devakshi SS ---kuch toh hua hai---{last part updated, page 7}[2-6-16]

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hi i am a new member of this forum
i am writing a fanfiction for the first time hope you all will love it
plz do comment and suggest should i continue or drop it
sorry for the mistakes
KUCH TOH HUA HAI
NOTE-Dev has realised his feelings towords sonakshi.

sona was standing in the kitchen, and she was boiling milk but she was lost in her thoughts. she was thinking about dev and natasha's relation and was boiling with anger. And suddenly someone's voice entered in her ear breaking her train of thought
dev(came running towards sona)-"miss bose dhyan kahan h aap ka(switching off the gas)" but few drops of boiled milk fell on the hands of sona
sona-"aaah" dev immediately took her hand in his hand
dev-"main notice kr raha hun kuch dino se ki aap ajeeb hi behave kr ri h"and blowing air on her hand
and sona was looking at him and suddenly she remembered about natasha and she took her hand from his and dev was just looking at her
sona-"main khud kar lungi"
dev-"main kar deta hun" and tried to take her hand
sona-"aap shayad bahut free hai" said angrily
dev-"what"
sona-"a" but before she could complete kichu intruppted them
kichu-"bhaiya ji Natasha madam aai hai"
dev-"thik hai unko baithao,main aata hun" kichu left
sona-"lijye aapka zaroori kaam aa gya" and dev went towords fridge and took out ice pack and gave it to sona
dev-"yeh lijeye laga lijyega"
sona-"jaiye aapki mehmaan aai hai"
dev-"ok main jaata hun par aap yeh laga lijyega" and went smilingly because he understood why she was behaving like this and mainly after the entry of Natasha in their life
dev entered in the hall where Natasha,Ishwari,radha rani where sitting and chatting
dev-"good evening,miss gujral" and in the mean time sona entered the dining area where their talks were quite audible
Natasha-"good evening dev, waise main aapse kuch kahun"
dev-"ji boliye "
Natasha-"aap mujhe natasha keh kar bulaya kijiye,i will like it"
dev(looked at sona and then said slightly loudly so that it is audible to sona)-"if you will like ( pressuring on it )it then main aapko natasha keh kar hi bulaunga" and then saw the angry expression of sona and smiled.after that ishwari and radha rani went from there and both natasha and dev started their business talk.

if you all will like it then i will continue it
thank you for reading

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Posted: 9 years ago
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welcome to the forum dear. 🤗
and your os is amazing. very cute and lovely. continue soon.😛
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Welcum to d forum n it is really nice so I think u shud continue..
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Very good start... Plz continue dear 😊
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Welcome to the forum dear.
Nice os, do continue.
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really thnxx 2 all fr the comments😳
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Firstly welcome to the forum and 2ndly... Post the next update as soon as possible... I cant wait to find out how dev confesses his love to sona
And PM me...
Luv
Sri😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_writer

hi i am a new member of this forum

i am writing a fanfiction for the first time hope you all will love it
plz do comment and suggest should i continue or drop it
sorry for the mistakes
KUCH TOH HUA HAI
NOTE-Dev has realised his feelings towords sonakshi.

sona was standing in the kitchen, and she was boiling milk but she was lost in her thoughts. she was thinking about dev and natasha's relation and was boiling with anger. And suddenly someone's voice entered in her ear breaking her train of thought
dev(came running towards sona)-"miss bose dhyan kahan h aap ka(switching off the gas)" but few drops of boiled milk fell on the hands of sona
sona-"aaah" dev immediately took her hand in his hand
dev-"main notice kr raha hun kuch dino se ki aap ajeeb hi behave kr ri h"and blowing air on her hand
and sona was looking at him and suddenly she remembered about natasha and she took her hand from his and dev was just looking at her
sona-"main khud kar lungi"
dev-"main kar deta hun" and tried to take her hand
sona-"aap shayad bahut free hai" said angrily
dev-"what"
sona-"a" but before she could complete kichu intruppted them
kichu-"bhaiya ji Natasha madam aai hai"
dev-"thik hai unko baithao,main aata hun" kichu left
sona-"lijye aapka zaroori kaam aa gya" and dev went towords fridge and took out ice pack and gave it to sona
dev-"yeh lijeye laga lijyega"
sona-"jaiye aapki mehmaan aai hai"
dev-"ok main jaata hun par aap yeh laga lijyega" and went smilingly because he understood why she was behaving like this and mainly after the entry of Natasha in their life
dev entered in the hall where Natasha,Ishwari,radha rani where sitting and chatting
dev-"good evening,miss gujral" and in the mean time sona entered the dining area where their talks were quite audible
Natasha-"good evening dev, waise main aapse kuch kahun"
dev-"ji boliye "
Natasha-"aap mujhe natasha keh kar bulaya kijiye,i will like it"
dev(looked at sona and then said slightly loudly so that it is audible to sona)-"if you will like ( pressuring on it )it then main aapko natasha keh kar hi bulaunga" and then saw the angry expression of sona and smiled.after that ishwari and radha rani went from there and both natasha and dev started their business talk.

if you all will like it then i will continue it
thank you for reading


small suggestion. plz edit ur title. add in your title the word OS. only then members could easily find and read ur beautiful os.😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That's interesting update, Dev knows and is teasing and testing Sona
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's amazing and am waiting for your next update😊

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