devakshi SS ---kuch toh hua hai---{last part updated, page 7}[2-6-16] - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Lovely story dear, continue soon!!
Also just a small suggestion, when you update a new part, update the title with the date and page. This way nobody will miss your lovely story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
I read it in one go... and its awesome ❤️
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Can't wait for the date and proposal 😳
Thanks for the pm honey bunch...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
read it all in one go so cute story vry lvly plz cont soon n pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Sooo cute...I m loving it plz update soon waiting for ur update...plzzz update soon 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
First of all a big sorry for late update
here is last part of this os turned ss
sorry for the mistakes

LAST PART

Around 8 pm

A car stopped outside sona's house and handsome hunk Dev in black suit came outside the car and stand there supporting his back on the car and waited for his lady Sonakshi and after some time he called sona and sona was doing her last minute touch up and her phone ringed and seeing the name flashed brought a sweet smile and deep blush on her cheeks

Sona-"hello"

Dev-"waiting for you outside, come soon" and he cut the call before sona can reply anything and then sona checked herself for the last time and came outside her home and Dev saw her and was mesmerized by seeing her and was not able to blink his eyes and sona was blushing deeply due to his constant gaze and then sona came near him

Sona(softly)-"chalen??" She said looking down which brought dev out of his thoughts but he just managed himself to say

Dev-"hmmm" and proceeded to open door for sona and sona sat inside and dev was about to go but stopped leaned little towards sona which makes sona's heart beat go fast and then dev slowly stretched the seat belt and tied it and dev started coming close to sona which leads to fasten of heart beat then earlier and due to which she closed her eyes but she could feel breath of dev near her neck

Dev-"you are looking stunning" whispered in the ear of sona and a smile appeared on sona's lips but still she didn't open her eyes and seeing this dev smiled

Dev-"ab aap apni aankhen khol saktin hai" and closed the door of the car and then went to drive and at last reached the destination and during their journey no one speak a single word, they were just stealing glances of each other.

The place they reached was totally dark and dev stepped out of the car and went to open the door of the car for sona and then forwarded his hand to her and she slowly slides her hand in his and then she came out. And then dev took sona to that place and as soon as sona took her first step inside the place, a bulb lighten up and soon with each increasing steps of sona the place was becoming more and more brighter. Sona was happy seeing this and may be she also got what dev was trying to convey her but she turned to dev with a curiosity filled eyes. Dev understood what sona want to know and just he get little more closer to sona

Dev-" Sonakshi jaise yahan tumhare har ek bhadte kadam ke sath yahan roshni badhti gyi waise hi jabse tum aayi ho, meri zindagi mein bhi roshni badhti gyi hai" sona was overwhelmed by listening all this and was able to feel the dept of each and every word spoken by dev and dev was looking at her lovingly and sone was blushing and smiling. sona was about to say something but was interrupted by dev

Dev-"pehle dinner kar len" and took sona towards a round table which was decorated very beautifully for two. The table was served with all sona's favourite dishes and seeing this sona smiled. Dev took out the chair for sona and sona sat on it and after that dev took his place. They started their dinner and just looking at each other, it was like that their eyes were expressing each and every thing they want to say to each other and they were enjoying the silence. And after sometime

Sona-"mr. Dixit" and dev made a irritated face and stood up and seeing dev sona also stood up and then dev went towards sona

Dev(in low voice)-"don't spoil the mood, aaj din toh dev keh kar bulao" and listening to this sona smiled and blushed hard

Sona-"ok" and dev smiled and then dev forwarded his hand towards her

Dev-"may I have the pleasure to dance with you" and in response to this sona slided her palm and nodded and the song started

Dev slided his hand against her waist and pulled her little closer and sona slided her one hand on dev's shoulder and another one on dev's hand and due to dev's touch a current ran through her body and sona closed and slowly opened her eyes and found dev smiling to her

Janam janam janam saath chalna yunhi
Kasam tumhe kasam aake milna yahin
Ek jaan hai bhale do badan ho judaa
Meri hoke humesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida

They danced and soon they were totally lost in each other' s eyes, they were having a perfect eye lock.

Meri subah ho tumhi aur tumhi shaam ho
Tum dard ho tum hi aaraam ho
Meri duaaon se aati hai bas ye sadaa
Meri hoke humesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida

Aha ha ha o...

Dev pulled sona more closer such that her head was resting on his shoulder and suddenly she said

Sona-"dev" and dev smiled broadly after listening his from her mouth

Dev-"hmmm"

Sona-"KUCH TOH HUA HAI" and listening to this dev smiled and then dev rolled sona away from him and then again pulledger towards him such that sona's back rested on dev's front side

Dev(whispered)-"i have fallen for you sonakshi" sona blushed deeply and closed her eyes to save each and every moment within her

Meri hoke humesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna Alvida...

Dev-"i love you"

Teri baahon mein hai mere dono jahaan
Tu rahe jidhar meri jannat wahin
Jal rahi agan hai jo ye do tarfa
Na bujhe kabhi meri mannat yahi
Tu meri aarzu, main teri aashiqui
Tu meri shayari, main teri mausiqi

And in response to this, she turned and hugged dev and after some moment she slowly reached his ears

Sona-"i...love you too dev" and hugged him again and they were lost in each other's embrace

Talab talab talab bas teri hai mujhe
Nason mein tu nasha banke ghulna yunhi
Meri mohabbat ka karna tu haq ye adaa
Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna Alvida...

Meri subah ho tumhi aur tumhi shaam ho
Tum dard ho, tum hi aaraam ho
Meri duaaon se aati hai bas ye sadaa
Meri hoke humesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna Alvida...

Aa... alvida..
O... na na..

And after that they broke the hug and stand still looking at each other and after sometime

Sona-"dev kal jo vo sab tha vo sab" and dev understood what she wanted to know

Dev-"vo sab tumhe jalane ke liye" and made a puppy face and sona gave him a fake angry look

Dev-"tum naraz ho"

Sona-"haan thoda"

Dev-"just give me one min." and soon again whole place went dark and only a spotlight fall on sonakshi and sona started looking here and there and suudenly she saw something which made her super happy. Dev was on his knees with a very beautiful diamond ring in his hand

Dev-"will you marry me??" but sona didn't replyed and dev's expression changed into worried one. He already knew that the answer is yes but why she is taking soo much time and suddenly his expression changed in happy as soon as sona slightly nodded her head and dev slowly took her hand and slided the ring in her finger and stood up and hugged each other.

With this they lived happily ever after...

i hope u all like it
and a request to all the reader plzz do comment
and plzz tell people about this os turned ss.

a great thank you to all for reading and giving ur time to this and also thanks for encouraging me.😊😊
Edited by angel_writer - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Beautiful

Simple loving it

Awww last was so cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
amazing 👏
loved it😳
loved the sissies n their plan😃😆😉
dev is such a cutie pie...😳😳
last part was indeed mesmerizing 😳
do write more 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Lovely such a cute story...read all the remainibg parts in one go ...I thought it was OS and had just read the first part...glad u continued ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Wow! I liked the way you ended.. "with this they lived happily ever after!"
we need that these days!

Thank you! 😳 🤗

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