Devakshi OS-a new beginning part 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi All, am new to this forum and I have been reading all lovely posts, OS and links you have been sharing. The OS especially have been beautiful and actually vent what as viewers we would like to see.

I have been a big fan of Devakshi and this is what I have penned down.I had thought of this sequence quite some time back even before the accident and couldn't resist reading all your lovely OS.

She had not come to work today. Dev wondered why. She had not informed him also that she was taking leave. That was so unlike her. Dr Sonakshi Bose. She was his moms nutritionist and she was excellent in her work.Yes he remembered now that they had not started off well..but seeing his moms recovery over the months he regretted the fights and the past. She was so genuine, sweet at times to his family. She also was breath taking beautiful... And stubborn as hell. Tina was right she was just like him. He couldn't mark Dr Bose s behaviour as absurd now that he recognised she was like him. He smiled.

But why hadn't she informed him or ma he thought while sipping his 2nd coffee. She never did like this before. 'Is she okay ' he thought. 'Should I message and check. Yes There is nothing wrong in a boss wanting to check his employees work absence.' He smirked to find satisfied answers to his growing impatience and creazy unknown feelings.

He typed...' Hi heard you were on leave. Hope all is okay. Tc' ...He contemplated for 2 more secs and then clicked on sent. There he had done it. Now he had to wait. Mr. Dev Dixit had to wait. He started to pace in his room in his grey tracks and black tee and slightly undone hair. He looked rugged handsome.

It was 10.15. She hadn't responded yet. 'Damn it Dr.' Why...why hasn't she replied. It was bothering him so much. 'Nikki..yes Nikhi might know. Let me ask her.'

"Nikhi. ...Nikki" Nikki jumped to her feet...Bhaiyya sounded angry...'what did I do now...' She came running upstairs..."yes Bhaiyya". " Nikki did Sona...(pause and correction)...ummm Well did u talk to Dr Bose today??" "Umm...no...she hadn't come today and..haan yes...I had sent her Siddhu baby's images for which she hasn't responded though." Dev gave her angry looks" hmmm...kitni baar kaha hai I dnt like this siddhu dialogues. Jao padhai karo." Nikki felt sad and thought that she can get an earful for anything & nothing...she left.

'I must check on Sona. Something is wrong. ' His call to Sonakshi goes unanswered. 'What the hell... ' Dev gets really angry and worried too.

At Sonakshi s house.
Sona is on bed wid fever. She is weak and feels sick. She remembered her mom and dada telling her not to stay alone and that they would cancel their plans to visit their relatives. She had forced them to go as she thinks she was really okay. She also wanted to be alone for sometime. But now she has started to loose it. She needs to call dada and tell him to take her to doc.

She smhow grabed her phone and dialed. What she has not realised is she has dialed last no which was Dev s.

Dev was startled as his phone rang. 'Ohh thank god. Finally she called.' He picks up.. "Hi Miss Bose. I hope all is... " Sona cuts him "Dada ... (Pause)... M nt feeling...(Caughs)... Cm bk..." Phone gets cut. "Miss Bose... Miss boseee... SONAA... Helloo... " ... 'Ohh god'

Sona here sees her battey is dead. She doesnt have strength to get up and plug in. She stays in bed.

Dev feels helpless and is paranoid... Calls her again to hear switched off tone. He curses in his mind. He calls Saurabh whoes phone comes unavailable. He cant hold any longer and decides to visit her.

Dev reaches at Sona s House..

He rings doorbell once... Twice...
Sona gathers courage and makes her way to door thinking finally her brother came. She thinks she is going to faint but manages to open the door smhow. Sona faints... Dev catches her in time... "Miss Bose... Hey... Hey... Sonakshi... Ohh god... Aap ko toh kafi bukhar hain... Sonakshi open your eyes please... "

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krystle123 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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first, hearty welcome to this forum dear 🤗
and coming to ur os, its really fantastic and very well written👏
plz continue soon yaar.😛
Shree1005 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii... Loved it...!!! Continue soon
sj_qh_kabhi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome concept
Loved it
Dev will take care of her now
So excited to read more
Update soon
JyotiBThakur thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to the forum dear...🤗
And awww what a beautiful OS it is... Loved it.👏 Please keep writing.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dev is concerned for Sonakshi
Amazing
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dev's concern for sonakshi was great!!
Cont soon
JazzyM thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A new beginning it is,,,,, for the writer and characters 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey, welcome to the forum... Nd haan don't leave us like that 😭 😭 .. I mean plz continue OS nd upload next part soon .. . Waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg u have to cont... And u must pm me...
Wonderfully written

Luv
Sri

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