Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated - Page 70

Still tears r rolling from my eyes..
U described it very beautifully...
Again a good piece of writing...
Waiting for next part

that was amazing and beautiful...

Originally posted by: libran13

Beautiful

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: ashwin8890

What should i say?

Dil jeet liya yrr!! Brilliant!!!!!! Beautifully penned, out of the world!! Cant describe anymore

Thanks dear and am glad you like it.😊

Originally posted by: dhk26

Sad part n I cried a lot... My mom passed last year on sep 19. Gonna b a year n we 3 sisters n dad did her past rites.. it so so so hard to hold yr parents stature on yr shoulder... but I believe that's the ultimate respect u can give it for everything u got from them.. ppl din liked the step but we were quite clear not to bother for that moments are only between u n yr loss...

Really liked the way you showed strong sona on cremention.. I have witnessed it n u got to be stronger than stone😭

I can understand your pain.. And sorry dear because of this once again I force you to remember the toughest part of your life.

Yeah I guess you are right- you need to stronger than stone 😭

Thanks for the comment.

Originally posted by: sinalfan1

God...I was literally choked while reading ths...may no child face such heartbreak of seeing their parents depart all of a sudden...such an emotional part mayu...let ur father's soul rest in peace as well

Sorry dear. Yeah true no one shld face it. But we are forced to face it.

Thanks for consoling words😊

Originally posted by: independent

Emotional and heart breaking update...

Don't know what to say...

Thanks Aaradhana

Something - listen speaks more than words.

so thank you

Originally posted by: Vancity_Ca

Very beautiful update Mayu...feeling sad now 😔

Sorry dear for disturbing the mood of everyone

And thanks for comment😊

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Well written part!!

Thanks😊