OS: Doctor to doormat!! Part2 added in 1st post

melovesja

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Dear your writing is like magic which connect me to this unknown characters. I just know abt this show going on but plot I found out on net. Your flawless writing throughout hold me either you write ff or os. Loved it.😊 just in one shots we can understand their characters if we didn't read the plot also. Enjoyed every bitt of it. ⭐️

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sharmacatty
My my here u are replying comments too😲

Haa 😡😡😡

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Heya🤗

I read the os,though I don't know even about leads of this show. I tried to imagine jo-ja but couldn't.😛

For jalal u write somewhat magically that we could imagine Rajat, but for this hero, jo jitna deserve karta h wese he likhenga na😆

Thanks to avi that I get to know the name of leads and their profession, as I started reading I get to know the situation better and u have written this beautifully.❤️

I enjoyed reading this and was smiling at few parts😃

In this os too you added humor, which I liked about your marvelous writing the most⭐️

but frankly, mujhe acha ni laga apne ye os likha

Come back to JA forum and our sweet home, PBD❤️

else your break will break our hearts💔🥺

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Whatever show... Whoever lead... I just love your plot.. ❤️

"When you go to someone for your need, you go with respect. But when the same someone comes to you to cater your needs, you show attitude." 👏👏👏👏 Wow! What a line!! Hats off to you.. But one thing... I totally got the glance of the show from your OS without even watching the show. 😛 You just nailed it and as usual I just loved it. ❤️

But don't dare to write further without inform us😡😡😡

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Kalgi22
Haa 😡😡😡

Kal u too here😆🤗

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Kalgi22
Whatever show... Whoever lead... I just love your plot.. ❤️

"When you go to someone for your need, you go with respect. But when the same someone comes to you to cater your needs, you show attitude." 👏👏👏👏 Wow! What a line!! Hats off to you.. But one thing... I totally got the glance of the show from your OS without even watching the show. 😛 You just nailed it and as usual I just loved it. ❤️

But don't dare to write further without inform us😡😡😡

Exactly!!

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 9 years ago

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