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Part-3

In Sonakshi's house
Elena:Neel thanks a lot for your help.
Neel:but iam feeling bad for me.because i think in this act,i will fell in love with her.she is beautiful.
Elena:but you are unlucky.she loves dev madly.
Sonakshi entered her house.
Elena:what happened to you.
Sonakshi:it is a small wound.
Sonakshi described the whole story.
Elena:apne pyar ki nishani hai ye chot
Sonakshi:shut up.kuch bhi
Neel was hearing their conversation.
Sonakshi:thanks a lot.without you it is not possible.
Neel:it's ok yaar
Sonakshi:so our plan-2is the dinner.the plan is on.i invited them.
Elena:great
Neel:i will go home and reach 8pm to pick you.
Sonakshi:thanks a lot.
Elena:sona,he not need your thanks.tum apne shadi ke baad apna beta ka naam neel rakh lena
Sonakshi:Elena you are unbelievable.
Neel:okay guys.iam leaving
Evening in Sonakshi's house
The other family members except dada and Elena was waiting for Sonakshi.others went to watch movie
Elena:i think she will wear a dress.but today she is taking so much time.
Dada:wait karte hai.we will find it soon .
The door was opened.dada and Elena was surprised.she wore a beautiful orange saree with match jewellery.
Elena:you are looking gorgeous.i think after seeing you dev will not take his eyes from you.
Neel entered there and he also appreciated sona.
Dada&Elena:best of luck
Sonakshi:thank you
Neel and Sonakshi reached the hotel
Dev and Natasha was already there.
(dev wore the orange shirt and Natasha wore a red dress)
After seeing Sonakshi dev was speechless.
Dev:miss bose
Natasha:you are looking beautiful.
Neel:hi dev and hi Natasha.nice to meet you
They entered the hotel.at that time Sonakshi lost her balance.
At that time dev balanced her.
Dev:miss bose.you are looking beautiful in saree.but it is not safe for you.because you don't know to balance it.
Sonakshi was at the zenith of happiness.
He complimented her beauty in a different way.
The manager of the hotel came to there
Manager:sir,you and your wife are looking beautiful in orange colour.rab ne bana di jodi
Dev:she is not my wife.(pointed towards Natasha)she is my fiancee.
Manager:sorry sir.but you were wore the same colour and was talking to each other.and i misunderstood it.
Dev:it's ok
Sonakshi's eyes were filled with tears.but she controlled it.
They were started their dinner.
Sonakshi:how was your day.
Neel:it was nice shona
Sonakshi:in which college you completed the law
Neel:in delhi
Sonakshi:nice
Natasha was talking about their bussiness.but dev was listening neel and Sonakshi's conversation.
Dev(in mind):i think he is not her real boy friend.they are acting.but why?
That time Neel served mushroom in Sonakshi's plate
Dev:miss bose had allergy to mushroom.
Sonakshi:it's ok Neel.
Neel:i think you know each other very well.
Natasha:ya they are good friends
They completed the dinner.
Sonakshi:Mr dixit we are leaving.good night Natasha.
Natasha:good night.
They returned from the hotel.Neel dropped Sonakshi.dev reached his house.
In dev's room
Dev:i don't like this neel.but why?i have to find out the reason
Dev(in phone):Teena,you know mr Neel malhotra.he is a lawyer.
Teena:no sir
Dev:i want his biodata and full history.
Teena:for what sir?is their any problem.
Dev:no Teena.please do it immediately.
Dev cut the call
He was trying to sleep.but when he close his eyes he only saw Sonakshi in beautiful orange saree.
In Sonakshi's house
Sonakshi was lost in dev's thoughts
Sonakshi:ap itne kanjoos hai.mai itne mehnat karke tayar hui.but ap mujhe compliment bhi teek se nahi kiya
Dev:ya.right.she was looking beautiful.but i didn't say a good word
Sonakshi:kya soch rahi hoon ap
Dev:tumhare bare mai
Dev(monologue):what happened to me.why her presence is affecting me.when she smile i also became happy.when she is in pain i also feel it.what happened to me...


Dev is fall in love with Sonakshi.but it is a unknown fact for him.but when will he realize it...

To be continued




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Originally posted by: JyotiBThakur

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Part 2 is lovely... Do continue.😊</font>

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: astha2409

second is also really nice... i hope too see more... good work... bilkul realistic tha second part...

Iam really happy after reading your reply.i will try to do my best

Originally posted by: sonisweety

Awesome one...👍🏼

Waiting for next...

Keep writing

Doing fantastic work...

Once again

Superbb👏

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From beginning you are supporting my work.thanks a lot

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Superb story saki 👏
Loved it
Update soon

Sujay.thanks a lot for your support

Originally posted by: devakshifan

really nice post... keep updating...

For your support thanks...

Now the story is becoming more n more interesting...👍🏼

Originally posted by: sonisweety

Now the story is becoming more n more interesting...👍🏼

After every part I am like waiting for next...

Kudos to u...

Its very good...

Waiting for next...

Soni.dear
Iam really happy that you the story.