Devakshi OS - The perfect revenge by Dr. Bose

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jasw

@jasw

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Absolutely awesome! Just loved Sona's revenge!😃

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Mohi99

@Mohi99

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Very intellectually written... Superb OS... Never thought about this... Absolute... ''

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Wow :)

Awesome OS :)

Loved it :)

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randommusings

@randommusings

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Mohi99
Very intellectually written... Superb OS... Never thought about this... Absolute... ''

Thanks dear... Sonakshi's character is such a realistic one and I was eagerly waiting for the strong, bold Sona to come back.

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@Coffee_Chips

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Such a clean bowled update. I wish you ended it in a way they would get together. But this OS was really nice... Hope you would continue writing more... Do pm me if you are 😊

Edited by SewwandiVB - 9 years ago

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Srijanee

@luvflicksgirl

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Such wonderfully imagined. I hope sona does the same in the show.

Next time u write anything plz pm me😃😳

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randommusings

@randommusings

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: luvflicksgirl
Such wonderfully imagined. I hope sona does the same in the show.
Next time u write anything plz pm me😃😳

Thanks dear...though I wrote it a week back, story seems appropriate to current episodes.

Do read thru my first OS - Love the present moment, future can wait

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4622870

Edited by randommusings - 9 years ago

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adyaa

@adyaa

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

So beautiful ,
The last line sums it all up .
Dev will take time to come up with his feelings in the show as well , but Ik at the end of the day it's gonna be worth the wait .
I simply loved it
Pls pm me if u write something in the future

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randommusings

@randommusings

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: AdyaXoxo
So beautiful ,
The last line sums it all up .
Dev will take time to come up with his feelings in the show as well , but Ik at the end of the day it's gonna be worth the wait .
I simply loved it
Pls pm me if u write something in the future

Thanks dear. It would be great to see how Dev's would realize his feelings. Hope its shown gradually.