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HI READERS , lets begin the enthralling journey of dis story dis story is different frm current track I DONT WANT TO GIVE MUCH INFO CUZ I WANT U PPL TO WAIT FR MY FF sona and dev are only characters remaining i created on my own hope u ppl lyk it pls give ur opinions i

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dat was a perfectly normal day wid nodng unusual .. me nd my frnds were in inorbit mall just shpng roaming around nd havin fun until I caught sum1 staring at me in admiration!!!! He was wearing a red tshirt nd blue denims ,he was so damn cute nd he had a charm in his face nd an innocent look nd his eyes were d most attractive in his face .. for a moment I wondered was he staring at me or was it sum1 else ,bt den he saw me lukin at him nd he smiled at me .. nw I knw he was starin at me .. I dnt knw y I felt a rush of happiness in my hrt I wanted to smile bak but I dint .. I lukd away nd after a while I turned bak again to c whether he's still der ,he was gone .. I laughed at myself wat am I even thinking .. so v moved on .

later after sometime v went up to d food court section to have our lunch .. v went upto a table to have our food wen I suddenly realised d guy who was lukin at me b4 was sitting wid his frnds at d table beside us , exactly at a view wer v both can c each other .. he lukd at me nd gave a wide smile nd I cudnt do anydng but smile bak to his cuteness nd I think he knew I ws blushing!!! I thought to myself wats dis .. I dont even know dat guy ,have seen him fr d 1st time bt I felt gud wen he was staring at me nd now im blushing wen hes smilin at me .. dis sounded absolutely ridiculous nd stupid but dis was hpng in real .. well I ws lost in all these thoughts wen suddenly my frnds started at me hey look look ...to my surprise d same guy got up frm his seat nd was walking towards me , I mean us .. all my frnds were like hes comin here but fr whom ? none of dem saw him staring at me or me smilin bak at him .. nd I behaved as if I dint know anydng!!!!! He walked straight to me .. my heart was beating faster dan it usually does .. I felt a lite nervousness .. he stopped infront of me, kneeled down and askd me "wud u like to have a coffe wid me" ... I was shocked ,surprised nd dumbstruck .. nd b4 I even reacted ... he said in a low voice pls dnt mind I was dared to ask u fr it .. u dnt have to reply anydng!!! I just smiled nd I knew i ws blushing but ws trying so hard dat he doesn't notice dat. But I thnk he did notice dat cos he smiled nd said thank u fr not slapping in my face "he was being funny", I gave a wide smile my face was glowing .. den he went bak to his frnds..

now after all dis my frnds were literally interrogating me wid so many qs, like wats gng on huh? I thnk he likes u, do u like him? , if not y r u blushing nd all sorts of stupid qs , nd I ws like no v dont even know each other but hes cute .. nd all my frnds in chorus did d aaawww thng nd he heard it ... I ws trying so hard to calm dem down but I ws enjoying It too

we had our lunch nd in btw der was a lot of starin gng on frm his side though I pretended I wasn't lukin. Dey finished der lunch nd dey were gone .. my face stopped glowing nw.. after a while v also finished our lunch nd we started to leave wen suddenly a unfamiliar male voice cald out my name " Sona" nd my heart skipped a beat!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice nice! Continue soon.. wanna know what happens next!
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Originally posted by: .GirlNextDoor.

Nice nice! Continue soon.. wanna know what happens next!


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Who might me the guy????
You got me to thinking😕
Continue soon
Your story is different Nd interesting
Pm me when you update

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Originally posted by: luvflicksgirl

Who might me the guy????

You got me to thinking😕
Continue soon
Your story is different Nd interesting
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Nice Start..update soon 😊


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Part2
I turned back, it was him!!!!!!!!!! but how did he know my name ? I was surprised ,but for the 1st time my name sounded so nice to me . he came to me and the first words I spoke to him were "how do you know my name?" he laughed and said "your friends were shouting out your name so loud it was obvious. I dint reply waiting for him to say something more and he did !! he said "I like your name though ,it made me smile again then he said "did I tell you, you have a very cute smile" and I was blushing, my cheeks were all pink , I just couldn't resist smiling at what he said . its not like he was the 1st person who said that to me but this time it felt something special. then I asked where are your friends so he said "they are waiting for me in the games section. I had a question mark all over my face. So he said " I came back to talk to you cos I went away without saying bye" I smiled again, and asked did they really dare you to do that? He laughed again and said" yeah they did but they told me to go to the prettiest girl you can see around and ask her for coffee "I smiled and said was that a compliment?" ( well I know what he meant but I wanted to ask ) he said thats the fact , atleast I feel that
We stood there I silence for a while, then he said"can I ask you a question" I replied "yeah sure", then he said "you shouldn't get angry" I laughed and said "ok". again in a low voice he asked me "would you have said yes if I asked you that question for real" my heart skipped a beat again, I was smiling, blushing oh god!! I just could'nt stop feeling so good about myself now. I thought for a second and replied "well it would depend on how much I know you " , but I was still smiling. He said " I thought so too" with a smile , he was such a charmer .then he said " I gotta go now, it was really nice talking to you , you really made my day special" I said "same here" . well may be he dint expect this answer from me he looked surprised and very happy . he bid gud bye and went off.
I was looking at him rather staring at him till he was out of my sight, I wondered to myself why did I look at him till he was out of my sight? May be I dint want him to leave? Or may be I wanted him to stay for a little more time. Whatever that was I knew that this person made my day too a really special one. the rest of the day I was with my friends but my mind was filled with his thoughts, I know that we dint know each other at all ,this was the 1st time we met , infact the 1st time we even saw each other, there was definitely no possibility that we'll meet again or anything but he made me feel special in those few moments we shared he made me feel beautiful and special . So my friends and me we were done with all our fun there and when we were heading back home in our car one of my friends arohi bought up this topic again and she was like "did u ask his name? and I DINT" , and I havent realised this until she asked me this question. he knows my name but I dint even ask him his, OH GOD!!! Wat did I do????? we had a conversation , we talked for a while but why dint I ask his name?? I felt so stupid of myself for not asking him and so did my frnds!! All the happiness and all those thoughts just blew away with this I had lost my only chance to know him or atleast try to find him. this was sooo not happening!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waow...👏
Hahaha she forgot to ask his name...
He and his dares I tell you...
Superb update dear...

Thanks a lot for your pm...
Do cont soon

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Originally posted by: luvflicksgirl

Waow...👏

Hahaha she forgot to ask his name...
He and his dares I tell you...
Superb update dear...

Thanks a lot for your pm...
Do cont soon

Luv
Sri


thnks sri vl update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice, ur a great writer!
Update soon😊

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