated anyone,maybe because she was better than me.I don't know what was between us but passion can be outrageously felt.Passion for hate.
After all the circumstances my hate for her gradually changed into an undying love but i was mistaken.I hurt her, made her life a living hell.Damn how insensitive i was??She wasn't the one step back, she gave it back to me, hurting me with the equal amount of pain.Her self respect and ambitions were on the top of her priority list.We fought a lot, a spark of fierceness always intact in our relationship.But i guess love wasn't made for me.
Now i know what i truly feel for her.Passion.It was the problem,We hated each other with a different level of passion while love ,i guess it wasn't so passionate.Maybe that's why she fell out of love but not hate.
Bunty and me were slowly walking towards the stage, his panic stricken a cause of my enjoyment.I am so sadistic.
Even after love we couldn't be together because apparently wewe were like those parallel lines which run together but never meet but what i didn't understood was parallel lines are always together,unlike tangents which meet only once, they can never be separated.I tried everything that was in my hand to get her back but she was a hell lot stubborn.
Bunty nudged me as everyone was looking at the entrance to see the bride slowly coming towards the stage, her dad softly embracing one of her hands.They came to the stage and her dad gave her hand in my hand.Yeah this was my marriage.With whom?? Sonakshi.
After a hell lot of troubles and apologies from my part she gave in.II understood one thing that i didn't love her but i am extremely devoted to her.Love can end but devotion can't just like hate.
Minister reading the vows and signalled us to repeat what he said, my eyes never leaving hers.
She always wanted a Christian style wedding just to dress up in a gown.Funny ,i know.A soft smile graced her features making me smile too.I didn't know what Minister was saying but my ears only focused on those soothing words
"You may kiss the bride"
I smashed my lips onto her, felling up their softness and warmth.
Our hate always overpowered over love.So love was always invalid for us.but devotion and affection can never be overpowered by anyone else.


How was it!!!
Hope you liked it!!
Not a very good piece of work but i guess maybe bearable
feel free to criticize me
Love
Anshi




Edited by SilverDreams - 9 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

20

Views

4.9k

Users

6

Likes

61

Frequent Posters

raksbasu thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Fabulously written and deeply thought😳
I just loved it😳
Flawless and perfect😳

When they were kissing, i was imagining Mami's face for a matter of fact🤣
Well written!

p.s. Actually, if i forget the names mentioned for a while, its too apt for my another fav couple...It will suit them too well really😳
WhiteNoise thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: raksbasu

Fabulously written and deeply thought😳
I just loved it😳
Flawless and perfect😳

When they were kissing, i was imagining Mami's face for a matter of fact🤣
Well written!

p.s. Actually, if i forget the names mentioned for a while, its too apt for my another fav couple...It will suit them too well really😳


Aww thank u..
Mami ,eee noo.She would be boiling with anger.
And whose ur fav couple,may I know??
Is it Sandhir, cause they fit well in this actually this was originally made for them only
Edited by SilverDreams - 9 years ago
raksbasu thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: SilverDreams


Aww thank u..
Mami ,eee noo.She would be boiling with anger.
And whose ur fav couple,may I know??
Is it Sandhir, cause they fit well in this actually this was originally made for them only


U're most welcome🤗
U've already said the couple name😳
Sandhir❤️ Did u post it there in shq forum? This one is so perfect for them
WhiteNoise thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: raksbasu


U're most welcome🤗
U've already said the couple name😳
Sandhir❤️ Did u post it there in shq forum? This one is so perfect for them


Nawww...
I was thinking to post it there but didn't
Adi_Ki_Zoya thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#6
It was beautiful 😳
Do write more
I loved it ❤️
raksbasu thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: SilverDreams


Nawww...
I was thinking to post it there but didn't


Kyun? Itne galat galat thoughts kyun😛?
WhiteNoise thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Anu_LoveRain

It was beautiful😳

Do write more
I loved it❤️


Thank u
WhiteNoise thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: raksbasu


Kyun? Itne galat galat thoughts kyun😛?


Ainvayi...
But ab soch rahi hu ki kar hi du
raksbasu thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#10
^^ Chalo mere sangat ka kuch toh asar hua🤣
Good thoughts coming into play😳

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".